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话题写作（五）快乐成长【话题点睛】话题主要包括成长过程、成长烦恼及成长感悟等。涉及的要点:1.成长体验及感悟;2.成长烦恼与困惑;3.关于更好地成长的方法与建议。你的初中生活即将结束。此时此刻,正是回顾过去,展望未来之际。请写一篇英语短文,谈谈你对初中三年学习生活的感受和对高中生活的向往。短文须包括如下要点:（1）师生关系;（2）学业成就;（3）生活乐趣;（4）感受初中;（5）向往高中。[注意]（1）语言通顺,要点齐全,意思连贯,条理清楚;（2）词数:100左右。典例分析【思路点拨】1.要点提炼:主题是回顾初中生活,展望高中生活。文章有两个要点:（1）回顾初中生活;（2）展望高中生活。2.确定时态:一般现在时和现在完成时。3.确定人称:第一人称。【写作架构】【基础写作】Ⅰ.写主干句（根据所给提示补全下列各句。）1.我甚至一度进入我们班的前三名。（getinto;thetop）Ieveninourclassonce.2.我已经在常规课程上取得了巨大进步。（makeprogress）I'veinregularacademicclasses.3.我也喜欢做其他的事情,包括参加各种俱乐部。（including）Ialsoenjoymyselfindoingotherthings,.gotintothetopthreemadehugeprogressincludingjoiningvariousclubsⅡ.句子升格（按括号中的要求改写句子。）1.They'veaccompaniedmeformorethan1,000days.It'squiteunbelievable.（用形式主语it改写句子）2.Theyhelpedmemakehugeprogressinregularacademicclasses,especiallyEnglishandmaths.（用withone'shelp改写句子）3.Myseniorhighschoolwillbemoremeaningful.（用Ibelieve改写句子）It'squiteunbelievablethatthey'veaccompaniedmeformorethan1,000days.Withtheirgreathelp,I'vemadehugeprogressinregularacademicclasses,especiallyEnglishandmaths.Ibelievethatmyseniorhighschoolwillbemoremeaningful.【连句成文】I'llgraduatefrommyjuniorschool.Atthemomentoflookingbackatthethreeyearsandlookingforwardtotheseniorhighschoollife,manywordshavecometomymind.Thefirsttopopintomymindaremyteachers.It'squiteunbelievablethatthey'veaccompaniedmeformorethan1,000days.Franklyspeaking,wearemorethanteacherstostudents,butfriends,Isuppose.Withtheirgreathelp,I'vemadehugeprogressinregularacademicclasses,especiallyEnglishandmaths.What'smore,Ievengotintothetopthreeinourclassonce.Besidesstudy,Ialsoenjoymyselfindoingotherthings,includingjoiningvariousclubs,doingsportswithmyniceclassmatesandthestaff.However,thosegoldendaysfulloflaughterandtearsaregone.Inaword,myjuniorschoollifeisanunforgettableexperience.AndIbelievemyseniorhighschoollifewillbemoremeaningful.【参考谚语】1.Timeflies.时光易逝。2.AllroadsleadtoRome.条条大路通罗马。3.Nothingisdifficulttothemanwhowilltry.世上无难事,只要肯登攀。4.Godhelpsthosewhohelpthemselves.天助自助者。拓展积累【亮点句型】导入主题句1.Asweknow,therearemanywaystorealizeourdreams.2.Everycoinhastwosides.Thereisnotonlysadnessbutalsohappinessinourlife.Butwhatshouldwedotohaveahappylife?3.Thereisnodoubtthateveryonehastofacedifficultiesinhislife.Weshouldtreattheminaproperway.4.Peoplealwayssaythatlifecan'tgoonwellallthetimebecausewewillmeetallkindsofdifficulties.文章发展、过渡句1.Firstofall,weneedtorealizethatdifficultyisapartoflifeandweshouldgetusedtoit.2.Next,weshouldbepositivetofindoutwaystodealwiththedifficultieswemeet.3.Ontheotherhand,weshouldfindthehappinessaroundusbyheart.4.What'smore,weshouldbelieveinourselves.文章结尾句1.Nomatterwhatwesuffer,weshouldstillbelievethattheharvestaftertheeffortisbeyondourexpectation.2.Nomatterwhatyoudo,themostimportantthingistoenjoytheprocessinsteadoftheresult.3.Thepleasurewegetmakesusproud.4.Inmyopinion,whenwefacethedifficulttime,weshouldconsideritasatestforusandwhenwegetthroughit,wewillgainvaluableexperience.A[2019·邯郸一模]每个人在成长过程中,都会遇到很多不同的困惑,但为实现梦想我们应该克服困难,解决问题。现阶段,你有什么困惑吗?请以“MyTroublesatPresent”为题,并根据以下提示和要求用英语写一篇短文。[提示]（1）Whatareyourtroublesatpresent?（2）Whatwillyoudotosolvethesetroubles?实战演练[要求]（1）短文须包括所有提示内容,可适当发挥。（2）文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。（3）词数:80左右（开头已给出,不计入总词数）。MyTroublesatPresentDuringtheprocessofmygrowth,Ihavemetdifferenttroubles.Onepossibleversion:MyTroublesatPresentDuringtheprocessofmygrowth,Ihavemetdifferenttroubles.IamateenagerandIhaveaproblemjustlikeanyotherteenagerstoo.Ithinkmyproblemisrelatedto“WhatwouldIdowhenIgrowup?”ThisissomethingIreallyhavenoanswerformyself.IamworriedabouthowIbehaveatschool.Iamalsoworriedaboutwhatotherteenagerswillthinkofmeiftheywouldliketobemyfriends.IthinkthemostdifficultquestionformeistofindoutwhatIlikeandwhatIdon'tlike.Isthereanyonewhocanhelpme?IthinkIprobablywouldgotomyteacherforhelp.B[2019·临沂改编]时光荏苒,初中三年转瞬即逝。跟三年前的自己相比较,你会有很多变化。英语课堂上,老师让以“Ihavechangedalot!”为题,用英语写一篇演讲稿,具体描述自己发生的变化。[提示]（1）Whatdidyouusetobelike?（2）Whatisthemostimportantchange?（3）Andhowdidithappen?Tellastoryaboutit.[要求]（1）短文中不要出现真实的地名、校名和人名。（2）词数:80左右（开头已给出,不计入总词数）。Ihavechangedalot!Ihavechangedalotinthepastthreeyears.Onepossibleversion:Ihavechangedalot!Ihavechangedalotinthepastthreeyears.Iusedtobereallyshortandthin.Iusedtobeshyandquiet.Iwasalwayssilentinclass.ButnowIhavechangedalot.OneofmymostimportantchangesisthatIbecomemoreoutgoing.Whatmademechangealot?IrememberwhenIwasinGradeEight,therewasanEnglishspeechcontestinourschool.Iwantedtotakepartinit,butIwasafraidofit.OurEnglishteacher,Mr.Wang,encouragedmetotakepartinit.Heguidedmealot,andIpractisedhardeveryday.Finally,Iwonthefirstprizeinthespeechcontest.Ifeltveryproudandhappy.Sincethen,Ihavebecomemoreoutgoing.