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话题四假期活动分析近几年全国有关“假期活动”的书面表达可发现,这类话题主要从以下两个角度进行考查:1.陈述自己的假期活动计划,时态为一般将来时;2.陈述自己经历的假期活动,包括活动后的感受和收获,时态为一般过去时。命题探究开头句1.Iamgoingtotraveltosomeplacesofinterestwhichcanopenmyeyes.2.Asfortravelling,I'mplanningtogotoHainan.Butwhethergoingthereornotwilldependontheweather.3.It'snecessaryforustotakeameaningfulsummervacationafterthefinalexam.4.Therearemanykindsofactivitiesforustotakepartin.亮点句型中间句1.You'llbesuretoexperiencemanynewthingswhentravelling.2.Bytravelling,wecanenjoythebeautifulsceneryandrelaxourselves.3.Sometimes,wegotothestreetstocollectrubbishorgotothehospitaltocheerupthesickchildren.4.Besides,Ialwaysreadsomebooksduringmyholidaybecausereadingcanim-provemywriting.5.Itookmanyphotos,atedeliciousfoodandboughtspecialgifts.结尾句1.Aboveall,Ihopeallofuscanhaveapleasant/wonderfulvacation/holiday.2.Iwillneverforgetthevacation.3.Travelcanhelpmetorefreshmymood.WhenIcomeback,Iwillbefullofener-gyagain.4.Allofusfeltveryhappythoughweweresotired.好句积累1.Travelbroadensthemind.旅行开阔心灵。2.Traveltenthousandmilesandreadtenthousandbooks.行万里路,读万卷书。3.AllroadsleadtoRome.条条大路通罗马。4.Ifyoudon'tgototravel,missmorethanjustscenery.如果你不去旅游,错过的不只是风景。5.OnewhofailstoreachtheGreatWallisnotahero.不到长城非好汉。暑期将至,我们都应该制订合理的假期计划。请你根据以下要点提示,以“MySummerVacationPlan”为题,用英语写一篇短文。要点提示:1.放松自己:听音乐,看电影,锻炼身体等;2.陪伴家人:旅行,散步,与父母交流等;3.做志愿者:看望老人,赠送礼物,为他们唱歌等;4.努力学习:阅读书籍,复习知识,为以后学习做准备等;5.个人观点:……。典例剖析要求:1.词数100左右(短文首句已给出,不计入总词数);2.要点提示均需涉及,可适当增加内容;3.字迹工整,卷面整洁,文意连贯,语言流畅;4.不用真实姓名、校名、地名。参考词语:relaxmyself,spendtimewith...,volunteer,review,prepareforMySummerVacationPlanWiththesummervacationcoming,Iwillmakeaplanforit.First,写作指导本文是篇说明文。写作时要求围绕要点提示描述假期计划及具体做法,同时要表达自己的观点,注意过渡词的恰当使用及句式的多样性,主体时态为一般现在时和一般将来时,人称主要为第一人称。谋篇布局 范文评析MySummerVacationPlan①Withthesummervacationcoming,Iwillmakeaplanforit.②First,I'dliketosparesometimetorelaxmyselfbylisteningtomusic,watchingmoviesaswellasexercisingtokeepfit.Besides,Iplantospendmoretimewithmydearfamily.Forexample,wecantraveltogethertosomewhereinteresting.Takingawalkandcommunicatingwithmyparentsarealsoadvisablechoices.Atthesametime,I'mgoingtovolunteerinanoldpeo-ple'shome.Iwillbuysomegiftsandsingforthem.Lastbutnotleast,it'squiteimportantformetokeepstudyinghard.Imustpreparemyselfwellforthechallenginglearninginseniorhighschool.IthinkreviewingwhatI'velearnedinjuniormiddleschoolandreadingmorecanhelpmewiththat.③AsfarasI'mconcerned,thesummervacationisaprecioustimetodosomethingmeaningful.ThereforeI'msuretomakethebestofitandmakemyplancometrue.①开头:直入主题:我将要为暑假制订一个计划。引出下文。②正文:具体描述假期计划要点及具体做法。过渡词及句式运用多样且恰到好处。③结尾:表达自己的观点。asfarasI'mconcerned的运用使文章更有深度。亮点仿写短语1.makeaplan制订计划2.sparesometimetodosth.抽出时间去做某事3.plantodosth.计划做某事4.spendsometimewithsb.和某人一起度过一段时光5.takeawalk散步6.communicatewithsb.与某人交流7.preparefor为……做准备8.asfarasI'mconcerned依我看来仿写1.依我看来,对于父母来说每天抽出时间与孩子进行交流是很有必要的。(asfarasI'mconcerned,sparesometimetodosth.,communicatewithsb.)AsfarasI'mconcerned,it'sverynecessaryforparentstosparesometimetocommunicatewiththeirchildreneveryday.2.作为学生,我们应该做好制订假期计划的准备以便我们能过一个有意义的假期。(preparefor,makeaplan)Asstudents,weshouldprepareformakingaplanforthevacationsothatwecanhaveameaningfulvacation.3.散步是和我们的家人一起度过时光的好方式。(takeawalk,spendsometimewithsb.)Takingawalkisagoodwaytospendsometimewithourfamily.