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话题写作（六）学习提高【话题点睛】针对的话题主要关于课堂学习方式与方法、课堂学习情况的评价、课外学习与提升等方面。主要涉及描述学校学习情况、帮助同学解决学习问题、通过阅读或其他方式进行自我提升等方面。小组合作是一种重要的课堂学习方式。请你根据以下要点,以“StudyinginGroups”为题,用英语写一篇短文。[要点提示](1)Advantages:improvetheabilitytoremembersomething,learntogetalongwithothers,encourageoneanother,savetime;(2)Experience:anunforgettableexperienceofstudyingingroups;(3)Youropinions.典例分析[要求](1)词数:不少于80(短文的首句已给出,不计入总词数);(2)要点提示均须涉及,可适当增加内容;(3)字迹工整,卷面整洁,文意连贯,语言流畅;(4)不用真实姓名、校名、地名。StudyinginGroupsItisveryimportantforustostudyingroups.【思路点拨】1.要点提炼:主题是描述小组合作学习。共有3个要点:(1)描述小组合作学习的优点;(2)叙述小组合作学习的经历;(3)表达对小组合作学习的一些观点。2.确定时态:一般现在时和一般过去时。3.确定人称:第一人称。【写作架构】【基础写作】Ⅰ.写主干句(根据所给提示补全下列各句。)1.它确实帮助我对所学知识有更好的理解。(haveabetterunderstandingof…)Itreallyhelpsmehavea.2.她鼓励我勇敢地和我的同学交流。(encouragesb.todosth.)Shememyclassmatesbravely.3.我可以很快地找到解决问题的方法。(findout;dealwith)Icouldquicklythetotheproblems.betterunderstandingofwhatI'velearnedencouragedtocommunicatewithfindoutwaysdealwith4.第一次我自己完成了英语作业。(byoneself)ImyEnglishhomework.5.在同学的帮助下,我更加自信。(withone'shelp),Igetmoreconfidence.6.知识来源于交流和质疑。(comefrom)Knowledgecommunicatingand.finishedbymyselfforthefirsttimeWithmyclassmates'helpcomesfromquestioningⅡ.句子升格(按括号中的要求改写句子。)1.Wecanlearntogetalongwellwithothers.Wecanalsoencourageoneanother.(改为并列句)2.Studyingingroupssavestime.Studyingonone'sownwastestime.(用比较级进行对比)3.ButIwasveryshy.Icouldnotdoitlikewhatshetoldme.(用too…to…改写句子)Wecanlearntogetalongwellwithothersandencourageoneanother.Studyingingroupssavesmoretimethanstudyingonone'sown.ButIwastooshytodoitlikewhatshetoldme.4.Ididnotunderstandanyquestions.Theycouldgivemesomeadvice.(改为含时间状语从句的句子)5.Iwasexcited.(改为感叹句)6.Withthehelpofmyclassmates,Ihadmoreconfidencetostudyanddidn'tworryaboutEnglishanymore.(改为强调句,强调withthehelpofmyclassmates)WhenIdidnotunderstandanyquestions,theycouldgivemesomeadvice.HowexcitedIwas!It'swiththehelpofmyclassmatesthatIhadmoreconfidencetostudyanddidn'tworryaboutEnglishanymore.【连句成文】StudyinginGroupsItisveryimportantforustostudyingroups.First,wecanimproveourabilitytoremembersome-thing.Second,wecanlearntogetalongwellwithothersandencourageoneanother.What'smore,studyingingroupssavesmoretimethanstudyingonone'sown.Lastbutnotleast,itreallyhelpsmehaveabetterunderstandingofwhatI'velearned.IstillrememberthatwhenIwasinGrade8,myEnglishwasverypoor.Ihadareallyhardtimewithit.Onceinclass,theEnglishteacheraskedustodiscussanissuewithoneanother.ButIwastooshytodoit.Thensheencouragedmetocommunicatewithmyclassmatesbravely.Itookadeepbreathtofaceit.WhenIdidnotunderstandanyquestions,theycouldgivemesomeadvice.Icouldquicklyfindoutthewaystodealwiththeproblems.Afterthat,IfeltveryrelaxedandaskedmyclassmatesalotofquestionsaboutEnglish.Atlast,IfinishedmyEnglishhomeworkbymyselfforthefirsttime.HowexcitedIwas!It'swiththehelpofmyclassmatesthatIhadmoreconfidencetostudy.Studyingingroupsalsogivesmemorechancestoimprovemyselfinmanyways.Knowledgecomesfromcommunicatingandquestioning.