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话题写作（九）情感表达【话题点睛】话题来源于学生日常生活中对某件事情的经历及感受,常见的情感类表达有爱、快乐、微笑、幸福、痛苦和烦恼等。每个人生活中都要面对各种各样的困难。该怎样缓解自己的压力呢?请你以“LessPressure,BetterLife”为题,根据下表内容写一篇演讲稿。典例分析Stress人们会因困难觉得失望、疲惫或者忧伤,承受着巨大的压力Waystorelax改变你的想法想一想你最喜欢的人或事而不是想那些麻烦你还可以这样做听音乐、唱歌、锻炼等,这些都能让你高兴起来寻求帮助,和父母、老师或朋友多沟通Mypoints耐心一点儿。其实困难也许并不可怕,相信我们的生活会更美好[要求](1)不要逐字逐句翻译,可适当发挥;(2)语句通顺、语意连贯;(3)词数:100左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。[参考词汇]undermuchpressure,dealwith,changeone'smind,thinkabout,insteadof,cheerup,forhelp,justneedtoLessPressure,BetterLifeHello,boysandgirls!Thankyouforyourcomingtoday.I'mverygladthatallofyouarefullofhopeforthefuture.That'sall.Thankyou.【思路点拨】1.要点提炼:主题是讲面对压力,如何来处理。文章主要有三个要点:(1)压力概述;(2)减压措施;(3)自己的观点。2.确定时态:一般现在时。3.确定人称:第三人称,第一人称。【写作架构】【基础写作】Ⅰ.写主干句(根据所给提示补全下列各句。)1.我们应该尽力采取一些措施去处理它。(trytodosth.)Weshouldtodealwithit.2.我们可以改变我们的想法。(changeone'smind)Wecan.3.想一想你最喜欢的人或事而不是那些麻烦。(insteadof)yourfavouritepeopleorthings.trytotakesomemeasureschangeourmindsThinkaboutinsteadofthosetroubles4.我们可以参加更多的活动,例如音乐俱乐部和足球队。(suchas)Wecantakepartinmoreactivities,andthefootballteam.5.我们可以尽可能多地发现机会去和别人交流。(as…as…)Wecanfindasmanycommunicatewithothers.suchasthemusicclubopportunitiesaspossibletoⅡ.句子升格(按括号中的要求改写句子。)1.Somestudentsstudyveryhard.Theyarestillpoorintheirstudies.(用though改写句子)2.Othersthinktheyhavemuchhomeworktodo.Andtheyhavenotimetoplay.(用so…that…改写句子)Thoughsomestudentsstudyveryhard,theyarestillpoorintheirstudies.Othersthinktheyhavesomuchhomeworktodothattheyhavenotimetoplay.3.Wecantakepartinmoreactivities.Alltheseactivitiescanrelieveouranxietyandmakeusrelaxed.(用定语从句改写句子)4.Wecanreduceourstressbytakingtheabovesuggestions.(用onlyby位于句首改写句子)Wecantakepartinmoreactivitieswhichcanrelieveouranxietyandmakeusrelaxed.Onlybytakingtheabovesuggestionscanwereduceourstress.【连句成文】LessPressure,BetterLifeHello,boysandgirls!Thankyouforyourcomingtoday.I'mverygladthatallofyouarefullofhopeforthefuture.Whenitcomestopressure,itisaseriousproblemintoday'sworld.Studentsinourclassareundertoomuchpressure.Thoughsomestudentsstudyveryhard,theyarestillpoorintheirstudies.Theyoftenworryabouttheirexams.Othersthinktheyhavesomuchhomeworktodothattheyhavenotimetoplay.Weshouldtrytotakesomemeasurestodealwithit.First,wecanchangeourminds.Thinkaboutourfavouritepeopleorthingsinsteadofthosetroubles.Second,wecantakepartinmoreactivities,suchasthemusicclubandthefootballteam,whichcanrelieveouranxietyandmakeusrelaxed.Finally,wecanfindasmanyopportunitiesaspossibletocommunicatewithothers,suchasourparents,teachersandfriends.Asforme,I'malwaysunderpressure,too.However,itdoesn'tmatter.Ithinkonlybytakingtheabovesuggestionscanwereduceourstress.That'sall.Thankyou!