四六级写作高分策略

四六级写作高分策略1..尽量避免不应该出现的错误：•只有评卷人认可了你语法掌握的水平，他才会抱着宽容甚至欣赏的态度看你的句型设计，用词和例证的援引。CET作文常见错误在实际的阅卷过程中，语法错误，是阅卷人员的主要“照顾点”，，大家可以设想一下，一篇语法上漏洞百出、严重影响表达的作文又会有什么样的好内容呢？因此，认清各种各样的语法错误，尽可能地避免少犯，对于提高作文分是有极大的帮助的。现将阅卷过程中所发现的大量语言错误逐一归类，抽出其中的典型错误，以警示大家。1.句子成分残缺不全Wealwaysworkingtilllateatnightbeforetakingexams.(误)Wearealwaysworking(Wealwayswork)tilllateatnightbeforetakingexams(正)Weshouldreadbookswhichmaybeusefultous.(正)Weshouldreadbooksmaybeusefultous.(误)•2.句子成分多余•Thistestisend,butthereisanothertestiswaitingforyou.(误)••Onetestends,butanotheriswaitingforyou.(正)•Thedriveroftheredcarwasdiedonthespot.(误)•Thedriveroftheredcardiedonthespot.(正)•3.主谓不一致•Someone/Somebodythinkthatreadingshouldbeselective.(误)Somethinkthatreadingshouldbeselective.(正)•Mysistergotothecinemaatleastonceaweek.(误)Mysistergoestothecinemaatleastonceaweek.(正)•4.动词时态、语态的误用•Iwaswalkingalongtheroad,andtherearenotsomanycarsonthestreet.(误)Iwaswalkingalongtheroadandtherewerenotsomanyvehiclesonthestreet.(正)•Wehavelittletimetoreadsomebookswhichweinterest.(误)•Wehavelittletimetoreadsomebooksinwhichweareinterested.(正)•Iamastudentwhohasstudyinginthecollegefortwoyears.(误)•Ihavebeenstudyinginthecollegefortwoyears(正)•5.词类混淆•Itismypointthatreadingmustbeselectively.(误)Inmyopinion,readingmustbeselective.(正)•Honestissoimportantforeveryperson.(误)•Honestyissoimportantforeveryone.(正)•Theoldmanwashitbyacarwhenheacrossthestreet.(误)•Theoldmanwashitbyacarwhenhewascrossingthestreet.(正)•6.名词可数与不可数的误用•Toomuchtestsaredisadvantageforstudents’study.(误)Toomanytestsaredisadvantageoustostudents.(正)•Inthepresident’soffice,wehavefoundnewequipmentsofvariouskinds.(误)•Inthepresident’soffice,wehavefoundnewequipmentofvariouskinds.(正)•7.动词及物与不及物的误用•Thetrafficaccidentwastakenplaceatthejunctionoftwohighways.(误)•Thetrafficaccidenttookplaceatthejunctionoftwohighways.(正)•Becauseofhisexcellentperformance,thebossrosehissalary.(误)•Becauseofhisexcellentperformance,thebossraisedhissalary.(正)•8.介词to和不定式符号的混淆•Toomanytestswilldoharmtocultivateourindependentthinking.(误)•Toomanytestswilldoharmtothecultivationofourindependentthinking.(正)•Allthesecontributedtosolvetheseriousproblem.(误)Allthesecontributedtothesolutiontotheseriousproblem.(正)•9.情态动词的误用•Itmaynotgoodtoourhealth.(误)•Itmaybenotgoodtoourhealth.(正)•Theyshouldspentmuchtime.(误)•Theyshouldspendmuchtime.(正)•10.Therebe句型的误用•Thereexistssomenewproblemssuchasbeingdishonest.(误)•Thereexist/arisesomenewproblemssuchasbeingdishonest.(正)•Therearemanystudentsthinkcollegeeducationisworthwhile.(误)Therearemanystudentswhothinkcollegeeducationisworthwhile.(正)•11.动宾搭配不当•Wemustpayattentiontoitandmakesolutionstotheproblem.(误)•Wemustpayattentionandfindasolutiontotheproblem.(正)•Italsomayhelpyoutomakesuccess.(误)•Itmayalsohelpyousucceed/obtainyourgoal.(正)•12.根据中文逐字硬译•Ifsomeone’sfamilysituationisnotwell,hecanapplyforloantobank.(误)•Ifone’sfamilyisnotwelloff,hecanapplytothebankforaloan.(正)•Letalonetouchtheoutsideworldofcampus.(误)•Letalonegetintouchwiththeworldoutsideofthecampus.(正)•keepagoodbodyhealth.(误)keepfit.(正)2.句型要有变化性•考生不可全以简单句拼凑文章，应主动使用复句、倒装、排比、平行结构及动词短语，体现出良好的语言驾驭能力。以形容词或形容词组开头Marywasverypleasedandtelephonedhermother．→Pleased，Marytelephonedhermother．Thegirl，hungryandthirsty，wentbackhome．→Hungryandthirsty，thegirlwentbackhome．以副词开头Thechildstayedtherequietly．→Quietly，thechildstayedthere．以不定式开头Hegotupveryearlytocatchthebus．→Tocatchthebus，hegotupveryearly．以现在分词或过去分词开头IwasfilledwithanticipationwhenIcamehomefromschoolthatdarkwinter‘sdaysolongago．→Cominghomefromschoolthatdarkwinter‘sdaysolongago，Iwasfilledwithanticipation．Ifyougivemeenoughtime，Icandoitwell．→Givenenoughtime，Icandoitwell．以介词短语开头Chesterlikemanyotheradventurershadexperiencedfearandconqueredit．→Likemanyotheradventurers，Chesterhadexperiencedfearandconqueredit．以同位语开头Sue，ourmonitor，alwayslikesgivingsuggestionstoeverybody．→Ourmonitor，Sue，alwayslikesgivingsuggestionstoeverybody．以从句开头Francishadalreadysurprisedhisfriendsseveraltimesbeforehesailedroundtheworldsingle-handed．→Beforehesailedroundtheworldsingle-handed，Francishadalreadysurprisedhisfriendsseveraltimes．Youwillgreatlyimproveyourfinishedproductifyouhaveaqualitycontrolinspection．→Ifyouhaveaqualitycontrolinspection，youwillgreatlyimproveyourfinishedproduct．3.一定要学会换词，形象具体的代替太宽泛的。（考试中一般不要出现good,bad,many,thing,think,people,opinion等等）eg.Itis,therefore,hightimethatsomeapplicableapproacheswereimplementedbytheserviceindustrylikethat.Thus,itscompetitiveedgewillbesharpenedeffectively.applicable代替proper,approaches代替ways,implement代替carryout,sharpenone''scompetitiveedge代替enhanceone''scompetitiveness（提高某物竞争力）,ComputerandIIneverforgettheexceedinglythrillingdaywhenmymotherboughtmeacomputerasbirthdaypresent,whichexertedatremendousfascinationonmesothatiindulgedmyselfingooglinganarmyofusefulinformationihadexpected,andenjoyaseaofmelodiousclassicmusic.ThatnightIwassleepless,feelingthatthewholeworldbelongedtome.•exceedingly替换very•thrilling替换exciting•sth.exertatremendousfascinationonsb替换sb.beinterestedinsth.•google替换search•anarmyof,aseaof替换alotofThedawnofthenewcenturywitnessedtheincreasingpopularityofcomputer