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话题写作(八)社会热点假定你是李华,你的英国笔友Peter来信询问汉语中一些流行的网络语言的意思,请根据下列提示回一封电子邮件。·点赞(Dianzan):赞同、喜爱·任性(Renxing):随心所欲·秒杀(Miaosha):快速达到目的·土豪(Tuhao):很富有的人·……典例分析[注意](1)词数:80—100;(2)请不要逐句翻译,可适当发挥;(3)文中不能出现真实的校名和人名;(4)邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。DearPeter,AstheInternetisdevelopingfast,moreandmorenewwordsandphraseshavebeencreatedinChina.Herearesomeexamples.Allthebest!Yours,LiHua【思路点拨】1.要点提炼:主题是社会上的一些热点新词汇,有以下几点:(1)介绍网络上的一些流行语及其含义;(2)表达一下自己对此的看法。2.时态:一般现在时3.人称:第二人称和第三人称【写作架构】【基础写作】根据所给提示写句子。1.基础句最流行的词之一是点赞。(oneof)___________________________________________________________________________→升格句(用含有when,agreewith的句式结构扩充和改写此句)______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________OneofthemostpopularwordsisDianzan.OneofthemostpopularwordsisDianzan,whichisoftenusedwhenyouquiteagreewithsomeone.2.基础句你把某人描述为一名土豪。(describe…as)___________________________________________________________________________→升格句(用含有if,mean的句式结构扩充和改写此句)______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________YoudescribesomebodyasaTuhao.IfyoudescribesomebodyasaTuhao,youmeanthatheisveryrich.3.基础句秒杀意思是你可以先于别人完成你的购物订单。(complete）______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________→升格句(用含有comefrom,onlineshopping及定语从句结构扩充和改写此句)______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Miaoshameansyoucancompleteyourshoppingorderbeforeothers.ThephraseMiaoshafirstcamefromonlineshopping,whichmeansyoucancompleteyourshoppingorderbeforeothers.【连句成文】DearPeter,AstheInternetisdevelopingfast,moreandmorenewwordsandphraseshavebeencreatedinChina.Herearesomeexamples.OneofthemostpopularwordsisDianzan,whichisoftenusedwhenyouquiteagreewithsomeone.AnotherexampleisRenxing.WhenyousaysomebodyisRenxing,youmeanthathewilldowhateverhelikes.ThephraseMiaoshafirstcamefromonlineshopping,whichmeansyoucancompleteyourshoppingorderbeforeothers.Butnowit'swidelyusedwhenyouachieveyourpurposeinaveryshorttime.IfyoudescribesomebodyasaTuhao,youmeanthatheisveryrich.YoucanfindlotsofsuchnewChinesewords.Keeplearning,andyou'llknowmoreaboutourlanguageandculture.Allthebest!Yours,LiHua【导入主题】1.Today,moreandmorestudentsareusingtheAPPzuoyebang.2.Theenvironmentalpollutionisworseandworse/moreandmoreserioustoday.3.It'stimeforustodosomethingtosavetheearth.4.Theairhasbeenreallypollutedaroundus.5.TobuildabeautifulChina,wemustprotectourenvironment.拓展积累【文章的过渡、发展】1.ThereisnodoubtthatWeChatwillimproveastimegoesby.2.It'sdifficulttochangethesepeople'sideasinashorttime.3.Firstofall,wecanridebikesorwalktoschoolasmuchaspossible.4.Inmyopinion,agreencityisthekeytoahealthylife.5.Someneighborshaveacomplaintagainstthepeoplewhodosquaredancing.【文章的结尾】1.Ithinkit'sgoodforstudentswhoarehard-working.2.Let'sactnowfromeverythingtosaveourenvironment.3.Wehopeourworldbecomesmoreandmorebeautiful.4.Ifeveryonemakesacontributiontobuildingagreencity,theworldwillbecomeabetterplacetolivein.A[2019·鄂州]现在越来越多的学生使用“作业帮”这个APP来搜查他们不会做的题目。对此,不同的人有不同的看法。请根据以下文字的提示,并适当发表自己的观点,写一篇英语短文。实战演练优点1.及时帮助学生解决在学习中遇到的困难;2.在家就能学习,简单,方便;3.可以选择自己喜欢的老师,学习兴趣更浓缺点1.有的学生假装学习,事实上在玩游戏;2.有的学生不想独立思考,直接照抄答案,他们根本不关心自己的学习,只是虚度光阴你的建议联系实际,给出自己合理的建议[要求](1)词数:80—100(文章首句已给出,不计入总词数);(2)文中不能出现自己的姓名和所在学校的名称及其他相关信息。[参考词汇]convenient方便的,便利的pretendtodo…假装做……thinkindependently独立思考Today,moreandmorestudentsareusingtheAppzuoyebang.Differentpeoplehavedifferentideasaboutit.SomepeoplethinkOnepossibleversion:Today,moreandmorestudentsareusingtheAPPzuoyebang.Differentpeoplehavedifferentideasaboutit.Somepeoplethinkit'suseful.TheAPPzuoyebangcanhelpstudentstosolvedifficultiesintheirstudyintime.It'seasyandconvenientforthem.Theycanstudyathome.Theycanchoosetheirownteacherstheylike,andtheywillbemoreinterestedinstudy.However,othersdon'tthinkso.Theythinksomestudentsjustpretendtostudy,andinfacttheyplaygames.Theydon'twanttothinkindependently,butonlycopytheanswers.Theydon'tcareabouttheirstudyatall.It'sawasteoftime.Ithinkit'sgoodforstudentswhoarehard-working.Theycanstudybetter.Butforstudentswhodon'twanttostudy,it'sverybad.B习总书记在十九大报告中提出要建设美丽中国、推进绿色发展、解决环境问题,这足见习总书记对环保的重视!作为新时代的中学生,应响应习总书记的号召,从我做起,保护环境!请用英语写一篇短文,表达你的想法。[要求](1)词数:80—100;(2)字迹工整,语言流畅,表达准确,逻辑清楚;(3)要有复合句表达。Onepossibleversion:Theenvironmentalproblemsareveryseriousthesedays.Inordertomakeourcountrymorebeautiful,westudentsshoulddosomethingtoprotecttheenvironment.Ithinkweshouldturnoffthelightstosaveelectricitywhenweleavearoom.Andwhenwebrushourteeth,we'dbetterturnoffthetaps.Also,weshouldadviseourparentstotakethebustoworkinsteadofdrivingandusereusablebagswhenshopping.Onlyifweknowwhattodoinourdailylifecanwemakeadifference.Howimportantforustoprotecttheenvironment!