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话题写作（三）假日、旅行[话题来源:七上M6,七下M6、M10,八上M4,八下M3、M8,九上M1、M2]【话题点睛】针对的话题主要涉及节日习俗、节假日活动、旅游日记、旅游路线等。【典型例题】[2019·黄石]假如你是国际学校的学生李华,你的同学Tom写了一封邮件询问你暑假的安排,请给Tom回一封邮件,告知你的计划,并邀请他来黄石游玩。[内容包括]1.读几本好书;2.参加社会实践活动;3.帮父母做家务;4.和朋友一起锻炼;5.邀请Tom。典例分析[注意]1.词数:80左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;3.文中不能出现与本人相关的信息;4.开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。[参考词汇]有意义的meaningful;经典文学作品classicliteratureworks;社会实践活动socialpracticeactivitiesDearTom,I’mveryhappytohearfromyou._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua【思路点拨】1.要点提炼:本文对Tom询问暑假安排的邮件进行回复,并邀请Tom来黄石游玩。可以提炼出两个要点:(1)“我”的暑假安排:读书、社会实践、做家务、锻炼;(2)邀请Tom来游玩。2.时态:一般将来时。3.人称:第一人称和第二人称。【写作架构】【基础写作】根据所给提示写句子。1.基础句我会在暑假期间做四件有意义的事情。(meaningfulthings)__________________________________________________________________________.→升格句_________________________________________________________________.(make+n.+adj.)2.基础句首先,我计划读一些经典文学作品类的书。(plantodosth.)__________________________________________________________________________.→升格句_________________________________________________________________.(withoutdoubt,定语从句)IwilldofourmeaningfulthingsduringmysummervacationFourthingswillmakemysummervacationmeaningfulFirst,IplantoreadseveralclassicliteratureworksWithoutdoubt,thefirstthingthatIplantodoistoreadseveralbooks,especiallysomeclassicliteratureworks3.基础句它会让我学到很多。(makesb.dosth.)__________________________________________________________________________.→升格句_________________________________________________________________.(broadenone’shorizons)4.基础句如果你能来黄石的话我会很高兴。(if条件句)__________________________________________________________________________.→升格句_________________________________________________________________.(dropinatsp.)ItwillmakemelearnalotItwillbroadenmyhorizonsIwillbegladifyoucancometoHuangshiIwillbegladifyoucoulddropinatHuangshi【连句成文】DearTom,I’mveryhappytohearfromyou.Inyourletter,youaskedmeformyplansforthesummervacation.Now,Iamwritingtotellyousomespecificdetails.Overall,fourthingswillmakemysummervacationmeaningful.Withoutdoubt,thefirstthingthatIplantodoistoreadseveralbooks,especiallysomeclassicliteratureworks.Asweallknow,classicliteratureistherepresentationoftheoutstandingartofournation.Youngpeoplewillcertainlybenefitalotfromreadingclassics.Second,Iwillspendamonthtakingpartinsocialpracticeactivities.IintendtoworkasasalesmanbecausenotonlycanIearnmoneybymyself,butalsoitwillbroadenmyhorizons.Meanwhile,IwillhelpmymomdohouseworkeverydayandIwilldoexercisewithmyfriendsinthemorning.IwillbegladifyoucoulddropinatHuangshi.Iwillshowyouaroundsomeplacesofinterest.Iamlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours,LiHua【导入主题句】1.Besides,theycanmakefriendsandhelpeachotherwhiletraveling.2.It’ssofamousandbeautifulthatitattractsthousandsoftouriststogosightseeingthere.3.Itmaybeoneofthereasonswhysomanypeopleareattractedbythecity.拓展积累4.Itmustbeagoodchancetoenjoythebeautifulsceneryofnatureandmeanwhilegetrelaxed.5.Wehaveorganizedabustriptothecountrysidewherewecanbreathefreshairandenjoyapeacefullife.【文章的发展句】1.IpersonallyadviseyoutolearnaboutChineseculturebeforeyoucomehere.2.Theymaythinkthatstudentsgraduatingfromjuniormiddleschoolaretooyoungtolookafterthemselvesinaforeigncountry.3.Asforme,wantingtospendenoughtimevisitingtheplacesIlike,Iprefertotravelalone.4.Thesubwayisoneofthemostconvenientwaystotravelinourcity.5.IwanttomentioninparticularthatI’llkeepawayfromanydangerousplacelikedeepriversorremotemountains.【文章的结尾句】1.Onlyinthiswaycanyouenjoyyoursummerholidayhappily.2.Travelingcannotonlyhelpusseethebestsightsbutalsoopenupoureyestotheoutsideworld.3.IhopeI’llhaveaverywonderfulsummerholidayandbecomeanexcellentmyself!4.Thememorableexperiencewillplayanimportantroleinhelpingmegrowasaperson.5.There,youcanlieunderthestars,enjoyingthequietnight.A[2019·泰州]为丰富初三学生课余生活,上周末你校组织了一次社会实践活动。请根据以下内容提示,用英语写一篇短文,介绍此次活动,并谈谈自己的感想。[活动内容]1.上午游览人民公园:欣赏美景、歌舞联欢、拍照留念;2.下午参观市民广场:观看图片展,了解祖国和家乡70年巨变。[你的感想]1.师生情深,感谢老师和同学的帮助;2.倍受鼓舞,决心勤奋学习报效祖国;3.……(考生自己发挥)。实战演练[要求]1.词数:100左右。开头已给出,不计入总词数;2.所写内容必须包括内容提示中所提供的信息,并可作适当的发挥;3.不得出现真实的人名、校名、地名等相关信息。[参考词汇]市民广场CivicSquareInordertoenrichJunior3students’after-schoollife,ourschoolorganizedasocialpracticeactivitylastweekend.Alltheteachersandstudentsofourgradetookpartinit._________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Onepossibleversion:InordertoenrichJunior3students’after-schoollife,ourschoolorganizedasocialpracticeactivitylastweekend.Alltheteachersandstudentsofourgradetookpartinit.Wewereallhappytohaveachancetoknowmoreaboutourcity.Everyonehadameaningfulday.Inthemorning,wevisitedPeople’sParkinourcity.Weenjoyedthebeautifulviewthere.Moreover,wehadasonganddanceparty.Mostofustookalotofphotostoremembertheexcitingmoments.Intheafternoon,wewatchedthepictureshow.Manygreatchangeshavetakenplaceinourcountryandcity.It’samazingforust