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Unit3ComputersSectionⅣGrammar&Writing第二板块单元写作想象类作文美文写作指导[文体感知]想象类作文是作者根据已有的生活经验和知识，超越现实生活来勾画出从未见过或者不曾出现过的生活图景的文章。该文体一般分为三段：首段，进行概述；中间部分，具体描述；结尾，对文章进行总结。[增分佳句]1．Myidealrobotinthefuturewillbelike...and...orperhapsitwillhelpme...2．Myidealrobotinthefutureiscalled...3．He/Shedoesalltheworkaroundthehouse.4．He/Sheisverypatientandnevercomplains...5．He/ShecanbewithmewheneverIfeellonely.6．Myidealrobotinthefuturecanworkas/serveas/beusedas...7．Greatchangeswilltakeplaceinthefuture.8．Ibelieveourdreamwillcometruesomeday.9．Haveyoueverthoughtabout...inthenext30or50years?10．Inaddition,therewillbesupercomputersorrobotswhichcanhelpusdo...经典写作示例[写作要求]你们班进行了一次关于未来机器人的讨论。作为你们小组的代表，请你以“Myidealrobotinthefuture”为题写一篇英语短文，向同学们介绍你心目中的理想机器人。注意：词数100左右。[审题谋篇]体裁说明文时态一般现在时主题科技发明人称第三人称结构首段：总体说明理想的机器人中段：对机器人的形态、功能作细致描述尾段：再次概括评价[遣词造句]1．普通表达(1)开头：总体说明①我未来理想的机器人是个漂亮的小女孩，她是蓝色的，身高一米六。Myidealrobotinthefutureisabeautifullittlegirl,and________________________________________.sheisblueandabout1.6metrestall(2)主体：描述形态、功能用途②她是世界上最新的，并且看上去像一个真正的女孩。Sheisthenewestintheworld,andshe________________________.③她很聪明，并且能懂我所说的全部，能做我让她做的事。Sheisveryclever,andcanunderstandallIsayanddo____________________.lookslikearealgirlwhatIaskhertodo④不管我什么时候遇到困难，她都可以帮助我写作业并给我一些建议。Shecan__________________________andgiveme_______________________________________________.⑤她能提醒我任何重要的事，比如：考试，甚至是我的生日。Shecan_______________________________，suchasexamsandevenmybirthday.helpmewithmyhomeworkadvicewheneverImeetwithdifficultiesremindmeofanythingimportantsome⑥她干的家务最多且不用休息。Shedoesthemostofthehousework____________________.⑦有了这样的机器人，我就不会再感到孤独，因为不管我什么时候需要，她都能给我唱歌跳舞。Withsucharobot，I_______________________________becauseshecansinganddancewithme_______________.⑧她会和我一起打网球，并能用话语和手势表达她的感情。她也会分享我的快乐与痛苦。Shecan___________________andcanexpressheremotionswithwordsandgestures.Shesharesmyjoysandsorrows_______.withouthavingarestwon'tfeellonelyanylongerwheneverIneedplaytenniswithmeaswell(3)结尾：再次概括评价⑨在将来拥有这样一个机器人一定会很有趣。Itwillbeveryinteresting___________________inthefuture.toownsucharobot2．高级表达(1)用非限制性定语从句改写句①________________________________________________________________________________________________________(2)用反问句改写句⑨________________________________________________________________________________________________________Myidealrobotinthefutureisabeautifullittlegirl,whoisblueandabout1.6metrestall.Wouldn'titbeveryinterestingtoownsucharobotinthefuture?[妙笔成篇]______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Onepossibleversion:MyidealrobotinthefutureMyidealrobotinthefutureisabeautifullittlegirl,whoisblueandabout1．6metrestall.Sheisthenewestintheworld,anditlookslikearealgirl.Sheisveryclever,andcanunderstandallIsayanddowhatIaskhertodo.ShecanhelpmewithmyhomeworkandgivemesomeadvicewheneverImeetwithdifficulties.Shecanremindmeofanythingimportant,suchasexamsandevenmybirthday.Shedoesthemostofthehouseworkwithouthavingarest.Withsucharobot,Iwon'tfeellonelyanylongerbecauseshecansinganddancetomewheneverIneed.Shecanplaytenniswithmeandcanexpressheremotionswithwordsandgestures.Shesharesmyjoysandsorrowsaswell.Wouldn'titbeveryinterestingtoownsucharobotinthefuture?