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话题写作（六）安全问题【参考谚语】1.Cautionistheparentofsafety.小心驶得万年船。2.Safetyisacommodity.安全就是商品。3.Safetyfirst!安全第一!常用表达【话题点睛】该话题主要涉及如何保护人身安全、校园安全、交通安全等,此类话题常以要点提示的方式来考查。【相关短语】callthepolice报警;askteachersforhelp向老师寻求帮助;goupstairs/downstairs上/下楼;withoutpermission未经许可;keepawayfrom远离……;howtoprotectourselves如何保护我们自己;followtheschoolrules遵守学校规则;obeythetrafficrules遵守交通规则;bestrictwith对……要求严格【亮点句型】安全与自我保护1.Whenweareindanger,weshouldcallthepoliceoraskteachersforhelpintimesothatwecankeepourselvessafe.2.Self-protectionisoneofthemostimportantskills,especiallyforteenagers.3.It'sdangeroustoswimintheriveralone,sodon'tgototheriverwithoutpermission.4.Allinall,weneedtolearnhowtoprotectourselvesandstayawayfromdanger.安全规则及建议1.Weshouldn'tcrowdorpusheachotherwhenwegoupstairsordownstairsatschool.2.Tobesafer,weshouldkeepawayfromtheInternetbar,andgotoschoolandgobackhomeontime.3.Whenwe'refacinganaccident,thefirstandmostimportantruleistostaycalm.4.Friendscanmakeourlifecolorful,butwemustbecarefultomakefriends,especiallyonline.Ⅰ.根据汉语意思完成句子。1.我们应该尽我们最大的努力来确保我们是安全的。Weshouldtryourbesttowearesafe.2.我们需要和同学们友好相处。Weneedtoourclassmates.基础写作makesuregeton/alongwellwith3.对我们来说,多吃健康的食物和遵守交通规则是重要的。It'simportantforustoeatmorehealthyfoodand.4.我们必须对自己严格要求。Wemustourselves.5.司机立刻打了120电话,救护车马上就到了。Thedriver120atonceandanambulancecame.obey/followthetrafficrulesbestrictwithcalledinnotimeⅡ.用括号内所给的单词或短语,将下列句子译成英语。1.自我保护对青少年来说是最重要的技能之一。(self-protection)2.如今学生的安全变成了我们所有人的焦点。(focus)Self-protectionisoneofthemostimportantskillsforteenagers.Todaystudents'safetyisbecomingthefocustousall.3.无论你是谁,做什么,安全是最重要的。(nomatter)4.当我们交朋友时,尤其是在网上,我们应该小心一点。(becareful)5.我们在学校应该遵守校规。(followrules)Weshouldbecarefulwhenwemakefriends,especiallyonline.Nomatterwhoyouareandwhatyoudo,safetyisthemostimportant.Weshouldfollowtheschoolrulesatschool.近几年来,校园欺凌(schoolbullies)事件时有发生,学会自我保护是我们中学生需要具备的一种意识和能力,我们应该珍惜生命,注意自己的人身安全,做好自我保护。请以“HowCanWeProtectOurselves?”为题,写一篇英语短文,谈谈在生活中我们应该怎样自我保护(self-protection)。[提示](1)不单独游泳;(2)谨慎交友;(3)遇到危险报警或向老师求助;(4)饮食及交通安全等。典例分析[要求](1)词数:80-100;(2)字迹工整,语法正确,意思连贯,合乎逻辑,可适当发挥。HowCanWeProtectOurselves?【思路点拨】1.要点提炼：主题是“生活中我们怎样自我保护”,可从以下几个方面展开:不单独游泳、谨慎交友、遇到危险报警或向老师求助、饮食及交通安全等。2.本文是提建议类文章,注意should,can等情态动词的应用。3.确定时态：一般现在时4.确定人称：第一人称为主【写作架构】【佳作赏析】HowCanWeProtectOurselves?Self-protectionisoneofthemostimportantskillsforteenagers.Weshouldtryourbesttomakesurewearesafe.Buthowcanweprotectourselves?Herearesomesuggestions.First,summeriscoming.Wemustrememberit'sdangeroustoswimaloneintheriver.Second,weshouldbecarefulwhenwemakefriends,especiallyonline.Third,whenweareindanger,weshouldcallthepoliceoraskteachersforhelpintimesothatwecankeepourselvessafe.Fourth,weshouldobeytrafficrules.Besides,weneedtoeathealthilyandsafely.Last,weshouldn'tcrowdorpusheachotherwhenwegoupstairsordownstairsatschool.Allinall,weneedtolearnhowtoprotectourselvesandstayawayfromdanger.