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层级二高级表达第1讲不落俗套的亮点词汇请用亮点词汇替换下列句子中的黑体部分1．Ashighschoolstudents,weshouldbeneatlydressedwhenatschool.2．Theteacherdirectedthegiftedstudentstowardsthemoredifficultcourses.challengingaresupposedto3．Isincerelyhopethatyouwillconsidermysuggestions.___________________________4．Ourclassthoughtoftheideatomakebetteruseofusedmaterials._______________5．Weshouldtrytoimproveourselvesthroughlearningandprepareforthefuture.takepains;getpreparedtakemysuggestionsintoaccountcameupwith6．IwanttotellyousomethingaboutmyplanforthesummervacationandI'dlikeyoutohelpme.7．CinemashavegraduallygivenwaytotheriseoftheInternetandcellphones,andtheticketpriceisdecreasing.8．Whenyouareboredwiththepeoplesometimes,you'dbetterfindaquietplace,listeningtosomeclassicalmusic.fedupwithdomeafavor/lendmeahandonthedecrease在高考阅卷时，一篇英语作文往往在1分钟内就被判定优劣。大众化的词汇、平庸的表达已使长时间工作的阅卷老师产生了视觉疲劳。如果一篇作文中突然出现几个与众不同、让人眼前一亮的词汇，老师的给分也绝不会吝啬！一、使用亮点词汇的4种方法1．“语”众不同，避免人云亦云写作时恰当得体地使用别人可能想不到的词汇或表达，会给阅卷人耳目一新的感觉。①(2019·全国卷Ⅰ·书面表达)IamLiHua，astudentstudyinginLondon,whoisverygladtobeinformedofthemessagethattherewillbeaChinesepaintingexhibitioninyourlocalartgallery.→IamLiHua，astudentstudyinginLondon,whoismorethanthrilledtobeinformedofthemessagethattherewillbeaChinesepaintingexhibitioninyourlocalartgallery.②(2019·全国卷Ⅱ·书面表达)Inordertoprovidethestudentswithawonderfulmatch,weneedtohaveenoughtraining.→Inordertoprovidethestudentswithafantasticmatch,weneedtohaveenoughtraining.③(2018·江苏卷·书面表达)Obviously,blindlyfollowingothers'advicewillaffectourownjudgment.→Apparently,blindlyfollowingothers'advicewillaffectourownjudgment.2．更新换代，避免重复写作时应尽量避免重复使用相同的词语，要用贴切多样的词语来展示自己的水平。用词不同、表达方式迥异，也会使作文出彩。①(2019·北京卷·书面表达)Summerinthesecitiesishotandrainy,sotakesummerwearwithanumbrellawithyou.→Summerinthesecitiesishotandrainy,sotakesummerwearplusanumbrellawithyou.②(2018·全国卷Ⅰ·书面表达)Firstofall,youshouldarriveontimebecauseitisgoodmannerstobeontimeinChina.→Firstofall,youshouldarriveontimebecauseitisgoodmannerstobepunctualinChina.3．单词与短语巧妙互用一般情况下短语优先，应多使用词组、习语来代替一些单词，以增加文采。但有时单词比短语更生动，可以“一词传神”。①(2019·全国卷Ⅱ·书面表达)Thisisafriendlygame,soweshouldremembertheprincipleoffriendshipfirst.→Thisisafriendlygame,soweshouldkeepinmindtheprincipleoffriendshipfirst.②Wecanlookatthisprobleminmanyways.→Wecanviewthisprobleminmanyways.(view比lookat更有内涵)4．用高年级学到的词汇替代低年级学到的词汇①(2019·江苏卷·书面表达)Firstly,thisisexactlywhattheBritishvisitorsareexpecting.→Firstly,thisispreciselywhattheBritishvisitorsareexpecting.②Second,Iamtryingmybesttogettheimportantknowledgeandskillsconcerningmyposition.→Second,Iamsparingnoefforttoacquiretheessentialknowledgeandskillsconcerningmyposition.二、高分必备的24个亮点词汇普通词汇高级词汇普通词汇高级词汇chanceopportunitychoicealternativeideaopinionpeopleindividuals名词resultconsequenceeffectinfluencehavepossessdeveloppromotereplacesubstitutebearputupwith动词considertakeintoaccountunderstandmakesenseofenoughadequaterichabundantdifficultchallengingproperappropriate形容词importantvital/significantinterestingabsorbing/appealingfinallyeventuallyhardlybarely副词immediatelyinaflashnowadayscurrently连词sothereforeandaswellas①Wewilltryourbesttodevelopthetraditionalfriendshipbetweenus.→Wewilltryourbesttopromotethetraditionalfriendshipbetweenus.②Finallyyourchildwillleavehometoleadherownlifeasafullyindependentadult.→Eventuallyyourchildwillleavehometoleadherownlifeasafullyindependentadult.请用亮点词汇替换下面学生作文中加黑的部分并背诵DearJason，I'mveryhappytohearfromyouandknowaboutyourbeautifulhomecityLondon.NowI'dliketotellyousomethingaboutmyhometownQuanzhou.Quanzhouisabeautifulplaceforpeopletolivein.Itseconomyhasbeendevelopingfastduringthepasttenyears.Newbridgesandroadshavebeenbuilt,highrisebuildingsstandinginmanypartsofthecity.Moreandmoreschoolsandhospitalsareusefulforthenativepeople.Itisdevelopingintoamodernandbeautifulcity.Buttherearestillsomeproblems,suchasheavytrafficinrushhoursandseriousairpollution,whichhaveabadeffectonpeople'sdailylife.IthinkQuanzhoushoulddevelophealthilyandscientifically,sothatwecouldhaveabetterhometowninfuture.Yours，LiMing【答案】1．very→morethan2.fast→rapidly3.built→setup4.Moreandmore→Anincreasingnumberof5．useful→available6．beautiful→charming7．But→However8.serious→severe9.effect→influence/impact10.Ithink→Inmyopinion/AsfarasIamconcernedThankyouforwatching!