四级作文写作策略•1.本题满分为15分。•2.阅卷标准共分五等:2分、5分、8分、11分及14分。各有标准样卷1至2份。•3.阅卷人员根据阅卷标准,对照样卷评分,若认为与某一分数(如8分)相似,即定为该分数(即8分);若认为稍优或稍劣于该分数,则可加1分(即9分)或减1分(即7分)。但不得加或减半分。4.评分标准:•2分—条理不清,思路紊乱,语言支离破碎或大部分句子均有错误,且多数为严重错误。•5分—基本切题。表达思路不清楚,连贯性差。有较多的严重语言错误。•8分—基本切题。有些地方表达思想不够清楚,文字勉强连贯;语言错误相当多,其中有一些是严重错误。•11分—切题。表达思路清楚,文字连贯,但有少量语言错误。•14分—切题。表达思想清楚,文字通顺,连贯性较好。基本上无语言错误,仅有个别小错。•用英文或中文给出提纲(outline),要求按提纲写作,这种提纲经常是以三段的形式给出,又称三段式作文•审题•BenefitsofSports•Howuniversitygraduatesfindwork•开门见山:单刀直入,直截了当。不要兜圈子,绕弯子,第一句话最好就采用“topicsentence”,点明主题,重点突出•根据中、英文提纲,选取素材•书写一定要工整,卷面力求整洁1.“如今,人们普遍认为……但是我怀疑……”2.Nowadays,itisgenerally/commonlybelievedthat...,butIwonderthat...3.“近来,……的问题已经成为人们注目的焦点。”4.Currently,theissueof...hasbeenbroughttopublicattention.5.“随着……的快速增长,……在日常生活中已经变得越来越重要。”6.Alongwiththerapidgrowthof...,...hasbecomeincreasinglyimportantinourdailylife.7.文章结尾句型•“因此,不难得出结论……”•Accordingly/Consequently/Asaresult,itisnotdifficulttodrawtheconclusionthat...•“综上所述,我们能得出如下结论……”•Fromwhathasbeendiscussedabove,wemayreasonablyarriveattheconclusionthat...•“这一难题,是任何人都不可能避免的。但只要处理得当,我们就会……”•Thedilemmaissomethingnoonecanavoid.Properlyhandled,however,wewill...•“总之,全社会都应该密切关注……,只有这样我们才能……”•Allinall,thewholesocietyshouldpaycloseattentiontotheproblemof....Onlyinthiswaycanwe....•“考虑到所有的因素,我们意识到……”•Takingintoaccountallofthesefactors,wehavereachedtherealizationthat...•1.individuals,characters,folks替换people,persons•2.positive,favorable,rosy(美好的),promising(有希望的),perfect,pleasurable,excellent,outstanding,superior替换good。•3.dreadful,unfavorable,poor,adverse,ill(有害的)替换bad,如果bad做表语,可以用belessimpressive替换。•E.g.:Anarmyofcollegestudentsindulgethemselvesinplayinggames,enjoyingromancewithgirls/boysorkillingtimepassivelyintheirdorms.Whenitapproachestograduation,asaresult,theyfindtheiracademicrecordsarelessimpressive.•4.anoceanof,aseaof,替换many。•用many,ifnotmost时一定要小心,many后一定要有词。•例如:Manyindividuals,ifnotmost,harbortheideathat….同理可用most,ifnotall,替换most。•5.asliceof,quiteafew,several替换some。•6.harbortheideathat/taketheattitudethat/holdtheviewthat/itiswidelysharedthat/itisuniversallyacknowledgedthat替think(因为是书面语,所以要加that)。•7.affair,business,matter替换thing。•8.shared替换common。•9.reaphugefruits替换getmanybenefits。•10.formypart,frommyownperspective,frommypointofview替换inmyopinion。•11.increasing(ly),growing替换moreandmore(注意没有growingly这种形式。所以当修饰名词时用increasing/growing,修饰形容词,副词用increasingly。)•例如:sthhasgainedgrowingpopularity.•Sthisincreasinglypopularwiththeadvancementofsth.•12.littleifanything,或littleornothing替换hardly。•13.beneficial,rewarding替换helpful。•14.shopper,client,consumer,purchaser,替换customer。•15.exceedingly,extremely,intensely替换very。•16.hardlynecessary,hardlyinevitable...替换unnecessary,avoidable。•17.sthappealstosb,sthexertsatremendousfascinationonsb替换sbtakeinterestin/sb.beinterestedin。•18.captureone'sattention替换attractone'sattention。•19.besupposedto替换should。•20.beindicativeof,besuggestiveof,befearfulof代indicate,suggest,fear。•21.giveriseto,leadto,resultin,trigger替换cause。•22.Thereareseveralreasonsbehindsth替换...reasonsforsth。•23.desire替换want。•24.pourattentioninto替换payattentionto。•25.bearinmindthat替换remember。•26.enjoy,possess替换have(注意process过程)。•27.interaction替换communication。•28.frownonsth替换beagainst,disagreewithsth。•29.tonameonlyafew,asanexample替换forexample,forinstance。•①英文的主语一般只能是四部分组成:名词(含代词)、动名词ving、动词不定式to及句子。主语是上述四部分之一吗?•②谓语动词是一个吗?(每句话一个,从句也算一句话)这个动词时态、语态、语气正确吗?若是在shall,will,must,may,can等情态或助动词后,用原形了吗?除了这个谓语之外的其它动词消掉了吗?(是否用成动词的非谓语形式)•③主语与谓语一致吗?•④及物动词或介词后,使用宾语的形式了吗?(主、系表除外)•⑤定语或状语的位置放的合理吗?•⑥从句的引导词使用恰当吗?•⑦单词有没有拼写错误?冠词该用a还是an•⑧Therebe句型该不该用?①审题并列出提纲(约5分钟)②开始写:(1)切题(2)干净(3)少犯错误(4)开门见山(5)闪光点(约20分钟)③交卷前检查(1)拼写错误(2)语法错误等(约5分钟)