【名师点评】1.文章根据要点提示,逐一地阐述了如何保护自己,远离危险,并做到了适当展开,详略得当。2.本文结构合理,思路清晰。开头:引出话题。正文:提出自我保护的方法。结尾:总结提醒。全文句式多样化,简单句和复合句相结合使用,使文章错落有致,给人良好的阅读体验。A[2019·南充改编]近年来,学生意外伤害事故频发,给许多家庭带来永久的伤痛。作为中学生,我们该如何有效地自我保护,免受伤害呢?我市正在举行以“HowtoKeepSafe”为题的中学生安全知识英语征文比赛,请你根据下表提示,写一篇短文参赛吧。实战演练HowtoKeepSafeTraffictrafficlights,electricbikes(电动车)…Swimmingrivers,swimmingpool…InternetIDnumber,code(密码),unhealthywebsites………[要求](1)短文必须包含三个所列要点和一个补充要点;(2)文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名;(3)词数:80左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。HowtoKeepSafeDoyouknowthatmanydangerousthingswillhappenifwearenotcarefulenough?Asastudent,knowinghowtokeepsafeisveryimportant.Afterall,lifeisveryimportant.Weshouldlearnsomethingaboutself-protectionsothatwecanprotectourselveswell.Onepossibleversion:HowtoKeepSafeDoyouknowthatmanydangerousthingswillhappenifwearenotcarefulenough?Asastudent,knowinghowtokeepsafeisveryimportant.First,weshouldobeythetrafficrules.Whenthelightsarered,weshouldn'tcrosstheroad.Andweshouldn'tridetheelectricbicycles.Second,weshouldn'tswimintheriverbecauseit'sdangerous.Wecangoswimmingwithourparentsinaswimmingpool.Third,weshouldn'ttellstrangersourIDnumberorcodewhenwearesurfingtheInternet.Weshouldn'tsurfunhealthywebsites.What'smore,weshouldn'tgooutwithourfriendswithoutourparents'permission.Ifweareindanger,wecanaskforhelpfromourparentsorteachers,eventhepolice.Afterall,lifeisveryimportant.Weshouldlearnsomethingaboutself-protectionsothatwecanprotectourselveswell.B[2019·北京]假如你是李华,你们学校正在开展“安全月”宣传活动,倡议大家制作关于安全教育的主题海报,你们班交换生Peter给你发邮件询问相关事情。请用英语回复一封邮件,告诉他海报上交的时间,并分享你设计海报的一些想法。[提示词语]design,safetyrule,careful,protect,picture[提示](1)Whenshouldyouhandintheposter?(2)WhatwouldyouliketosharewithPeteraboutdesigningtheposter?DearPeter,I'mgladtoreceiveyouremail.IfthereisanythingmorethatIcanhelpwith,pleaseletmeknow.Yours,LiHuaOnepossibleversion:DearPeter,I'mgladtoreceiveyouremail.Safetyplaysanimportantpartinourdailylife.RecentlyourschoolishavingSafetyMonthactivities.Ourteacherasksustodesignpostersaboutsafety.IhavefinisheditalreadyandIwillhanditintomorrow.Iwouldliketosharemyposterwithyou.Onmyposter,Imadesomesafetyrules,suchasnevergoswimmingintheriverorthelakealone,becarefulonourwaytoschoolorhome,nevereatjunkfood,goawayfromdangerousplacestoprotectourselvesand