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话题写作(四)事情介绍【典型例题】你们班进行了一次关于同学们心目中的未来理想工作的调查,下面是调查表的一部分。请根据调查表的内容,以“ADreamJob”为题写一篇英语短文来介绍一下你和你的同学们的性格特点、爱好、理想工作及原因。典例分析NamePersonalityHobbyReasonLiQiangoutgoingreadingTravelforfreeWangLingconfidentwritingMeetmanyinterestingpeopleI………一、审——圈要点、定时态、定人称你们班进行了一次关于同学们心目中的未来理想工作的调查,下面是调查表的一部分。请根据调查表的内容,以“ADreamJob”为题写一篇英语短文来介绍一下你和你的同学们的性格特点、爱好、理想工作及原因。NamePersonalityHobbyReasonLiQiangoutgoingreadingTravelforfreeWangLingconfidentwritingMeetmanyinterestingpeopleI………二、列——列短语,尽可能为习惯用语·forfree·travelaroundtheworld·begoodat/dowellin·makefriends·thereasonwhy·cometrue·notonly…butalso…三、加——定人称(第三人称和第一人称)、定时态(一般现在时)形成句子(因为汉语习惯,学生容易丢掉主语),形成最基础的写作,彻底消除零分或低分作文。LiQiangisoutgoing.Hishobbyisreading.Hecantravelforfree.Hewantstobeatourguide.WangLingisconfident.Herhobbyiswriting.Shewantstobeareporter.Shecanmeetmanyinterestingpeople.I'mhumorous.Myhobbyisacting.Iwanttobeanactor.四、连——添加过渡句、连接词;上下文要连贯——保证基础平均分上下文的连贯性也是评分的一条标准,因此同学们应把写好的句子,根据故事情节,事情发生的先后次序(时间或空间),使用一些表示并列、递进等关系的过渡词进行加工整理,使文章连贯、自然、流畅。Whatwillyoudointhefuture?Accordingtoit,wemadeasurvey.Forexample,LiQiangisoutgoing.Hishobbyisreading.Hecantravelforfree.Hewantstobeatourguide.What'smore,WangLingisconfident.Herhobbyiswriting.Shewantstobeareporter.Becauseshecanmeetmanyinterestingpeople.Asforme,I'mhumorous.Myhobbyisacting.SoIwanttobeanactor.I'msurewecanachieveourdreamjob.五、美——表述地道,句式多变,结构灵活避免Chinglish现象,尽量使用自己熟悉的句型。几种句型可交替使用,以避免重复和呆板。[及时体验]基础句Accordingtoit,wemadeasurvey.发展句Wemadeasurveyaboutwhatthestudentswanttodowhentheygrowup.基础句LiQianglikesreading.升格句LiQiangisfondofreading.基础句WangLing'shobbyiswriting.升格句Sheisinterestedinwriting.Shewantstobeareporter.六、查——典型病例(参见话题一)七、洁——书写定天下!Whatwillyoudointhefuture?Accordingtoit,wemadeasurveyaboutwhatthestudentswanttodowhentheygrowup.Forexample,LiQiangisoutgoing.Heisfondofreading.Hewantstobeatourguide.Ifhebecomesatourguide,hebelieveshecantravelforfree.What'smore,WangLingisconfident.Sheisinterestedinwriting.Shewantstobeareporterbecauseshecanmeetmanyinterestingpeople.Asforme,I'mhumorous.I'mbetteratacting.SoIhopetobeanactor.We'dbetterworkharderthanbeforetoachieveourdreamjob.[2019·德州]假如你是某市第三中学的一名学生,你校正在参加全市文明校园的评选。以下内容是学校根据《山东省中小学文明校园评比细则》列举的部分信息。请你根据表格内容,写一篇英语短文,向社会宣传自己的学校,并谈谈你能为创建文明校园所做的至少一件事,为母校评选文明校园尽一份力。实战演练Teachers'team(师资)①experiencedteachershelpusmakeprogress②friendlyheadteachersgrowasapersonSchoolfacilities(设施)①abiglibraryreadbookstolearnmore②aplaygrounddosports③somesciencelabsfindsomethingnewSchoolenvironment(环境)①differentkindsoftreesandflowersbecleanandbeautiful②safetyeducationclassesprotectourselves………[要求]1.语言通顺,要点齐全,意思连贯,条理清楚,书写规范;2.文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称;3.词数:80-100,短文开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。I'mfromNo.3MiddleSchool.Myschoolismakingitsefforttobeacivilizedschool.Letmeintroduceit.Therearemanyexperiencedteachersinmyschool.Theyhelpusmakeprogressinmanyways.___________________________________________Let'stryourbesttomakeourschoolmorebeautifulandmakeitacivilizedschool.Onepossibleversion:I'mfromNo.3MiddleSchool.Myschoolismakingitsefforttobeacivilizedschool.Letmeintroduceit.Therearemanyexperiencedteachersinmyschool.Theyhelpusmakeprogressinmanyways.Ourfriendlyheadteachersoftencommunicatewithourparentsandteachustogrowasaperson.Abiglibrarystandsinthecenterofmyschool.Itholdsalargenumberofbooks.Wecanenjoybookshereandlearnmoreabouttheworld.Aplaygroundandsomesciencelabsareinmyschool.Wecandosportsandfindsomethingnewafterschool.Ithelpsuskeepfitandhaveacolorfullife.50%ofourschooliscoveredwithplants.Therearedifferentkindsoftreesandflowers.Itiscleanandbeautiful.Weoftenhavesafetyeducationclasses.Wecanlearnhowtoprotectourselves.Asstudents,wemustrespectourteachersandbepolitetoothers.Let'stryourbesttomakeourschoolmorebeautifulandmakeitacivilizedschool.