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话题写作（四）安全问题【话题点睛】安全问题主要涉及校园安全、交通安全等。关于此类问题的试题常利用要点提示的方式来考查。1.Idon'tthinksixteen-year-oldsshouldbeallowedtodrive.2.Ifweareindanger,wecancallthepoliceforhelpsothatwecankeepourselvessafe.3.Don'tfightwitheachother.4.Safetyisthemostimportantthinginourlife.常用表达5.Weshouldalwayspayattentiontothetrafficonourwaytoschoolorhome.6.Youmustn'twalkacrossthestreetwhenthetrafficlightturnsred.7.Eatmorefruitandvegetablesinsteadofjunkfood.8.It'sdangeroustoplayontheroad.基础写作根据中文提示补全句子(每空一词)。1.你最好不要独自一人在河里游泳。You'dbetterintheriver.2.我认为安全第一。Ithinkmustcome.3.无论在哪里,我们都要尽力确保我们是安全的。Whereverweare,weshouldtrywearesafe.notswimalonesafetyfirsttomakesure4.健康饮食对大家都很重要。Eatingisveryforeveryone.5.当我们处于危难时,要及时求助。Whenweare,wemustaskforhelpintime.6.不允许他们带刀进校。Theyaren'tknivestoschool.healthilyimportantindangerallowedtotake学会自我保护(self-protection)是青少年需要具备的一种意识和能力。请根据以下提示,并结合自己的观点,以“HowCanWeProtectOurselves?”为题,写一篇不少于80词的短文,谈谈在生活中青少年应该怎样进行自我保护。[提示](1)becarefultomakefriends;(2)callthepoliceforhelpwhenweareindanger;(3)eathealthyfood;(4)don'tcrowd(goupstairsordownstairs);(5)neverswimalone。典例分析[要求](1)句子结构准确,要点齐全,内容合理,篇章结构连贯;(2)文中不能出现真实姓名、校名和地名。【思路点拨】1.明确主题:本文是就“如何进行自我保护”这一话题进行阐述的;2.写作要点:(1)慎重交友;(2)遇险报警;(3)安全饮食;(4)上下楼时不要拥挤;(5)不要独自一人游泳。3.确定时态:一般现在时。4.确定人称:第一人称。【写作架构】【佳作欣赏】HowCanWeProtectOurselves?Self-protectionisoneofthemostimportantskillsforteenagers.Buthowcanweprotectourselves?Herearesomesuggestions.First,weshouldbecarefulwhenwemakefriends,especiallyonline.Second,ifweareindanger,wecancallthepoliceforhelpintimesothatwecankeepourselvessafe.Also,weshouldeathealthilyandsafely.Besides,weshouldn'tcrowdeachotherwhenwegoupstairsordownstairs.Finally,assummeriscoming,wemustrememberit'sdangeroustoswimalone.Inshort,everyoneneedstolearnhowtoprotectourselvesandstayawayfromdanger.【名师点评】首先,本文叙述了自我保护需要注意的事项,条理清晰,内容全面、合理。其次,本文语言简洁明了,并正确运用了状语从句及情态动词should,shouldn't,can等,语言丰富多彩,是一篇不错的文章。A树立自我保护意识,健康快乐地成长是每个青少年的必修课。下面是某地关心下一代工作委员会为青少年编写的《青少年自我保护、健康成长手册》的部分内容。作为一名中学生,请你写一篇文章,内容包括:①陈述你是怎样践行手册中提及的三条事项的;②补充至少一条你认为重要的其他事项。实战演练[要求](1)语言通顺,要点齐全,意思连贯,条理清楚,书写规范;(2)文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称;(3)词数:80—100。文章的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。Self-protectionisoneofthemostimportantskillsforteenagers.ButhowdoIprotectmyselfandgrowuphealthily?Nowletmesharemyexperienceandideaswithyou.First,IalwaysobeythetrafficrulesInshort,ifweobeytherulesandtakecareofourselves,wewillgrowupsafelyandhealthily.Onepossibleversion:Self-protectionisoneofthemostimportantskillsforteenagers.ButhowdoIprotectmyselfandgrowuphealthily?Nowletmesharemyexperienceandideaswithyou.First,IalwaysobeythetrafficrulesandIneverruntheredlight.Whenthetrafficlightisred,Iwon'tgountilitturnsgreen.Ialwayscrossthezebrawalkbecauseit'ssafe.Second,Iofteneathealthilyandsafely.It'simportanttoeatmorefruitandvegetables.Eatingtoomuchfastfoodwilldoharmtomybody.Third,Inevermeetstrangersalone,especiallyfriendswhoImakeontheInternet.Atthesametimeifwearetruefriends,weshouldhelpeachother.What'smore,I'dliketogiveyousomeadvice.Nowsummeriscoming,it'sdangerousforustoswimalone,especiallyindeeplakesorrivers.Sodon'tdothat.Inshort,ifweobeytherulesandtakecareofourselves,wewillgrowupsafelyandhealthily.B目前,校园暴力时有发生,已经危害到中学生的身心健康。作为中学生应该懂得如何规范自身的行为习惯,保护自身安全,远离校园暴力。请以“规范自我行为,做个合格中学生”为主题写一篇短文。[内容要求](1)遵守学校纪律,听从老师、家长的教育,严格要求自己;(2)远离网吧,按时上学、回家;(3)待人礼貌、友好,不与同学打架;(4)遇到困难多与父母及老师沟通。[要求](1)必须用到以上信息,可适当发挥;(2)文章中请勿提及真实人名、校名等相关信息;(3)词数:80左右,文章开头已给出,不计入总词数;(4)要求句子连贯,语义通顺,书写规范。[参考词汇]followtheschoolrules,bestrictwith,keepawayfromInternetbars,fightwithCampusviolence(校园暴力)happensfromtimetotimenowadays.Itisharmfultostudents.Ithurtsnotonlyourbodiesbutalsoourminds.Asastudent,Onepossibleversion:Campusviolence(校园暴力)happensfromtimetotimenowadays.Itisharmfultostudents.Ithurtsnotonlyourbodiesbutalsoourminds.Asastudent,itisimportanttoknowhowtobeagoodteenager.Weshouldfollowtheschoolrulestobehavewellatschool.It'sgoodforustoobeyourteachersandourparents.Wemustbestrictwithourselves.Tobesafer,weshouldkeepawayfromInternetbars,andgotoschoolandgobackhomeontime.Asteenagers,weshouldbefriendlytooneanother,anddon'tfightwithclassmates.Ifwehaveanydifficultiesinlife,it'sbesttotalkaboutthemwithourteachersandparents.Inaword,weshouldtryourbesttobehavewell.