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话题写作(七)观点建议假定你是李华,你的美国朋友Jack来信说他暑假期间要来中国交流学习。他学了两年中文,但是仍然担心用中文交流时会遇到困难。请你用英语给Jack写封回信,提几点建议。[要点](1)大胆自信;(2)放慢语速;(3)借助图画或肢体语言等表达方式。典例分析[要求](1)词数:80—100;(2)可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;(3)信中不能出现与本人相关的信息;(4)开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。[参考词汇]自信的confident;肢体语言bodylanguageDearJack,Howiseverythinggoing?IamverygladtolearnthatyouarecomingtoChinathissummer.Bestwishes!Yours,LiHua【思路点拨】1.要点提炼:主题是寻求与人沟通时的建议,主要有:(1)遇到的问题;(2)给出的建议。2.时态:一般现在时3.人称:第二人称【写作架构】【基础写作】根据所给提示写句子。1.基础句你应当学会如何与其他人交流。(communicatewith)___________________________________________________________________________→升格句(用findit+adj.+todosth.句式结构改写此句)___________________________________________________________________________2.基础句现在全世界广泛使用肢体语言。(use)___________________________________________________________________________→升格句(改为被动语态)___________________________________________________________________________Youshouldlearnhowtocommunicatewithothers.Ifinditnecessaryforyoutocommunicatewithothers.Nowpeopleusebodylanguagewidelyallovertheworld.Nowbodylanguageiswidelyusedallovertheworld.3.基础句对你来说,对自己有信心很重要。(important）___________________________________________________________________________→升格句(用beof+n.+todo句式结构改写此句)___________________________________________________________________________4.基础句我想要分享我的观点。我认为这些观点可能会有帮助。(share;help)___________________________________________________________________________→升格句(改为which引导的定语从句)___________________________________________________________________________Iwanttosharemyideas.Ithinktheideasmighthelp.Iwanttosharemyideas,whichIthinkmighthelp.It'simportantforyoutobeconfidentaboutyourself.It'sofimportanceforyoutobeconfidentaboutyourself.5.基础句我们中国人很友好,因此你没有必要害怕犯错误。(so)______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________→升格句(用含有so…that…的句式结构改写此句)______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________WeChineseareveryfriendly,soyouneedn'ttobeafraidofmakingmistakes.WeChinesearesofriendlythatyouneedn'ttobeafraidofmakingmistakes.【连句成文】DearJack,Howiseverythinggoing?IamverygladtolearnthatyouarecomingtoChinathissummer.It'snotnecessarytoworryaboutyourChinese.I'dliketosharemyideaswhichIthinkmighthelp.First,bebraveenoughtospeakChinesewhenyoucommunicatewithothers.It'sofgreatimportancetobeconfidentaboutyourself.WeChinesearesofriendlythatyouneedn'tbeafraidofmakinganymistakes.Second,it'sbettertospeakslowlyandclearly.Inthisway,youcanmakeyourselfunderstoodmoreeasily.What'smore,sometimesyoucanusedrawingsorpictures.Andasyouknow,bodylanguageisalsowidelyusedintheworldanditreallyworks.Bestwishes!Yours,LiHua【导入主题】1.TodaymanystudentsareinterestedinsurfingtheInternet.Butithasadvantagesanddisadvantages.2.People'sopinionsarealwaysdifferentwhentheytalkaboutit.3.However,eachcoinhastwosides.4.I'dliketosharemyideaswhichIthinkmighthelp.5.Iwanttosharesomeideasthatmightbehelpfultoyou.拓展积累【文章的过渡、发展】1.AsfarasI'mconcerned,studentsshouldusetheInternetproperly.2.Thosewhoareinsupportofitthinkthat…hasalotofadvantages.3.Frommypointofview…4.Thereasonwhy…isthat…5.Ontheonehand…ontheotherhand…6.FromwhatIsaid,Iagreetotheideathat…【文章的结尾】1.Allinall,theworldneedsloveandweshouldbereadytohelpothers.2.Inmyview,Idon'tthinkgradesareimportant.3.Inaword,weshoulddoitinarightway.4.Onlyifweconsiderallthethingsabovecanwetreattheproblemcorrectly.A你们班在本周的班会上以“学生是否应该学习国学”为主题展开了讨论。有些同学持支持态度,也有些同学持反对态度。请你根据下面的提示,以“ShouldStudentsBeEncouragedtoLearnSinology?”为题写一篇短文,并给出你自己的观点。[提示](1)支持者:培养语言学习能力;养成好的行为习惯;传承中华文化;(2)反对者:不考试,没必要;学习紧张,无暇顾及;不感兴趣,浪费时间;(3)你的观点。实战演练Onepossibleversion:ShouldStudentsBeEncouragedtoLearnSinology?Atthisweek'sclassmeeting,wetalkedaboutwhetherstudentsshouldbeencouragedtolearnsinology.Herearetheresults.Somestudentsthinklearningsinologycandeveloptheirabilitytolearnlanguages.Byreadingsomeancientstories,theycanformgoodhabits.Besides,it'stheirdutytopassonthetraditionalChineseculture.Butotherstudentsthinktheywon'thaveexamsonsinologysothattheydon'thavetolearnitatall.What'smore,theyhavenotimetolearnitbecauseoftheirbusystudy.Itisawasteoftime.Inmyopinion,westudentsshouldbeencouragedtolearnsinology.AsChinese,weshouldfeelproudofourrichculture,anditshouldbecarriedforward.B最近,你们班就“是否应该帮助陌生人”展开了讨论,同学们就这一话题意见不一,你的看法如何?根据所提供的信息,以“ShouldWeHelpStrangers?”为题,写一篇短文。原因赞成帮助他人是美德;帮助他人就是帮助自己反对怕陷入麻烦;怕被误解你的观点(至少两点)[要求](1)表达清楚,语法正确,上下文连贯;(2)必须包括表格中所有的相关信息,并适当发挥;(3)词数:100左右(短文的开头已给出,不计入总词数);(4)不得使用真实姓名、校名和地名等。[参考词汇]美德virtueShouldWeHelpStrangers?Recentlyourclasshadadiscussionaboutwhetherweshouldhelpstrangers.Differentstudentshavedifferentopinions.Onepossibleversion:ShouldWeHelpStrangers?Recentlyourclasshadadiscussionaboutwhetherweshouldhelpstrangers.Differentstudentshavedifferentopinions.Somethinkweshouldtrytohelpstrangers.Helpingothersisavirtue,andhelpingothersishelpingourselves.Wemaycomeacrosssometroubleandneedothers'helpsomeday.Ifeveryoneisn'twillingtohelpusjustbecausewearestrangerstothem,it'shardtoimaginewhatourworldwillbelike.However,som