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话题写作（二）观点建议【典型例题】[2018·包头]假设你是李华,你班同学上周就“Howtogetrelaxed”这一主题进行了讨论。请你根据讨论的情况写一篇总结。内容包括:典例分析【思路点拨】一、审——圈要点、定时态、定人称二、列——短语(尽可能为习惯用语)·Lastweekwehadadiscussionaboutthewaystogetrelaxed…·communicatewithourparentsandfriends·dosports·listentomusic·gotothemovies·travel三、加——加主语,修饰词;定人称(第一人称)、定时态(情态动词)形成句子(因为汉语习惯,学生容易丢掉主语),形成最基础的写作,彻底消除零分或低分作文。Wearesupposedtocommunicatewithourparentsandfriends.Wemustdosports.Weshouldlistentomusic.Wecangotothemovies.Iliketraveling.四、连——添加过渡句、连接词;上下文要连贯——保证基础平均分上下文的连贯性也是评分的一条标准,因此同学们应把写好的句子,根据故事情节,事情发生的先后次序(时间或空间),使用一些表示并列、递进等关系的过渡词进行加工整理,使文章连贯、自然、流畅。Lastweekwehadadiscussionaboutthewaystogetrelaxed…Wegotalotofwaystorelax.Firstly,Ithinkwearesupposedtocommunicatewithourparentsandfriends.Also,inmyopinion,wemustdosports.It'sgoodforourhealth.Atthesametime,weshouldlistentomusic.Itcanmakeusrelaxed.Besides,wecangotothemovies.However,Iliketraveling.Inaword,learninghowtogetrelaxedisnecessary.五、美——表述地道,句式多变,结构灵活避免Chinglish现象,尽量使用自己熟悉的句型。几种句型可交替使用,以避免重复和呆板。[及时体验]Lastweekwehadadiscussionaboutthewaystogetrelaxed…基础句Wegotalotofwaystorelax.升格句Herearesomeofoursuggestionsonhowtogetrelaxed.Firstly,Ithinkwearesupposedtocommunicatewithourparentsandfriends.发展句Sothatwecangetonwellwiththem.或Ifwecommunicatewithourparents,wecangetonwellwiththem.基础句Also,inmyopinion,wemustdosports.升格句Thebestwaytorelaxisplayingsports.发展句It'simportanttokeepushealthyandenergetic.基础句Atthesametime,weshouldlistentomusic.发展句Listeningtobeautifulmusiccanmakeourbrainsbetterrest.基础句Besides,wecangotothemovies.升格句Wemayalsohavemanyothermeaningfulactivitiessuchaslisteningtomusic,goingtothemoviesandtraveling.基础句However,Iliketraveling.发展句Iprefertraveling,becauseIcanlearnmoreknowledgeoutsideclass.六、查——典型病例(参见话题一)七、洁——书写定天下!Lastweekwehadadiscussionaboutthewaystogetrelaxed.Herearesomeofoursuggestionsonhowtogetrelaxed.Firstly,Ithinkwearesupposedtocommunicatewithourparentssothatwecangetonwellwiththem.Besides,asfarasIknow,thebestwaytorelaxisplayingsports.It'simportanttokeepushealthyandenergetic.Atthesametime,wemayalsohavemanyothermeaningfulactivitiessuchaslisteningtomusic,goingtothemoviesandtraveling.Iprefertraveling,becauseIcanlearnmoreknowledgeoutsideclass.Inaword,learninghowtogetrelaxedisnecessary.Ihopethesecanhelpyou.[2019·连云港]减负之后,同学们有了更多的课余时间。某校英语角就“如何让课余生活更有意义?”展开了讨论,大家各抒己见。请你根据下图提示,以“HowToMakeOurSpareTimeMoreMeaningful?”为题,用英语写一篇短文。实战演练[注意]1.短文应包括所给内容要点,可适当发挥,使文章连贯;2.词数:90左右,短文开头已给出,不计入总词数;3.短文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名等信息;4.参考词汇:提升素养promoteliteracy。HowToMakeOurSpareTimeMoreMeaningful?Nowadays,westudentshavemuchmoresparetimethaneverbefore,buthowtomakeoursparetimemoremeaningful?Onepossibleversion:HowToMakeOurSpareTimeMoreMeaningful?Nowadays,westudentshavemuchmoresparetimethaneverbefore,buthowtomakeoursparetimemoremeaningful?Myschoolmatesgivethefollowingsuggestions.First,it'sgoodtohelpourparentsdosomehouseworktoshowourloveforthem.Second,wewillknowmoreabouttheworldbyreading.Third,itisagoodchanceforustogetclosetonatureandrelaxourselves.Inmyopinion,wecandosomesportstomakeusstrongerandhealthier.What'smore,wecanplayanactivepartinsomesocialactivitiesasvolunteerstohelpthoseinneed.Inaword,let'smakefulluseofoursparetimeandpromoteourliteracy.