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话题写作（二）计划愿望【话题点睛】该话题主要涉及假期计划、活动计划、人生目标等。主要涉及的要点:1.读书、旅游、度假等活动的安排;2.课外活动、学校郊游、运动会等活动的时间、地点、人物、活动内容与形式等;3.职业规划以及实现人生目标的具体措施等。学校将举办英语写作比赛。请根据所给提示,以“MyLifein20Years”为题,写一篇参赛短文,分享你对未来的憧憬。典例分析[注意](1)词数:80左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数);(2)文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息;(3)文章必须包含所提供的主要信息,并作适当发挥。MyLifein20YearsI'malwaysworkinghardforabrightfuture.Iimagine【思路点拨】1.要点提炼:主题是对未来生活的畅想,包括以下要点:(1)自己20年后的家庭以及为家庭所做的事情;(2)自己20年后的工作及理由;(3)自己20年后会和朋友们在一起做的事情;(4)概括自己对未来生活的看法。2.确定时态:一般现在时和一般将来时。3.确定人称:第一人称单数和复数。【写作架构】【基础写作】Ⅰ.写主干句(根据所给提示补全下列各句。)1.我会拥有比现在更好的生活。(betterlife)Iwillhaveanow.2.不管我多么忙,我都会精心照顾父母。(takecareof)IwillmyparentshowbusyIwillbe.3.我们会谈论过去的学校生活并且分享想法和快乐。(talkabout)Wewillthepastschoollifeand.betterlifethantakegoodcareofnomattertalkaboutshareourideasandhappiness4.运动能够让我们保持健康。(keepsb.+adj.)Sportscanus.5.我准备接受新的挑战。(bereadyto)Itakeonnew.Ⅱ.句子升格(按括号中的要求改写句子。)keephealthyandfitamreadytochallengesⅡ.句子升格(按括号中的要求改写句子。)1.Ilikemeetinginterestingthingsandpeople.Iwillgetahighersalary.(用notonly…butalso…合并为一句)2.Iwillhaveagroupofworkmates.Theyareeasytoworkwith.(改为含有定语从句的句子)NotonlydoIlikemeetinginterestingthingsandpeoplebutalsoIwillgetahighersalary.Iwillhaveagroupofworkmateswhoareeasytoworkwith.3.Iwillmeetmyfriends.Theyarejustlikeagoodmemorybookforme.(用because连接两个句子)Iwillmeetmyfriendsbecausetheyarejustlikeagoodmemorybookforme.【连句成文】MyLifein20YearsI'malwaysworkinghardforabrightfuture.IimagineIwillhaveabetterlifethannow.In20years,Iwillhaveabetterfamily.IwilltakegoodcareofmyparentsnomatterhowbusyIwillbe.AndIwillhavetwochildrenandtheyarecuteandlovely.Ofcourse,Iwillhaveabighouse,andmyfamilywilllivetogetheratmyhouse.ThebestjobformewillbeaTVreporter.That'sbecauseImustworkhardandIamreadytotakeonnewchallenges.Iwillhaveagroupofworkmateswhoareeasytoworkwith.WheneverIamfree,Iwillmeetmyfriendsbecausetheyarejustlikeagoodmemorybookforme.Wewilltalkaboutthepastschoollifeandshareourideasandhappiness.Wewilloftengoabroadforvacation.IbelieveIwillhaveagreattimeduringthevacation.Everydayafterwork,Iwillusuallytakesomeexercisewithmyfriends.Afterall,sportscankeepushealthyandfit.Ithinkmylifein20yearswillbeexcitingandwonderful.AndIamworkinghardtomakeitcometrue.【参考谚语】1.Timeandtidewaitfornoman.岁月不待人。2.Neverdothingsbyhalves.做事不要半途而废。3.Agoodbeginningishalfdone.良好的开端是成功的一半。4.Nevergiveup!永不放弃!拓展积累【相关短语】giveaway赠送,分发;makenewfriends结交新朋友;share…with…与……分享……lookforwardto期盼,期待;haveabetterfuture有一个更美好的未来;befriendlyto对……友好;takeup/onthechallenge接受挑战【亮点句型】导入主题句1.Wearegladtotellyouthatwearegoingtovisit…2.TodayisEarthDay.Wearegoingtoplantsometreesinthepark.3.Wearegoingtohaveathree-dayholiday.Whydon'twegoto…?文章发展、过渡句1.Firstofall,wemustobeytherulesofthemuseum/gallery.2.Therewillbealotofartworks/exhibitions.We'llseethemfirst.3.Then,we'll…inthemorning.4.Afterthat/Intheafternoon,/Atlastwe'll…together.文章结尾句1.Pleasewearcomfortableshoesoryouwillfeeltired/uncomfortableduringthetrip.2.Don'tforgettotake…3.Wehopeyouwillhaveaniceday/youwillenjoythetrip.A暑期将至,我们都应该制定合理的假期计划。请你根据以下要点提示,以“MySummerVacationPlan”为题,用英语写一篇短文。[要点提示](1)放松自己:听音乐,看电影,锻炼身体等;(2)陪伴家人:旅行,散步,与父母交流等;(3)做志愿者:看望老人,赠送礼物,为他们唱歌等;(4)努力学习:阅读书籍,复习知识,为以后的学习做准备等;(5)个人观点:……实战演练[要求](1)词数:110左右(短文首句已给出,不计入总词数);(2)要点提示均须涉及,可适当增加内容;(3)字迹工整,卷面整洁,文意连贯,语言流畅;(4)不用真实姓名、校名、地名。[参考词汇]relaxmyself,spendtimewith…,volunteer,review,prepareforMySummerVacationPlanWiththesummervacationcoming,Iwillmakeaplanforit.First,Onepossibleversion:MySummerVacationPlanWiththesummervacationcoming,Iwillmakeaplanforit.First,I'dliketosparesometimetorelaxmyselfbylisteningtomusic,watchingmoviesaswellasexercisingtokeepfit.Besides,Iplantospendmoretimewithmydearfamily.Forexample,wecantravelsomewhereinterestingtogether.Takingawalkandcommunicatingwithmyparentsarealsoadvisablechoices.Atthesametime,I'mgoingtovolunteerintheoldpeople'shome.Iwillbuysomegiftsandsingforthem.Lastbutnotleast,it'squiteimportantformetokeepstudyinghard.Imustpreparemyselfwellforthestudyinseniorhighschool.IthinkreviewingwhatI'velearnedinjuniormiddleschoolandreadingmorecanhelpmewiththat.AsfarasI'mconcerned,thesummervacationisaprecioustimetodosomethingmeaningful.Therefore,I'msuretomakethebestofitandmakemyplancometrue.B[2019·泰州]为丰富初三学生课余生活,上周末你校组织了一次社会实践活动。请根据以下内容提示,用英语写一篇短文,介绍此次活动,并谈谈自己的感想。[活动内容](1)上午游览人民公园:欣赏美景、歌舞联欢、拍照留念;(2)下午参观市民广场:观看图片展,了解祖国和家乡70年巨变。[你的感想](1)师生情深,感谢老师和同学的帮助;(2)倍受鼓舞,决心勤奋学习报效祖国;(3)……(考生自己发挥)[要求](1)词数:100左右。开头已给出,不计入总词数。(2)所写内容必须包括内容提示中所提供的信息,并可作适当的发挥。(3)不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。[参考词汇]市民广场CivicSquareInordertoenrichJunior3students'after-schoollife,ourschoolorganizedasocialpracticeactivitylastweekend.Alltheteachersandstudentsofourgradetookpartinit.Onepossibleversion:InordertoenrichJunior3students'after-schoollife,ourschoolorganizedasocialpracticeactivitylastweekend.Alltheteachersandstudentsofourgradetookpartinit.Wewereallhappytohaveachancetoknowmoreaboutourcity.Everyonehadameaningfulday.Inthemorning,wevisitedPeople'sParkinourcity.Weenjoyedthebeautifulviewthere.Moreover,wehadasonganddanceparty.Mostofustookalotofphotostoremembertheexcitingmoments.Intheafternoon,wewatchedthepictureshow.Manygreatchangeshavetakenplaceinourcountryandcit