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话题写作（八）学习提高【话题点睛】针对的话题主要关于课堂学习方式与方法、课堂学习情况的评价、课外学习与提升等方面。主要涉及描述学校学习情况、帮助同学解决学习问题、通过阅读或其他方式进行自我提升等方面。小组合作是一种重要的课堂学习方式。请你根据以下要点,以“StudyinginGroups”为题,用英语写一篇短文。[要点提示]（1）Advantages:improvetheabilitytoremembersomething,learntogetalongwithothers,encourageoneanother,savetime;（2）Experience:anunforgettableexperienceofstudyingingroups;（3）Youropinions.典例分析[要求]（1）词数:不少于80（短文的首句已给出,不计入总词数）;（2）要点提示均须涉及,可适当增加内容;（3）字迹工整,卷面整洁,文意连贯,语言流畅;（4）不用真实姓名、校名、地名。StudyinginGroupsItisveryimportantforustostudyingroups.【思路点拨】1.要点提炼:主题是描述小组合作学习。共有3个要点:（1）描述小组合作学习的优点;（2）叙述小组合作学习的经历;（3）表达对小组合作学习的一些观点。2.确定时态:一般现在时和一般过去时。3.确定人称:第一人称。【写作架构】【基础写作】Ⅰ.写主干句（根据所给提示补全下列各句。）1.它确实帮助我对所学知识有更好的理解。（haveabetterunderstandingof…）Itreallyhelpsmehavea.2.她鼓励我勇敢地和我的同学交流。（encouragesb.todosth.）Shememyclassmatesbravely.3.我可以很快地找到解决问题的方法。（findout;dealwith）Icouldquicklythetotheproblems.betterunderstandingofwhatI'velearnedencouragedtocommunicatewithfindoutwaysdealwith4.第一次我自己完成了英语作业。（byoneself）ImyEnglishhomework.5.在同学的帮助下,我更加自信。（withone'shelp）,Igetmoreconfidence.6.知识来源于交流和质疑。（comefrom）Knowledgecommunicatingand.finishedbymyselfforthefirsttimeWithmyclassmates'helpcomesfromquestioningⅡ.句子升格（按括号中的要求改写句子。）1.Wecanlearntogetalongwellwithothers.Wecanalsoencourageoneanother.（改为并列句）2.Studyingingroupssavestime.Studyingonone'sownwastestime.（用比较级进行对比）3.ButIwasveryshy.Icouldnotdoitlikewhatshetoldme.（用too…to…改写句子）Wecanlearntogetalongwellwithothersandencourageoneanother.Studyingingroupssavesmoretimethanstudyingonone'sown.ButIwastooshytodoitlikewhatshetoldme.4.Ididnotunderstandanyquestions.Theycouldgivemesomeadvice.（改为含时间状语从句的句子）5.Iwasexcited.（改为感叹句）6.Withthehelpofmyclassmates,Ihadmoreconfidencetostudyanddidn'tworryaboutEnglishanymore.（改为强调句,强调withthehelpofmyclassmates）WhenIdidnotunderstandanyquestions,theycouldgivemesomeadvice.HowexcitedIwas!It'swiththehelpofmyclassmatesthatIhadmoreconfidencetostudyanddidn'tworryaboutEnglishanymore.【连句成文】StudyinginGroupsItisveryimportantforustostudyingroups.First,wecanimproveourabilitytoremembersome-thing.Second,wecanlearntogetalongwellwithothersandencourageoneanother.What'smore,studyingingroupssavesmoretimethanstudyingonone'sown.Lastbutnotleast,itreallyhelpsmehaveabetterunderstandingofwhatI'velearned.IstillrememberthatwhenIwasinGrade8,myEnglishwasverypoor.Ihadareallyhardtimewithit.Onceinclass,theEnglishteacheraskedustodiscussanissuewithoneanother.ButIwastooshytodoit.Thensheencouragedmetocommunicatewithmyclassmatesbravely.Itookadeepbreathtofaceit.WhenIdidnotunderstandanyquestions,theycouldgivemesomeadvice.Icouldquicklyfindoutthewaystodealwiththeproblems.Afterthat,IfeltveryrelaxedandaskedmyclassmatesalotofquestionsaboutEnglish.Atlast,IfinishedmyEnglishhomeworkbymyselfforthefirsttime.HowexcitedIwas!It'swiththehelpofmyclassmatesthatIhadmoreconfidencetostudy.Studyingingroupsalsogivesmemorechancestoimprovemyselfinmanyways.Knowledgecomesfromcommunicatingandquestioning.【参考谚语】1.Practicemakesperfect.熟能生巧。2.Nopain,nogain.不劳则无获。3.Thereisnoroyalroadtolearning.学问之道无捷径。4.Itisnevertoooldtolearn.活到老,学到老。拓展积累【亮点句型】导入主题句1.Asagoodlearner,weshouldhavegoodhabitsandwaysoflearning.2.Withthedevelopmentofsociety,it'sourdutytostudy.3.Thoughwearemiddleschoolstudents,weneedtoequipourselveswithknowledge.4.Whatwelearntodaywilldecidewhatwewillbecometomorrow.文章发展、过渡句1.Firstofall,weneedtogetreadyforourlessonsbeforeclass.2.Butthat'stheproblem“Howcanwelearnitwell?”3.What'smore,ifwehaveproblems,we'dbetteraskothersforhelp.4.Stepbystep,Imadegreatprogressinmystudy.文章结尾句1.Inaword,onlywhenyoudevelopinterestinstudyingcanyoustudywell.2.Practicemakesperfect.Aslongaswepractisespeakingmore,wearesuretomakegreatprogress.3.Inmyopinion,weshouldkeepworkinghardtomakeabrightfuture.A[2018·高碑店一模]假如你是李华,你们班的英语成绩不是很理想,为了鼓励同学们学好英语,你们班要召开一次主题班会。请你写一篇英语短文,鼓励同学们多做一些课外阅读,强调课外阅读对英语学习的重要性。内容包括以下几个方面:（1）Theimportanceofafter-classreading.（2）Learnhowtochoosebooks.（3）Payattentiontoreadingskillsandmethods.实战演练[注意]（1）短文应包括所给内容要点,可适当发挥,使文章连贯;（2）文中不得提及考生所在的学校及姓名;（3）词数:80左右（开头已给出,不计入总词数）。Hi,everybody.IamLiHua.IthinkeverystudentwantstostudyEnglishwellinourclass.Onepossibleversion:Hi,everybody.IamLiHua.IthinkeverystudentwantstostudyEnglishwellinourclass.Firstly,Ithinkit'sveryimportantforustodomoreafter-classreading,becauseitisnotenoughforustolearnEnglishwellonlyintheEnglishclassandbydoinghomework.Secondly,weshouldchoosetherightbookstoread.Weshouldchoosethebooksthatweareinterestedin.What'smore,thebooksthatwechooseshouldnotbetoohardortooeasy.Besides,thosebooksshouldbeusefulandhelpfultous.Thirdly,forsomebooks,wecanlookthroughtogetthemainidea.Whileforotherbooks,weshouldreadcarefullyandtakenotesaswell.Ifnecessary,weshouldturntothedictionaryforsomekeywords,becausethedictionaryisourbestteacher.B[2019·保定模拟改编]众所周知,良好学习习惯的养成对中学生极为重要。请你以“Howtodevelopourgoodlearninghabits”为题写一篇英语短文,向同学们提出建议。[提示]（1）Whatdoyouusuallydobeforeclass?（2）Whatdoyouusuallydoinclass?（3）…[要求]（1）短文须包括提示中的两个要点和一个补充要点,可适当发挥;（2）短文中不得出现真实的地名、校名和人名;（3）词数:80左右（开头已给出,不计入总词数）。HowtodevelopourgoodlearninghabitsWeallknowthatitisveryimportantforustodevelopourgoodlearninghabits.