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话题写作(四)安全问题假定你是王伟,你的英国笔友David来信问及你们学校在暑假期间对学生的要求。请你根据以下要点给他回一封电子邮件。·家庭安全:小心用火用电,外出时关好门窗;·游泳安全:不独自去游泳,不去河、湖里游泳;·交通安全:过马路时要当心,不在马路上玩耍。[提示词]electricityn.电典例分析[注意](1)词数:80—100;(2)请不要逐句翻译,可适当发挥;(3)邮件中不能出现真实的校名和人名;(4)邮件的开头和结尾已为你写好,不计入总词数。DearDavid,Gladtoreceiveyoure-mail.Ourschoolhasmadesafetyrulesforustofollow.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Ithinktheserulesarenecessaryassafetycomesfirst.Haveagoodsummerholiday!Yours,WangWei【思路点拨】1.要点提炼:主题是暑期安全的注意事项,有以下两点:(1)暑期学生易发生的事故;(2)怎样避免事故的发生。2.时态:一般现在时3.人称:第一人称【写作架构】【基础写作】根据所给提示写句子。1.基础句学生被要求要小心。(beaskedtodo)___________________________________________________________________________→升格句(改写为含有when引导的时间状语从句的复合句)___________________________________________________________________________2.基础句我们应该确保灯关上了。(makesure)___________________________________________________________________________→升格句(改写为含有before的复合句)___________________________________________________________________________Studentsareaskedtobecareful.Studentsareaskedtobecarefulwhencrossingtheroad.Weshouldmakesurelightsareturnedoff.Weshouldmakesurelightsareturnedoffbeforeweleave.3.基础句我们不被允许独自去河里游泳。(beallowedtodo)___________________________________________________________________________→升格句(用especially拓展此句)______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________4.基础句我们必须遵守交通规则。(trafficrules)___________________________________________________________________________→升格句(改写为含有Itis+adj.(+forsb.)+todosth.的句子)___________________________________________________________________________Wearenotallowedtoswimaloneintheriver.Wearenotallowedtoswimalone,especiallyindeepriversorlakes.Wemustfollowthetrafficrules.Itisimportantforustofollowthetrafficrules.【连句成文】DearDavid,Gladtoreceiveyoure-mail.Ourschoolhasmadesafetyrulesforustofollow.Letmetellyousomethingaboutthem.Weareaskedtobecarefulwithelectricitywhenweareusingit.Itisdangeroustoplaywithfire,foritmaycauseterribleaccidents.Weshouldmakesuredoorsandwindowsareshutbeforeweleave.Besides,wearenotallowedtoswimalone,especiallyindeepriversorlakes.Ifwereallywantto,wemustgototheswimmingpoolwithourparentsorteachers.What'smore,followingtrafficrulesisalsoveryimportant.Everyoneshouldwatchoutwhencrossingtheroad.Andourschoolwarnsusnottoplayontheroad.Ithinktheserulesarenecessaryassafetycomesfirst.Haveagoodsummerholiday!Yours,WangWei【导入主题】1.Schoolsafetyisimportanttoeverystudent.2.Self-protectionisoneofthemostimportantskills,especiallyforteenagers.3.Everyonehasonlyonelife,soweshouldtreasureourlives.4.Lifeisonlyonceforeveryone.It'simportanttocherishourlives.拓展积累【文章过渡、发展】1.First,weshouldkeepcalmandfindtheexitquickly.2.Soweshouldobeythetrafficruleswhenwegoout.3.Butifweareindanger,weshouldkeepcalmfirst.4.Asforfood,weshouldeatmorehealthyfoodandlessjunkfood.【文章的结尾】1.Theseareourschool'smethodsthattheteachershavetaughtus.2.Inaword,weshouldtryourbesttoprotectourselvesandvalueourlives.3.Allinall,weneedtolearnhowtoprotectourselvesandstayawayfromdanger.A[2019·安顺]请结合以下提示,以“HowCanWeProtectOurselvesatSchool?”为题,写一篇80-100词的英语短文。文中不得出现真实校名和人名。[提示](1)谨慎交友;(2)不参与打架斗殴;(3)面对校园欺凌怎样自我保护。实战演练[参考词汇](1)self-protection(自我保护)(2)bully(n./v.欺凌)(3)personalsafety(人身安全)(4)haveviolentbehaviors(打架斗殴)HowCanWeProtectOurselvesatSchool?Onepossibleversion:HowCanWeProtectOurselvesatSchool?Schoolbullieshappeninalmosteveryschool.Inmyschool,wesometimeshavebulliesandsomestudentsarehurt,soitisreallybadforustobullyothersorbebulliedatschool.Wearesupposedtostopanyschoolbullywhenweareinthetroubleofit.Forexample,weshouldstaycalmbeforeabullyingbehaviorhappens.Weshouldalwaysbefriendlyandhelpfulwhenmakingfriendswithothers.Herearesomeofmyideasaboutstoppingschoolbullies.Firstly,wewilllearnhowtohaveself-protectionbecauseourpersonalsafetyisthemostimportant.Secondly,weshouldbepeacefulwithothersatalltimesandcan'thaveanyviolentbehavior.Finally,obeyingschoolrulesisalsoawaytoavoidschoolbullies.I'mhopingthatnoschoolbullieswillhappenatschoolinthefuture.Doyouthinkso?B[2019·河池改编]“人生没有彩排,生命没有重来”,你平安、健康、快乐地成长是父母最大的心愿。今年6月下旬学校将举办一场以“Keepawayfromthedanger!”为主题的英文演讲比赛。假如你是李华,大家推选你参加这次比赛。请根据以下思维导图提示,写一篇英文演讲稿。[写作提示][要求](1)所有的提示词都须用上,包含以上所有要点,可适当增加细节,使内容充实,行文连贯;(2)演讲稿中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名;(3)词数:80左右(演讲稿的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。Keepawayfromthedanger!Hello,everyone!I'mLiHua.Thedangerisaroundus.Sowemustlearnhowtokeepawayfromthedanger.First,wemustn'tgoswimmingwithoutourparents'orteachers'permission.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Inaword,wemusttryourbesttokeepawayfromthedanger!That'sall.Thankyouforlistening!Onepossibleversion:Keepawayfromthedanger!Hello,everyone!I'mLiHua.Thedangerisaroundus.Sowemustlearnhowtokeepawayfromthedanger.First,wemustn'tgoswimmingwithoutourparents'orteachers'permission.Ifwego,wehavetowearlifejackets.Ontheway,wehavetowalkonthepavement.Wecan'tplaywithourmobi