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话题写作（五）情感表达[话题来源:八下M1、M2,九上M6]【话题点睛】话题来源于学生日常生活中对某件事情的经历及感受。常见的情感类表达有:爱、快乐、微笑、幸福、痛苦和烦恼等。【典型例题】[2019·自贡]初中三年的学习生活让人难忘,毕业之际,你校将举行以“感恩”为主题的英文演讲比赛,请你根据以下提示,写一篇英文演讲稿。[要点提示]1.感谢父母,教我如何生活;2.感谢老师,教我许多知识;3.感谢同学,给我美好回忆;[要求]1.词数:100左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数;2.可适当增减词汇,使语句流畅、完整;3.文中不能透露个人真实信息。典例分析Goodmorning,everyone.I’mgladtobeheretospeakinfrontofyou.HereI’dliketothankeveryoneofyou._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________That’sall.Thankyou.【思路点拨】1.要点提炼:本文以英文演讲比赛为背景,表达“感恩”的主题,以演讲稿的形式分别对父母、老师和同学表达感激之情并陈述感谢的理由。可以提炼出三个要点:(1)对父母的感谢及理由;(2)对老师的感谢及理由;(3)对同学的感谢及理由。2.时态:一般现在时,一般过去时。3.人称:第一人称和第三人称。【写作架构】【基础写作】根据所给提示写句子。1.基础句我们应该感谢我们的父母。(thanksb.)__________________________________________________________________________.→升格句_________________________________________________________________.(besupposedtodo,express)WeshouldthankourparentsWearesupposedtoexpressourheartfeltgratitudetoourparents2.基础句他们教给我们丰富的知识。(teachsb.sth.)__________________________________________________________________________.→升格句.(makesb.+adj.)TheyteachusrichknowledgeTheymakeusintelligentandwisewithrichknowledge3.基础句我们应该因为给予我们爱和帮助而感谢他们。(thanksb.for…)__________________________________________________________________________.→升格句___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.(devote…to…)WeshouldthankthemforgivingushelpandloveWeshouldthankthemfordevotingtheirwholelifetouswithhelpandlove4.基础句他们总是和我们一起面对困难。(facethedifficulty)__________________________________________________________________________.→升格句___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.(用含定语从句的结构表达)TheyalwaysfacedifficultieswithusTheyaretheoneswhoarealwaysbehindusandreadytofacedifficultieswithus【连句成文】Goodmorning,everyone.I’mgladtobeheretospeakinfrontofyou.HereI’dliketothankeveryoneofyou.Firstly,wearesupposedtoexpressourheartfeltgratitudetoourparents.Theyhavebeenlookingafterussincewewereborn.Theygiveuseverythingwhenweneedthemandteachushowtolivewellandhealthily.Secondly,weshouldsay“thankyou”toourteachers.Theymakeusintelligentandwisewithrichknowledge.Besides,theyleadustolearnmethodsofsolvingproblems.Weshouldthankthemfordevotingtheirwholelifetouswithhelpandlove.Althoughtheyareverystrictwithus,weallknowtheyloveus.Thirdly,weshouldalsothankourclassmatesandfriends.Theyaretheoneswhoarealwaysbehindusandreadytofacedifficultieswithus.Thankstothem,wewillhavelotsofniceandunforgettablememoriesoffriendshipforever.That’sall.Thankyou.【导入主题句】1.Theproblemyouarefacingiscommonamongusteenagers.2.Iamwritingtodrawyourattentiontosomeimproperbehavioramongusstudents.3.FromwhereIstand,I’mnotinfavorofencouragingkidswithcashjustbecausetheyhavegotgoodmarks.4.WeoughttobereadytohelpothersandIbelievewecangetmuchhappinesswhenwehelpthoseintrouble.5.Withhishelp,Imadegreatprogressbothinmylifeandstudy.拓展积累【文章的发展句】1.Ifullyunderstandwhytheydidthatthen.2.Tellthemwewantthemtotrustusasmuchaswe’dliketotrustthem.3.Theyarrangealmosteverythingforme.4.Punishmentisbynomeansawisechoicetohelpusgrowupmentallyandphysically.5.It’swiseandbravetoexpressourideasandattitudestowardsmanythings.【文章的结尾句】1.Itismyparentsthathelpedmegothroughthetoughlife.2.Ifwesmileatlife,lifewillsmileatusinreturn.3.OnlyinthiswaycanIgainmoreconfidence.4.Inmypointofview,itiscompletelywrongtocheatinexaminationsbecauseitbreakstherulesofschools.5.Fromthismeaningfulactivity,Ifoundthatwearesupposedtocarefortheoldandrespectthem.A[2019·天水]“你养我长大,我陪你变老。”父母亲一直在为我们的成长默默付出,成长要学会感受爱、回报爱。今天你即将毕业,是向父母表达感激的好机会。请根据以下所给要点,写一篇英语短文。[要求]1.给我生命,一直照顾我成长;2.努力工作,为我提供良好的生活和教育条件;3.拥有爱心,教我学会……;4.今天,我要为你们……(自主发挥,至少两点)。实战演练[注意事项]1.词数:80左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;2.文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息。Youbringmeup.Iwillbewithyouinyourlife.Youareimportantpersonsintheprocessofmygrowth.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Onepossibleversion:Youbringmeup.Iwillbewithyouinyourlife.Youareimportantpersonsintheprocessofmygrowth.Yougivemelifeandtakecareofmeallthetime.WhenIhaveproblemswithmystudyandlife,youarealwayspatientenoughtohelpandencourageme.Inordertoletmeliveapleasantlifeandreceiveagoodeducation,youalwaysworkhardfrommorningtoeveningeveryday.Youarealsopeoplewhohaveheartsfulloflove.Youarereadytohelppeopleinneed.Youteachmetobeakindperson.Inthepast,Ineversaid“Iloveyou”toyou.TodayIwillgraduate,andIwanttosayittoyouloudly.Iwillstudyhardertogetbetterresults.Ihopeyouwillbehappyandhealthyforever.B[2019·淮安]为迎接祖国母亲第70个生日,学校开展了丰富多彩的活动,如讲故事、制作卡片、参观博物馆等。请围绕该话题写一篇短文,内容包括以下要点:1.你看到或参加过的一次活动(包括时间、地点、经过);2.你对该活动的感受以及对祖国的热爱之情;3.你今后如何为建设祖国贡献力量。[注意]1.文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名;2.词数:80-100,已给出的文字不计入总词数。Tocelebratethe70thbirthdayofourmotherl