【参考谚语】1.Practicemakesperfect.熟能生巧。2.Nopain,nogain.不劳则无获。3.Thereisnoroyalroadtolearning.学问之道无捷径。4.Itisnevertoooldtolearn.活到老,学到老。拓展积累【亮点句型】导入主题句1.Asagoodlearner,weshouldhavegoodhabitsandwaysoflearning.2.Withthedevelopmentofsociety,it'sourdutytostudy.3.Thoughwearemiddleschoolstudents,weneedtoequipourselveswithknowledge.4.Whatwelearntodaywilldecidewhatwewillbecometomorrow.文章发展、过渡句1.Firstofall,weneedtogetreadyforourlessonsbeforeclass.2.Butthat'stheproblem“Howcanwelearnitwell?”3.What'smore,ifwehaveproblems,we'dbetteraskothersforhelp.4.Stepbystep,Imadegreatprogressinmystudy.文章结尾句1.Inaword,onlywhenyoudevelopinterestinstudyingcanyoustudywell.2.Practicemakesperfect.Aslongaswepractisespeakingmore,wearesuretomakegreatprogress.3.Inmyopinion,weshouldkeepworkinghardtomakeabrightfuture.A[2019·宿迁]某软件公司为了开发一款适合中学生在课后学习英语的app,邀请你一起参与设计。请根据下文提示,用英语向该公司介绍你的构想。实战演练名称HappyEnglishLearning内容英语类的新闻、电影、歌曲、游戏等好处1.便于和同学一起学习;2.帮助学生扩大词汇量;3.有利于提高英语听力;4.……(自主发挥,至少一点)其他方面……(自主发挥,至少一点)[注意](1)词数:90左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;(2)文中不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等。Hereismydesignforthenewapp.Onepossibleversion:Hereismydesignforthenewapp.ItisnamedHappyEnglishLearning.ThisappincludesEnglishnews,Englishmovies,Englishsongs,Englishgamesandsoon.Itcanmakeiteasyforstudentstostudytogether.ItistruethatvocabularyisveryimportantinEnglishstudy.StudentscanenlargetheirEnglishvocabularybyusingthisapp.TheirEnglishlisteningskillscanbegreatlyimproved.TheycanalsopracticetheirspokenEnglishbysingingEnglishsongsandwatchingEnglishfilms.Inaword,studentscanhavefunlearningEnglishbyusingthisapp.Ithinkthenewappshouldbesuitableforstudentsofdifferentages.B假如你是李华,你的美国朋友Jeff向你了解你校的课堂教学形式。请你根据提示内容,用英语给他写一封电子邮件,并谈谈你的感受。[要点提示](1)我们的课堂是自由开放、生动有趣的;(2)我们在课堂上经常讲故事、做游戏;(3)老师在课堂上经常使用电脑让我们听音乐、看录像等,使我们学到更多知识;(4)在课堂上,老师给我们足够的时间进行自主学习和自由讨论;(5)我们有更多的机会展示自我。[要求](1)邮件须包含要点提示中的所有信息(不要逐字翻译),并在此基础上适当发挥;(2)词数:80左右(短文开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。[参考词汇]studyandthinkforoneself,abilityofindependentstudy,discussingroupsfreely,show/expressoneselfDearJeff,I'mgladtoreceiveyourletterandI'dliketotellyousomethingabouthowwestudyinclass.Yours,LiHuaOnepossibleversion:DearJeff,I'mgladtoreceiveyourletterandI'dliketotellyousomethingabouth