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第3讲篇法类篇法类错误也就是行文逻辑类错误相对来说并不是很难，但考生要从整体入手，放眼全篇，它可能从单句来看在语法上并没有错误，但放入特定语境则不正确，一般来说我们可以从上下文、惯用法、主从句及语意语境等方面去着手，我们建议在解题流程的第3步去解决此类错误。考点1指代类错误1．(2019·全国卷Ⅰ)...Istartedtoplaymyfootballwithclassmatesafterschool.答案去掉my2．(2018·全国卷Ⅲ)Ihaddonemyselfhomework,butIwasshy.答案myself→my3．(2016·全国卷Ⅱ)Ifwegoonatripabroad,wecanbroadenyourviewandgainknowledgewecannotgetfrombooks.答案your→our4．(2017·全国卷Ⅱ)MrandMrsZhangallworkinourschool.答案all→both5．(2016·全国卷Ⅱ)Itdoesnotcostmany,yetwecanstilllearnalot.答案many→much6．(2015·浙江高考)Closetotheschooltherewasabeautifulparkwithmanytreesaroundthem.答案them→it对于代词类错误一是要关注上下句或上下文，看指代对象、代词性别、代词的单复数、代词的格等是否逻辑一致，代词与反身代词、名词性物主代词和形容词性物主代词是否混淆；二是要熟知常见的不定代词的区别，如some与any，many与much，either与neither等。考点2逻辑关系类错误1．(2019·全国卷Ⅰ)Suddenlyafootballfelljustinfrontofmebutalmosthitme.答案but→and2．(2018·全国卷Ⅲ)Everyonewassilent,waitingtoseewhowouldbecalledupontoreadhisandherparagraphaloud.答案and→or3．(2017·全国卷Ⅰ)Beforegettingintothecar,IthoughtIhadlearnedtheinstructor'sorders,soonceIstartedthecar,mymindwentback.答案so→but/yet4．(2016·全国卷Ⅰ)Thoughnotverybig,buttherestaurantispopularinourarea.答案去掉but5．(2015·陕西高考)MyonlymistakewasthatIdroppedsomeonthefloorafterIwaspackingthemup.答案after→when/while对于连词类错误考生一方面要在熟悉常见连词用法的基础上去看上下文的语境，另一方面要知晓连词的考查类型：①删除：如，because或since与so连用时，删除so；though/although/as与but连用时，删除but；②误用：如，or与and，and与but，so与but，before与after，before/after与when/while等。考点3情境类错误1．(2019·全国卷Ⅱ)IwantedtobeateacherbecauseIlikedmyEnglishteachertoomuch.答案too→very/so2．(2019·全国卷Ⅰ)Ibecame...Oneafternoon...Fromnowon,Istartedto...答案now→then对于情境类错误，考生一定要放眼全局，从特定语境和语篇情感入手，尤其注意固定词语中体现时间和情感的副词。过关检测(2019·贵州模拟)Lifeisfullofvariousexperiences,someofthemareunforgettable.Istillrememberthehikingexperienceswithmyclassmatesfor16kmayearlater.Thatsummerday,wesetoffearlyinthemorning,thinkitwouldbegreatfuntowalkforsolongadistance.However,withtheweatherisgettinghotterandhotter,Ifoundtheirlegsheavierandheavier.What'sworse,myfeetbeganbleedingbecauselongtimepressingagainsttheshoes.Atonepoint,Ievenwantedtogiveup.ButImanagetodragtherestofthewaytothedestination.Thoughnotpleasant,thisjourneywasimpressiveorrewarding.Ihavelearntthatlifeisalongjourneylikethis.Nomatterwhathappened,weshouldnevergiveup.答案：Lifeisfullofvariousexperiences,someofthem①whichareunforgettable.Istillrememberthehikingexperiences②experiencewithmyclassmatesfor16kmayearlater③ago.Thatsummerday,wesetoffearlyinthemorning,think④thinkingitwouldbegreatfuntowalkforsolongadistance.However,withtheweatheris＼⑤gettinghotterandhotter,Ifoundtheir⑥mylegsheavierandheavier.What'sworse,myfeetbeganbleedingbecause∧⑦oflongtimepressingagainsttheshoes.Atonepoint,Ievenwantedtogiveup.ButImanage⑧managedtodragtherestofthewaytothedestination.Thoughnotpleasant,thisjourneywasimpressiveor⑨andrewarding.Ihavelearntthatlifeisalongjourneylikethis.Nomatterwhathappened⑩happens，weshouldnevergiveup.(2019·洛阳一模)Inmysparetime,Ioftenreadsomebookswrittenbyfamouswritersinorabroad.IeverreadChina'sFourGreatClassicalnovelsuchasJourneytotheWest.Beside,IenjoyreadingTangpoetry.IhavebeenwritingfromIwasnineyearsold.IamrememberthefirsttimemyparentsandItalkedaboutmydreamofbecomingwriter.TheylaughedhappywhentheyreadtheshortstoryIwriteaboutrobots.TheythinkthatmystoryiswellworthreadandthatIamgoodatwriting.IbelieveIwillachievetheirdream.答案：Inmysparetime,Ioftenreadsomebookswrittenbyfamouswritersinor①andabroad.IeverreadChina'sFourGreatClassicalnovel②novelssuchasJourneytotheWest.Beside③Besides，IenjoyreadingTangpoetry.Ihavebeenwritingfrom④sinceIwasnineyearsold.Iam＼⑤rememberthefirsttimemyparentsandItalkedaboutmydreamofbecoming∧⑥awriter.Theylaughedhappy⑦happilywhentheyreadtheshortstoryIwrite⑧wroteaboutrobots.Theythinkthatmystoryiswellworthread⑨readingandthatIamgoodatwriting.IbelieveIwillachievetheir⑩mydream.强化特训强化特训2短文改错(三)(限时：30分钟)[1](2019·太原模拟)Chineseisoneoftheworld'smostwidelyspokenlanguages.TherearemuchdifferenttypesofChinese.Forexample,onetypeknownasMandarin,hadalmostabillionspeakers.OutsideofChina,ChineseinsomeformisspokenChinesecommunitiesworldwide.ThedifferentkindsofChineselanguageuseasamescript.WhilesomeonefromthenorthofChinamayneedthespeechofsomeonefromthesouthinterpreted,butitisnotusuallynecessarytohavewrittendocumentstranslating.Intheearlytwentycentury,agovernmentlanguagepolicycreatedModernStandardChinese,thatisnowtheofficiallanguageofChina.ItisoneoftheofficiallanguageoftheUnitedNationstodevelopmoreeffectivelycommunication.答案：Chineseisoneoftheworld'smostwidelyspokenlanguages.Therearemuch①manydifferenttypesofChinese.Forexample,onetypeknownasMandarin,had②hasalmostabillionspeakers.OutsideofChina,Chineseinsomeformisspoken∧③byChinesecommunitiesworldwide.ThedifferentkindsofChineselanguageusea④thesamescript.WhilesomeonefromthenorthofChinamayneedthespeechofsomeonefromthesouthinterpreted,but＼⑤itisnotusuallynecessarytohavewrittendocumentstranslating⑥translated.Intheearlytwenty⑦twentiethcentury,agovernmentlanguagepolicycreatedModernStandardChinese,that⑧whichisnowtheofficiallanguageofChina.Itisoneoftheofficiallanguage⑨languagesoftheUnitedNationstodevelopmoreeffectively⑩effect