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话题写作（六）旅行【话题点睛】以“旅行”为话题的书面表达主要涉及旅游景点介绍、旅游线路介绍及旅游日记等。此类话题写作通常采用要点提示的方式来考查。1.Itwassunnyandhot,sowedecidedtogotothebeachnearourhotel.2.IthinkthebestplacetovisitistheGreatWall.3.Whenwearrivedthere,webegantoclimbthehillatonce.4.We'llbeawayforaboutsevendays.5.Whatapleasanttripitwas!6.Themostimportantthingistokeepsafeontheway.7.Itwilltakeyouabouttwoandahalfhourstogetthere.8.Beijinghasmanyhistoricalandculturalplacesofinterest.常用表达基础写作用括号中所给词的适当形式填空。1.Thetownis(know)fortea.2.It'sthebesttime(visit)theplace.3.We'dbetter(take)somewarmclotheswithus.4.Jimtogetherwithhisparents(be)goingtovisitBeijingtomorrow.5.I'mlookingforwardto(see)yousoon.knowntovisittakeisseeing6.Ihopeallofyouwillenjoy(you).7.Whenwe'refree,wecangotoabeautifulplacetoenjoythe(beautiful)ofnature.8.Everyoneofusjumpedupanddownin(excite)whenwegotthere.yourselvesbeautyexcitement旅游可以放松身心,增长见识……初中毕业在即,很多学生想利用暑假去旅游。请你根据下面的内容提示,为你校英语论坛写一篇短文,向大家推荐一个好去处,并给出旅行建议。[内容提示](1)Whereisthebestplacetogo?(2)Whyistheplacespecial?(3)Whatshouldyoupayattentionto?[要求]80词左右。文章开头已给出,不计入总词数。典例分析It'sagoodideatogotravellingduringthesummervacation.Ithinkthebestplacetovisitis【思路点拨】1.主旨:旅游的好去处;2.要点:(1)旅游的好去处;(2)这个地方的特殊之处;(3)旅游时的注意事项;3.时态:一般现在时;4.人称:第一人称为主。【写作架构】【佳作欣赏】It'sagoodideatogotravellingduringthesummervacation.IthinkthebestplacetovisitisthePalaceMuseum.Asweallknow,thePalaceMuseum,alsoknownastheForbiddenCity,iswonderfulandfamousforitslonghistoryintheworld.Wecanseealotofancientbuildings,includingpalaces,templesandtowers.WhenwevisitthePalaceMuseum,weshouldpayattentiontooursafety.We'dbettergowithourfriendsorfamily.【名师点评】文章结构严谨,行文流畅、规范,不仅指出了故宫是旅游最好的去处,还介绍了它的特殊之处,增强了人文气息。文中运用了as,when引导的从句,提升了文章的档次。A[2018·鄂尔多斯]徒步旅行作为一种新型的户外旅行方式越来越受到人们的青睐。它能够强身健体,让人们的心灵得到放松……根据下面的图表信息,结合个人观点写一篇短文,让更多的人去徒步旅行吧!实战演练[写作要求](1)行文连贯,结构完整,书写工整;(2)短文应包括图表中的全部信息,并按要求适当发挥;(3)词数:80—100,文章开头已给出,不计入总词数;(4)文中不得出现与考生本人相关的真实姓名、校名和地名等信息。Nowadayshikingisgettingmoreandmorepopularamongpeople.Onepossibleversion:Nowadayshikingisgettingmoreandmorepopularamongpeople.It'seasyforyoutodo.Whenyougohiking,youonlyneedtowearcomfortableshoes,properclothes,ahat,sunglassesandsoon.Remembertotakesomethingtodrinkandeattomakesureyouwon'tbethirstyorhungry.Don'tforgettotakesomemedicine,Ithinkit'snecessaryforyoutogooutside.Youcanchoosetohikeinthemountains,inaforest,oralongariver.Therearemanybenefits/advantagesofhiking.Firstly,hikingisagoodwaytobestrong/itcanhelpyoukeephealthy,andyoucanrelaxyourselves.Secondly,youcangetclosetothenatureandenjoythebeautifulscenery/sights,suchasbreathingthefreshairandhearingthebirdssinging,especiallyinthemountainsorinaforest.Themostimportantisthatitcanwidenyourhorizons/openyoureyes/mindbyhiking.Thirdly,duringthetrip,youcanalsomakenewfriendswiththesameinterests,andformclosefriendshipswiththem.What'smore,youareabletolearntobeindependent.Inmyopinion,therearemoreadvantagesthandisadvantages.SoIadviseyoutogohiking./It'sagoodchoicetogohiking!Let'sgohikingtogether!B“读万卷书,行万里路”,旅行是学习的最好方式之一。请以“Travelling”为题,根据下图的提示,写一篇短文,发表你的看法。[注意](1)要点齐全,适当发挥;(2)从图中Sayings部分选择恰当的格言合理利用在短文中;(3)句子及篇章结构准确、连贯,书写规范;(4)词数:80—100;(5)文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、学校及其他任何个人相关信息。[参考词汇]biology生物memory记忆Onepossibleversion:TravellingTravellingisoneofthebestwaysforlearning.Youmayhavereadorheardaboutsomething,butyoucannevergetanexactpictureofituntilyouseeityourself.Seeingisbelieving.Furthermore,ifyouareacarefulobserver,youcanlearnmuchduringyourtravelaboutthegeography,biologyandhistoryoftheplacesyouvisit.Whiletravelling,youcanmeetmorepeopleandmakemorefriends.Youcanalsocreategreatmemoriesforyourlifetime.Nomatterhowwelleducatedyouare,thereisalwaysalotforyoutolearnthroughtravelling.