【参考谚语】1.Asmilemakesyoutenyearsyounger.笑一笑,十年少。2.Joyandsorrowarenext-doorneighbours.悲喜常相伴。3.Laughteristhebestmedicine.笑是最好的药。4.Worrykillsmorementhanwork.忧虑比劳累更伤人。拓展积累【相关短语】thanksfor…因……感谢……;makenewfriends结交新朋友;lookafter/takecareof照顾;keepintouch保持联系;befriendlyto对……友好;bringback带回【亮点句型】导入主题句1.Amongallmyfriends,LiHuaimpressedmemost.Sheisalwayskindandhelpful.2.MygrandmotheristhepersonwhoIwanttothankmost.Shehashelpedmealot.3.Thefamilyisthegreatest.Nomatteryouarehappy,painfulorlost,itwillgentlyonyourway,quietlywithyourlife.4.Thereissadnessaswellashappinessinourlifesocherishwhatyouhave.文章发展、过渡句1.Heencouragedmetobebrave.Hetoldme,“You'dbetterspeakslowlyandclearly,andinthisway,youcanmakeyourselfunderstoodmoreeasily.”2.Assoonasshefoundoutmyproblems,shetalkedwithmeandgavemesomehelpfuladvice.3.Withherencouragement,Ihavemadegreatprogress.4.Heheldmyhandtightly.Inthisway,Iwasnotafraidanymore.5.Heneverscoldsme.ButIalwayslistentohimandfollowhim.文章结尾句1.Ireallywanttosay“Thankyouforhelpingme.Iloveyou!”tomygrandmother.2.Iwillalwaysrememberherkindnessandbegrateful.3.Whathesaidandwhathedidwillinfluencemeallmylife.A“你养我长大,我陪你变老。”父母亲一直在为我们的成长默默付出,成长要学会感受爱、回报爱。今天是父亲节,是我们向爸爸表达感激的好机会。请根据以下所给要点,写一篇英语短文。[要点](1)给我生命,一直照顾我成长;(2)努力工作,为我提供良好的生活和教育条件;(3)拥有爱心,教我学会……(4)今天,我要为您……(自主发挥,至少两点)。实战演练[注意](1)词数:90左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;(2)文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息。Youbringmeup.Iwillbewithyouinyourlife.Youareanimportantpersonintheprocessofmygrowth.Onepossibleversion:Youbringmeup.Iwillbewithyouinyourlife.Youareanimportantpersonintheprocessofmygrowth.Yougivemelifeandtakecareofmeallthetime.WhenIhaveproblemswithmystudyandlife,youarealwayspatientenoughtohelpmeandencourageme.Inordertoletmeliveapleasantlifeandreceiveagoodeducation,youalwaysworkhardfrommorningtoeveningeveryday.Youarealsoamanwhohasaheartfulloflove.Youarereadytohelppeopleinneed.Itisyouwhoteachmetobeakindperson.Inthepast,Ineversaid“Iloveyou”toyou.TodayisFather'sDay.Iwanttosayittoyouloudly.Iwillstudyhardertogetbetterresults.Ihopeyouwillbehappyandhealthyforever.B[2019·东营]SundayMail青少年专栏开展“对身边的人说一句话”主题征文活动,这句话或许是对父母的一句“我爱你”,或许是对老师、同学的一句“谢谢你”,或许是对身边人的一句“对不起”等。请将“Iwanttosay”补充完整,并以此为题写一篇英语短文,如:Iwanttosaythankyou等。谈谈你想说那句话的原因以及发生在那句话背后的故事,并说说你的感受。[要求](1)认真审题,把握要点;(2)行文连贯,条理清晰,不得出现真实学校、姓名等信息;(3)词数:100左右。Onepossibleversion:IwanttosaythankyouIwanttosaythankyoutomydearmother.Shenotonlycaresaboutmylife,butalwayshelpsmeout.OnceIarguedwithmybestfriendLucy.Becauseshealwayspointedoutmyshortcomingsfacetofa