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话题写作（二）安全问题【话题点睛】该话题主要涉及如何保护人身安全、校园安全、交通安全等。此类试题常以要点提示的方式来考查。树立自我保护意识,健康快乐地成长是每个青少年的必修课。下面是某地关心下一代工作委员会为青少年编写的《青少年自我保护、健康成长手册》的部分内容。作为一名中学生,写一篇文章,内容包括:①陈述你是怎样践行手册中提及的三条事项的;②补充至少一条你认为重要的其他事项。典例分析[要求]（1）语言通顺,要点齐全,意思连贯,条理清楚,书写规范;（2）文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称;（3）词数:80—100,文章的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。Self-protectionisoneofthemostimportantskillsforteenagers.ButhowdoIprotectmyselfandgrowuphealthily?Nowletmesharemyexperienceandideaswithyou.First,Inshort,ifweobeytherulesandtakecareofourselves,wewillgrowupsafelyandhealthily.【思路点拨】1.要点提炼:主题是关于提高中学生的自我保护意识。文章主要有两个要点:（1）描述已给出的安全措施;（2）提出自己的建议。2.确定时态:一般现在时。3.确定人称:第一人称。【写作架构】【基础写作】Ⅰ.写主干句（根据所给提示补全下列各句。）1.直到交通灯变成绿色我才会过马路。（not…until…）Igountilthetrafficlight.2.我经常吃得比较健康和安全。（healthily;safely）Iofteneat.3.吃太多的快餐将对我们的身体造成伤害。（doharmtosth.）fastfoodwillourbodies.4.我想给你们一些建议。（wouldliketodosth.）giveyousomeadvice.won'tturnsgreenhealthilyandsafelyEatingtoomuchdoharmtoI'dliketoⅡ.句子升格（按括号中的要求改写句子。）1.Obeyingthetrafficrulesisthemostimportant.（用“Nothingis+比较级+than…”改写句子）2.Eatingmorefruitandvegetablesisimportant.（用it作形式主语改写句子）3.Ialwayscrossthezebrawalk.It'ssafe.（用because改写句子）Nothingismoreimportantthanobeyingthetrafficrules.It'simportanttoeatmorefruitandvegetables.Ialwayscrossthezebrawalkbecauseit'ssafe.【连句成文】Self-protectionisoneofthemostimportantskillsforteenagers.ButhowdoIprotectmyselfandgrowuphealthily?Nowletmesharemyexperienceandideaswithyou.First,nothingismoreimportantthanobeyingthetrafficrules.Ineverruntheredlight.Whenthetrafficlightisred,Iwon'tgountilitturnsgreen.Ialwayscrossthezebrawalkbecauseit'ssafe.Second,Iofteneathealthilyandsafely.It'simportanttoeatmorefruitandvegetables.Eatingtoomuchfastfoodwilldoharmtomybody.Third,Inevermeetstrangersalone,especiallyfriendswhoImakeontheInternet.Atthesametimeifwearetruefriends,weshouldhelpeachother.What'smore,I'dliketogiveyousomeadvice.Nowsummeriscoming.Inmyopinion,it'sdangerousforustoswimalone,especiallyindeeplakesorrivers.Sodon'tdothat.Inshort,ifweobeytherulesandtakecareofourselves,wewillgrowupsafelyandhealthily.【参考谚语】1.Cautionistheparentofsafety.小心驶得万年船。2.Accidentswillhappen.天有不测风云。3.Bettersafethansorry.谨言慎行不吃亏。拓展积累【相关短语】callthepolice报警;askteachersforhelp向老师求助;goupstairs/downstairs上/下楼;withoutpermission未经许可;keepawayfrom远离……;howtoprotectourselves如何保护我们自己;followtheschoolrules遵守校规;obeythetrafficrules遵守交通规则;bestrictwith对……要求严格【亮点句型】导入主题句1.Asmiddleschoolstudents,weshouldlearntoprotectourselvesfromeverypossibledanger.2.Self-protectionisoneofthemostimportantskills,especiallyforteenagers.3.Asweknow,moreandmorepeoplepayattentiontostudents'safety.4.Inrecentyears,students'safetyhasbecomeahottopic.文章发展、过渡句1.Ontheonehand,westudentsshouldlearnsomeskillsabouthowtoprotectourselves.2.What'smore,wemustcallthepoliceorourteachersforhelpifweareindanger.3.It'stimeforustotakemeasurestokeepthestudentssafe.4.However,therearesomedangerousthingswhichareharmfultostudents'safetyinourdailylife.文章结尾句1.Inaword,followingthesesafetyrulesabovecanmakeusliveinpeace.2.Learntoprotectourselvessothatwecangrowupsafelyandenjoyourwonderfullife.3.Ihopemoreandmorepeoplecangivetheirhandstohelpstudentsgrowhealthily.4.Inmyopinion,students'safetywillimproveaslongaseffortsaremade.A[2019·南充改编]近年来,学生意外伤害事故频发,给许多家庭带来永久的伤痛。作为中学生,我们该如何有效地自我保护,免受伤害呢?我市正在举行以“HowtoKeepSafe”为题的中学生安全知识英语征文比赛,请你根据下表提示,写一篇短文参赛吧。实战演练HowtoKeepSafeTraffictrafficlights,electricbikes（电动车）…Swimmingrivers,swimmingpool…InternetIDnumber,code（密码）,unhealthywebsites………[要求]（1）短文必须包含三个所列要点和一个补充要点;（2）文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名;（3）词数:80左右（开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数）。HowtoKeepSafeDoyouknowthatmanydangerousthingswillhappenifwearenotcarefulenough?Asastudent,knowinghowtokeepsafeisveryimportant.Afterall,lifeisveryimportant.Weshouldlearnsomethingaboutself-protectionsothatwecanprotectourselveswell.Onepossibleversion:Doyouknowthatmanydangerousthingswillhappenifwearenotcarefulenough?Asastudent,knowinghowtokeepsafeisveryimportant.First,weshouldobeythetrafficrules.Whenthelightsarered,weshouldn'tcrosstheroad.Andweshouldn'tridetheelectricbicycles.Second,weshouldn'tswimintheriverbecauseit'sdangerous.Wecangoswimmingwithourparentsinaswimmingpool.Third,weshouldn'ttellstrangersourIDnumberorcodewhenwearesurfingtheInternet.Weshouldn'tsurfunhealthywebsites.What'smore,weshouldn'tgooutwithourfriendswithoutourparents'permission.Ifweareindanger,wecanaskforhelpfromourparentsorteachers,eventhepolice.Afterall,lifeisveryimportant.Weshouldlearnsomethingaboutself-protectionsothatwecanprotectourselveswell.B[2019·北京]假如你是李华,你们学校正在开展“安全月”宣传活动,倡议大家制作关于安全教育的主题海报,你们班交换生Peter给你发邮件询问相关事情。请用英语回复一封邮件,告诉他海报上交的时间,并分享你设计海报的一些想法。[提示词语]design,safetyrule,careful,protect,picture[提示]（1）Whenshouldyouhandintheposter?（2）WhatwouldyouliketosharewithPeteraboutdesigningtheposter?DearPeter,I'mgladtoreceiveyouremail.IfthereisanythingmorethatIcanhelpwith,pleaseletmeknow.Yours,LiHuaOnepossibleversion:DearPeter,I'mgladtoreceiveyouremail.Safetyplaysanimportantpartinourdailylife.RecentlyourschoolishavingSafetyMonthactivities.Ourteacherasksustodesignpostersaboutsafety.IhavefinisheditalreadyandIwillhanditintomorrow.Iwouldliketosharemyposterwit