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话题写作（四）健康生活[话题来源:七上M4,八上M3、M11、M12,八下M4,九上M8]【话题点睛】针对的话题主要是体育锻炼和健康饮食。体育锻炼主要涉及:开展体育锻炼的方式;鼓励多进行体育运动,强身健体等。健康饮食主要涉及:远离垃圾食品、健康饮食的好处及具体做法等。【典型例题】[2019·毕节]每年的6月6日是我国的“爱眼日”,可见保护中小学生的视力非常重要,为此,学校将在英语文化节期间举行一场“爱眼日”英语演讲比赛。请你写一篇英语演讲稿,谈谈你对保护视力重要性的认识和建议。典例分析[内容如下]1.保护视力的重要性(请写1点);2.对保护视力的建议:(1)阅读时注意用眼卫生;(2)少用电子产品;(3)常看绿色植物;(4)做眼保健操;(5)多做户外运动。[要求如下]1.结构完整,表达通顺,语言规范,书写清晰;2.文中不得出现任何真实的人名,学校名等信息;3.词数:80左右;开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。[参考词汇]SightDay“爱眼日”;electronicproducts电子产品;eye-protectingexercises眼保健操Dearfriends,June6isourcountry’sSightDay._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Thankyou!【思路点拨】1.要点提炼:本文以“爱眼日”为切入点,引出保护视力的话题。以演讲稿的形式谈谈你对保护视力重要性的认识和建议。可以提炼出两个要点:(1)对“保护视力重要性”的综述;(2)对保护视力的五点建议。2.时态:一般现在时。3.人称:第二人称。【写作架构】【基础写作】根据所给提示写句子。1.基础句一些学生的视力正在变差,所以保护视力很重要。(Itis+adj.+todosth.)_______________________________________________________________________________________________.→升格句_________________________________________________________________.(用含定语从句的结构表达)Somestudents’eyesightisbecomingbad,soitisimportanttoprotecteyesightItisimportanttoprotectstudents’eyesightwhichisseriouslydeclininginrecentyears2.基础句一些学生不知道如何保护他们的视力。(vt.+howtodosth.)__________________________________________________________________________.→升格句.(havenoidea)Somestudentsdon’tknowhowtoprotecttheireyesightSomestudentshavenoideahowtoprotecttheireyesight3.基础句少使用电子产品。不要花太多时间玩电脑游戏。(spend…doingsth.)____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.→升格句___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________.(keepabalancebetween…and…)Useelectronicproductsless.Don’tspendtoomuchtimeplayingcomputergamesDon’tspendtoomuchtimeplayingcomputergamesandkeepabalancebetweenusingelectronicproductsandprotectingyoureyes【连句成文】Dearfriends,June6isourcountry’sSightDay.Asweallknow,itisimportanttoprotectstudents’eyesightwhichisseriouslydeclininginrecentyears.However,somestudentshavenoideahowtoprotecttheireyesight.NowI’dliketosharesomesuggestionsonthistopic.Firstly,Isuggestyougetintothehabitofusingeyesproperlytoprotectthem,forexample,don’tkeepyoureyesworkingforalongtime.You’dbetterhavearestbylookinginthelongdistanceafterstudyinganhourorso.Secondly,don’tspendtoomuchtimeplayingcomputergamesandkeepabalancebetweenusingelectronicproductsandprotectingyoureyes.Whenyoureyesfeeltired,youshouldlookatthenearbygreenplants.Andthirdly,keepdoingeye-protectingexerciseseverydayanddomoreoutdooractivities.Ifyoufollowtheadviceabove,youmaypreventyoureyesightfrombecomingshort-sighted.【导入主题句】1.Studentscaneasilybeshort-sightedafterplayingcomputergamesforalongtime.2.SmokingisbannedinChinainallpublicplacesbothinsideandout.3.Asweallknow,exercisingisgoodforourhealth,whichkeepsourmindssharpandmakesusconfidentandhappy.4.Manystudentsareshortofexerciseintheirsparetime,whichhasbeenaserioussocialproblemnow.5.Asweallknow,eyesarethewindowsofthesoul.拓展积累【文章的发展句】1.Themoreexercisetheydo,thebetteritisforthem.2.Fastfoodusuallyincludesalotoffat,thuscausingchildrentobecomefat.3.Thereisnodoubtthatjunkfoodismadedelicioustoattractus.4.Ithinkaconversationwithparentsorteachersishelpfulandthattakingexercisecanmakeusrelaxedwhenwe’reundermuchpressure.5.Weshoulddevelopgoodhabitsandcorrectbadonesinourlife.【文章的结尾句】1.Nomatterhowmanydifficultieswehave,Ibelieveallofthemcanbeovercomeintheend.2.Inmyopinion,weshouldkeepabalancebetweenourstudyandexercising.Besides,weshoulddevelopagoodhabitofdoingexercise.3.Inaword,ahealthydietwithlessjunkfoodcanhelpmakeusstrongerandstronger.4.Wecouldeatmorefruitandvegetableswhichcanprovidethenutritionweneed.5.Inaword,eyesaresoimportantthatallofusshoulddowhatwecantokeepthemhealthyandbright.A[2019·广安]当前,许多学生在课外沉溺于智能手机(smart-phones)。针对这一现象,学校将组织开展一次“拒绝手机诱惑,健康学习生活”的演讲活动。请你根据下面的提示用英语写一篇演讲稿。实战演练危害1.花大量时间玩游戏,上课睡觉,不按时完成作业2.伤害眼睛,不利健康建议1.远离智能手机,认真学习2.多花时间与家人、朋友交流3.积极参加各种活动,如打篮球、唱歌……[要求]1.字迹工整,书写规范,包含全部要点,可适当发挥;2.文中不得出现真实的学校、班级名称;3.80词左右,开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。[参考词汇]eyesight(视力);disadvantage(不利条件);keepawayfrom(远离);takeanactivepartin(积极参加)Girlsandboys,WiththedevelopmentoftheInternet,manystudentshavesmartphones._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________That’sall.Thankyou!Onepossibleversion:Girlsandboys,WiththedevelopmentoftheInternet,manystudentshavesmartphones.Thestudentsoftenspendsomuchtimeinplayinggameswiththemthattheyfeelverytired.Someonecan’tfinishtheirhomeworkontimeandsomeoneevensleepsinclass.What’sworse,smartphonesdoharmtoourhealth.Somestudents’eyesightisbecomingpoorerandpoorerandtheyevenbecomeaddicted.Toavoidthesedisadvantages,Ithinkwesh