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话题写作（九）观点态度【话题点睛】观点态度类文章通常是给出热点且有争议的话题,让学生阐述自己的观点。常考话题有上网、课程设置、课堂活动方式等。现在,社会上补习机构火爆。在各种媒体上,我们经常可以看到“名师名校”、“个性化教学”、“终极押题”、“秒杀中考”等广告词。你相信这样的宣传吗?你所在的学习小组针对这一社会现象,围绕“课余时间我们应该更多地去做什么才能够得到全面的发展”展开了讨论,最终大家形成了以下观点:典例分析请你根据同学们的上述观点,并结合自己的亲身体验,就此问题陈述自己的看法。内容必须包含以下要点:（1）Wouldyouliketotakeafter-schoolclasses?Whyorwhynot?（Pleasegive3reasons.）（2）Whatwouldyouliketodoinyoursparetime?（3）Pleasetellusoneofyourstoriesofthiskindofexperience.[注意]（1）词数:100左右;（2）文中不得出现真实的人名与校名。【思路点拨】1.要点提炼:主题是陈述对课外补习的看法。共有三个要点:（1）Youropinionsaboutafter-schoolclasses.（2）Whatdoyouliketodoinyoursparetime?（3）Yourexperience.2.时态:一般现在时/一般过去时/现在完成时。3.人称:第一人称。【写作架构】【基础写作】Ⅰ.写主干句（根据所给提示补全下列各句。）1.我过去也常常上这些不同种类的课程。（usedtodo）Itothesedifferentkindsofclasses,too.2.我开始花费更多的时间读书、做运动和参加一些社会活动。（spendtimedoingsth.）Ibegantoandtakingpartinsomesocialactivities.3.在学习中我没有落后于其他人。（fallbehind）Iothersinstudy.usedtogospendmoretimereading,doingsportsdidn'tfallbehind4.我更喜欢有时间享受自然。（prefertodosth.）Itimetoenjoynature.5.它是了解世界的一种明智的方式。（awisewayto）It'stheworld.6.我经常通过看城市周围的动植物、岩石来好好利用我的空闲时间。（put…togooduse）Ioftenbywatchinganimals,plants,rocksaroundmycity.7.它给予我一个加深我对课本的理解的机会。（offersb.sth.;deepenone‘sunderstanding）Ittoofmytextbooks.prefertohaveawisewaytoknowaboutputmysparetimetogooduseofferedmeanopportunitydeepenmyunderstandingⅡ.句子升格（按括号中的要求改写句子。）1.Itseemsthatmanystudentsgotoafter-schoolclasses.Itisjustawasteoftimeandmoney.（用连词连接两个句子）2.Istillrememberthatday.IwenttotheForestParkthisspringonthatday!（改为含有定语从句的句子）3.NowIambecomingmorecreativeandconfidentthanthose.Thosearealwaysinvolvedintakingafter-schoolclasses.（改为含有定语从句的句子）Itseemsthatmanystudentsgotoafter-schoolclasses,butitisjustawasteoftimeandmoney.IstillrememberthatdaywhenIwenttotheForestParkthisspring!NowIambecomingmorecreativeandconfidentthanthosewhoarealwaysinvolvedintakingafter-schoolclasses.【连句成文】Itseemsthatmanystudentsgotoafter-schoolclasses,butitisjustawasteoftimeandmoney.Iusedtogotothesedifferentkindsofclasses,too.ButlaterIrealizedIcouldn'tdothatanymore.Ibegantospendmoretimereading,doingsportsandtakingpartinsomesocialactivities.Meanwhile,Ididn'tfallbehindothersinstudy.Iprefertohavetimetoenjoynature.It'sawisewaytoknowabouttheworld.SoIoftenputmysparetimetogoodusebywatchinganimals,plantsandrocksaroundmycity.IstillrememberthatdaywhenIwenttotheForestParkthisspring!AndIfoundafewplantsappearinginmybiologybooks.Itofferedmeanopportunitytodeepenmyunderstandingofmytextbooks.Learningbyusingisarealpractice.Ihavebenefitedalotfromit.NowIambecomingmorecreativeandconfidentthanthosewhoarealwaysinvolvedintakingafter-schoolclasses.