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话题写作(五)情感表达今天是父亲节。假定你是李华,请给你的美国朋友John写一封电子邮件,谈谈你将如何与父亲一起度过这个特别的日子。[要点]·表述你与父亲之间的感情;·为父亲制作一张卡片;·帮助父亲做点事;·陪父亲散步等。典例分析[注意](1)词数:80—100;(2)请不要逐句翻译,可适当发挥;(3)邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。DearJohn,It'sFather'sDaytoday.It'saspecialday,isn'tit?_____________________What'syourplanforFather'sDay?I'mlookingforwardtohearingfromyou.Yours,LiHua【思路点拨】1.要点提炼:主题是由父亲节而想到的自己和父亲之间的一些事情,主要有:(1)与父亲的感情;(2)父亲节的计划。2.时态:一般现在时和一般将来时3.人称:第一人称和第三人称【写作架构】【基础写作】根据所给提示写句子。1.基础句我们应该表达对父亲的爱。(show)___________________________________________________________________________→升格句(改写为含有Father'sDay,to表目的的句子)______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Weshouldshowourloveforourfathers.WeshoulddosomethingtoshowourloveforourfathersonFather'sDay.2.基础句一旦我遇到困难,他总是在我身边随时准备帮助我。(once)____________________________________________________________________________→升格句(改写为含有whenever的复合句)______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________3.基础句爸爸喜欢散步。(takeawalk)___________________________________________________________________________→升格句(改写为含有after的句子)___________________________________________________________________________OnceImeetwithdifficulties,heisalwaysthere,readytohelpme.WheneverImeetwithdifficulties,heisalwaysthere,readytohelpme.Myfatherlikestotakeawalk.Myfatherlikestotakeawalkafterdinner.4.基础句我喜欢和爸爸下象棋。(playchess)___________________________________________________________________________→升格句(改写为含有for,likebest的句子)___________________________________________________________________________Ilikeplayingchesswithmyfather.Ilikeplayingchesswithmyfather,forhelikesitbest.【连句成文】DearJohn,It'sFather'sDaytoday.It'saspecialday,isn'tit?Ithinkweshoulddosomethingtoshowourloveforourfathersonthisspecialday.MyfatherandIaregoodfriends.WheneverImeetwithdifficulties,heisalwaysthere,readytohelpme.TodayIwillmakeabeautifulcardforhimwithmythanksandbestwishesonit.ThenIwillhelphimwashthecarthisafternoonandcookhisfavoritefoodintheevening.Besides,I'lltakeawalkwithhimafterdinnerandthenplaychesswithhim,forhelikesitbest.I'msurehe'llbeveryhappy.What'syourplanforFather'sDay?I'mlookingforwardtohearingfromyou.Yours,LiHua【导入主题】1.Amongallmyfriends,LiHuaimpressedmemost.Sheisalwayskindandhelpful.2.MygrandmotheristhepersonwhoIwanttothankmost.Shehashelpedmealot.拓展积累【文章过渡、发展】1.Heencouragedmetobebrave.Hetoldme,“You'dbetterspeakslowlyandclearly,andinthisway,youcanmakeyourselfunderstoodmoreeasily.”2.Assoonasshefoundoutmyproblems,shetalkedwithmeandgavemesomehelpfuladvice.3.Withherencouragement,Ihavemadegreatprogress.4.Heheldmyhandtightly.Inthisway,Iwasnotafraidanymore.5.Heneverscoldsme.Ialwayslistentohimandfollowhim.【文章的结尾】1.Ireallywanttosay“Thankyouforhelpingme.Iloveyou!”tomygrandmother.2.Iwillalwaysrememberherkindness.3.Whathesaidandwhathedidwillinfluencemeallmylife.4.Iwillneverforgetthewonderfultimeweweretogether.A[2019·郴州]在英语课上,老师将组织以“说出你的烦恼”(Speakoutyourworries)为主题的交流活动。假如你是李华,请根据以下表格中提供的信息,用英语写一篇发言稿,说出你的烦恼和愿望。实战演练WorriesWishes◇toostrict,toomuchhomework…◇littletimeforoutdooractivities…◇hardtocommunicatewith……◇lesshomework…◇morechances…◇getonwellwith……[要求](1)短文须包含表格中的所有信息,并适当发挥;(2)词数:80词左右(短文的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数);(3)文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。Hello,everyone,IamLiHua.I'dliketospeakoutmyworriesandwishes.____________That'sall.Thankyou.Onepossibleversion:Hello,everyone,IamLiHua.I'dliketospeakoutmyworriesandwishes.Iamworriedaboutmyhomework.Ihavetoomuchhomeworktodoeveryday.AndIfeelmuchtoostressed.Ithinkmyparentsaretoostrictwithmeinmystudies.It'sdifficultformetocommunicatewellwithmyparents.Besides,Ialmosthavenotimeformyhobbiesoroutdooractivities.Ihopeourteacherscangiveusmoderatehomeworkeveryday.Ialsohopetogetonwellwithmydearmomanddad.I'mlookingforwardtogettingmorechancestotakemoreoutdoorsports.That'sall.Thankyou.B[2019·天水]“你养我长大,我陪你变老。”父母亲一直在为我们的成长默默付出,成长要学会感受爱、回报爱。今天你即将毕业,是向父母表达感激的好机会。请根据以下所给要点,写一篇英语短文。[要点](1)给我生命,一直照顾我成长;(2)努力工作,为我提供良好的生活和教育条件;(3)拥有爱心,教我学会……;(4)今天,我要为你们……(自主发挥,至少两点)[注意事项](1)词数:80左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数;(2)文中不得出现真实的地名、校名、人名等信息。Youbringmeup.Iwillbewithyouinyourlife.Youareimportantpersonsintheprocessofmygrowth.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Onepossibleversion:Youbringmeup.Iwillbewithyouinyourlife.Youareimportantpersonsintheprocessofmygrowth.Yougivemelifeandtakecareofmeallthetime.WhenIhaveproblemswithmystudyandlife,youarealwayspatientenoughtohelpmeandencourageme.Inordertoletmeliveapleasantlifeandreceivegoodeducation,youalwaysworkhardfrommorningtoeveningeveryday.Youarealsopersonswhohaveaheartfulloflove.Youarereadytohelppeopleinneed.Itisyouwhoteachmetobeakindperson.Inthepast,Ineversaid“Iloveyou”toyou.TodayIwillgraduate,soIwanttosayittoyouloudly.Iwillstudyhardertogetbetterresults.Ihopeyouwillbehappyandhealthyforever.