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话题写作（六）安全问题[话题来源:八上M12,九上M4]【话题点睛】该话题主要涉及如何保护人身安全、校园安全、交通安全等,此类试题常以要点提示的方式来考查。【典型例题】[2019·衡阳]根据一项新的调查,学生安全已经成为一个大的问题。假设你是一名老师,对学生进行以“自我保护”为主题的消防安全教育,请以“HowtoProtectYourselfinaFire”为题,提出你的建议。[要求]1.短文中不得出现真实的人名和地名;2.书写工整,语句通顺,连贯;3.词数不少于80(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。典例分析[参考词汇]coverv.遮盖takethelift乘坐电梯exitn.出口toweln.毛巾shutoff切断HowtoProtectYourselfinaFireAccordingtoanewsurvey,studentsafetyhasbecomeabigproblem._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【思路点拨】1.要点提炼:本文以学生的安全教育为切入点,对学生如何在火灾中进行自我保护提出几点建议。可以提炼出三个要点:(1)自我防护;(2)切断电源;(3)找到安全出口并迅速撤离。2.时态:一般现在时。3.人称:第一人称。【写作架构】【基础写作】根据所给提示写句子。1.基础句我们应该教会学生如何在火灾中保护自己。(should)__________________________________________________________________________.→升格句__________________________________________________________________.(Itis+adj.+todosth.)WeshouldteachstudentshowtoprotectthemselvesinafireItisnecessarytoteachstudentshowtoprotectthemselvesinafire2.基础句我们应该保持冷静,立刻用湿毛巾捂住鼻子,因为燃烧的物品会释放有毒烟雾。(keepcalm;cover…with…)______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.→升格句_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.(用含定语从句的结构表达)Weshouldkeepcalmandcoverournosewithawettowelimmediately,becausetheburningthingswillreleasepoisonoussmokeWeshouldkeepcalmandcoverournosewithawettowelimmediately,whichwillbehelpfultoprotectusagainstthepoisonoussmokereleasedbytheburningthings3.基础句我们应该切断房间里的电源,否则我们会受到伤害。(cutoff)____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.→升格句___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.(incase)Weshouldcutofftheelectricityinthehouse,orwecouldgethurtbyitWeshouldcutofftheelectricityinthehouseincasewecouldgethurtbyit【连句成文】HowtoProtectYourselfinaFireAccordingtoanewsurvey,studentsafetyhasbecomeabigproblem.Soitisnecessarytoteachstudentshowtoprotectthemselvesinafire.Andherecomethemethods.First,weshouldkeepcalmandcoverournosewithawettowelimmediately,whichwillbehelpfultoprotectusagainstthepoisonoussmokereleasedbytheburningthings.Second,weshouldcutofftheelectricityinthehouseincasewecouldgethurtbyit.Next,weshouldfindtheexitandtryourbesttogetoutofthehousequickly.We’dbetterwalkthestairsinsteadoftakingthelift.Last,nomatterwhenweareindanger,don’tforgettocallthepolice.Ithinkthemethodsaboveareveryusefulfortheself-protectioninafire.【导入主题句】1.Ifweareindanger,wemustcallthepoliceoraskteachersforhelpintimesothatwecankeepourselvessafe.2.Nothingismoreimportantthanobeyingthesafetyregulations.3.Wearesupposedtostopanyschoolbullywhenweareinthetroubleofit.拓展积累4.Wemaygethurtorloseourlivesifwedon’tobeythetrafficrulesontheroad.5.Whenfacinganaccident,thefirstandmostimportantruleistostaycalm.【文章的发展句】1.Weshouldalwaysbefriendlyandhelpfulwhenmakingfriendswithothers.2.Weshouldn’tcrowdorpusheachotherwhenwegoupstairsordownstairsatschool.3.Tobesafer,weshouldkeepawayfromthenetbar,andgotoschoolandgobackhomeontime.4.Wemustn’tgoswimmingwithoutourparents’orteachers’permission.5.Whensomeonethreatensus,weshouldcallthepoliceforhelp.【文章的结尾句】1.Allinall,weneedtolearnhowtoprotectourselvesandstayawayfromdanger.2.Inshort,safetymustcomefirst!3.Inaword,wearesupposedtotryourbesttobehavewell.4.Inshort,ifweobeytherulesandtakecareofourselves,wewillgrowupsafelyandhealthily.5.Ifweareindangerincase,weshouldkeepcalmfirst.Thencallthepoliceat110orasktheteachersorparentsforhelp.A[2019·乐山]为了让学生吃到更加营养、安全的食品,政府出台了陪餐制,要求从4月1日起,学校领导陪同学生用餐。请你根据以下要点,给校报英语专栏写一篇短文,谈谈自己的看法。[提示]1.学生吃得健康、安全;2.及时发现就餐问题;3.食堂提供食品多样;4.父母更加放心。实战演练[注意]1.词数:80左右;开头已给出,不计入总词数;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.参考词汇:规定regulation(n.);食堂cafeteria(n.);营养的nutritious(adj.)AnewfoodsafetyregulationwasputintouseonApril1toimprovenutritionandfoodsafetyinschools.Itaskstheschoolleaderstoeatwithstudentsintheircafeterias.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Onepossibleversion:AnewfoodsafetyregulationwasputintouseonApril1toimprovenutritionandfoodsafetyinschools.Itaskstheschoolleaderstoeatwithstudentsintheircafeterias.Thankstotheregulation,somethinggreathastakenplaceinourschool.First,weeatmorehealthilyandsafelythanbefore.Second,ifthereisanyproblemaboutfoodsafetyorothers,ourschoolleadersareabletoknowandsolveitquickly.Also,thecafeteriaworkersaretryingtoprovidedifferentkindsoffoodforus.Inotherwords,ourparentsneedn’tworryaboutourdietanymore.Weteena