【参考谚语】1.Greathopesmakegreatman.伟大的希望造就伟大的人物。2.Agoodbeginningishalfdone.良好的开端是成功的一半。拓展积累【相关短语】getgoodgrades取得好成绩;fallbehind落后;providesb.withsth.为某人提供某物;bemadat对……疯狂;spendtimewithsb.与某人度过时光;inone'ssparetime在某人空闲时间;getalongwellwith…与……和睦相处;fightagainstsb.与某人对抗;keepthepromise信守诺言【亮点句型】导入主题句1.Recentlywehadasurveyabout…2.Ourschooldidasurveytoaskif…3.Herearetheresultsofthesurveyonhowmyclassspendourluckymoney.4.Here'sareportaboutmygroupmembers'ideas.5.Differentpeoplehavedifferentopinionsabout…文章发展、过渡句1.Somepeoplethinkthat…2.Butothersdon'tagreewiththem.3.Thesurveysaidthatabout30%ofthepeople…4.Thesurveysuggeststhat…5.About90%ofthestudentsagreewiththeidea.Herearethreereasons.6.Firstofall…Secondly…What'smore…文章结尾句1.Allinall,theythinkthat…2.Inmyopinion,weshould…3.Ithinkeveryonehashisownwayof…,butthemostimportantthingisthatweshould…A[2018·随州改编]目前,许多中学生利用周末和节假日上课外补习班,对此人们有不同的看法,请根据下表内容写一篇短文。实战演练赞成者的观点1.Tohelplearnbetterandattendabetterhighschool;2.AvoidspendingtoomuchtimewatchingTVorplayingcomputergames.反对者的观点1.Studentsneedtimetohavearest;2.Toomuchstressisbadforstudents'development.你的观点1.…2.…[注意]（1）文章必须包括所有内容要点,要求语句通顺,意思连贯;（2）词数:80词左右（文章的开头已给出,不计入总词数）;（3）文中不得提及具体人名、校名及地名。Nowadays,manymiddleschoolstudentsaretakingallkindsofafter-schoolclassesatweekendsoronholidays.Therearetwodifferentopinionsaboutit.SomepeoplethinkthatOnepossibleversion:Nowadays,manymiddleschoolstudentsaretakingallkindsofafter-schoolclassesatweekendsoronholidays.Therearetwodifferentopinionsaboutit.Somepeoplethinkthattakingafter-schoolclassescanhelpstudentslearnbetterandgetintoagoodhighschool.What'smore,studentscanavoidspendingtoomuchtimewatchingTVorplayingcomputergames.However,othersthinkstudentsneedtimetorestandrelax.After-schoolclassescancausealotofstressforstudentsanditisnotgoodfortheirdevelopment.Inmyopinion,ifnecessary,wecantakeafter-schoolclasses,butitcan'ttakeuptoomuchtime.Weshouldfirstrestwellatweekendsandonholidays.B[2019·邢台模拟]假如你是李华,你们班正在围绕“网购的利与弊”展开讨论。请你根据以下提示和要求,写一篇发言稿,谈谈你的看法。[提示]（1）What'syouropinion?（2）Whydoyouthinkso?[要求]（1）发言稿须包含所有提示内容,可适当发挥;（2）短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名;（3）词数:80左右（开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数）。[参考词汇]onlineshopping网购Hello,everyone!Iamgladtostandheretosharemyopinionswithyou.IthinkThat'sall.Thanksforyourattention!Onepossibleversion:Hello,everyone!Iamgladtostandheretosharemyopinionswithyou.Ithinkonlineshoppinghasseveraladvantages.First,wecanshopatanytime.Itcansaveourtime.Second,weonlyneedacomputerandamousetoshopontheInternet.Third,wecancomparethepricesofthesamep