2020春新教材高中英语 Unit 8 EREEN LIVING Section Ⅵ Writing

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1本单元的写作项目属于新课标中应用文体类别中的调查报告。调查报告属于应用文,一般是用简洁、生动的语言把图中所提供的信息准确、完整地表达出来,还需要分析调查结果,揭示其规律,找出解决问题的对策。调查报告主要包括介绍、主要发现、结论。SectionⅥWriting——调查报告2Ⅰ.Pre-writing(Ⅰ)LearntowriteafterthemodelActionTakenbyCityResidentstoHelpProtecttheEnvironmentLastAugust,cityofficialsinterviewedabout500residentstofindoutpeople’sattitudestoprotectingtheenvironmentandwhatactionstheyhadtaken.Herearetheresults:Asthediagramshows,thepercentageofthosewhofeltthattheyneededtohelpprotecttheenvironmentisashighas96%.Veryfew(4%)feltitwasnotnecessary.Morethanhalfofthosewhotookpartinthesurveyhaddonefourofthefiveactivitiesinthepastmonth.Around90%havetriedtorecyclewastesuchasglass,metalandpaper;andmorethantwothirds(70%)havetriedtocutbackontheuseofdisposablepackaging,suchasplastichoneybottles,andbutterandyoghurtcontainers.Also,themajorityofresidentshadcycledorwalked.3Unfortunately,notasmanywhotookparthavetakenactiontosavewaterandenergyintheirhomes.Justunder40%(38%)triedtosavewaterwhentheywerewashingdishesortakingshowers.Justoverhalf(51%)triedtosaveenergybyreducingtheuseofairconditioningorturningofflights.Tosumup,itseemsthatalmostallwhotookpartunderstandtheneedtohelptakecareoftheenvironment.Mostofthemtrytorecyclewaste,ridebikesandwalk,andreducetheuseofdisposablepackaging.However,notasmanyaresavingwaterandenergy.Thisindicatesthattheresidentsneedtopaymoreattentiontothesetwoactivities.4(Ⅱ)Preparationforwriting—Wordsandphrases①________________n.调查②________________n.&v.采访③________________n.态度④________________n.结果⑤________________v.显示;说明⑥________________n.百分比⑦________________adj.必要的;必需的surveyinterviewattituderesultshowpercentagenecessary5⑧________________n.活动⑨________________v.减少⑩________________adv.然而⑪________________找出,查明⑫________________多于;超出⑬________________比如⑭________________采取行动⑮________________总之⑯________________注意activityreducehoweverfindoutmorethansuchastakeactiontosumuppayattentionto6Ⅱ.While-writing日前,针对学生的零用钱(pocketmoney)的消费方向,你对你们市某中学的高中和初中的部分学生进行了问卷调查,得出数据如下表。现请你用英文写一篇调查报告,并发表自己的看法,同时呼吁中学生树立正确的消费观。7注意:1.词数100左右;2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。8Step1Listtheoutlineofthepassage.1.首段:________________________________2.中段:________________________________3.尾段:________________________________介绍(介绍调查时间、对象、问题)说明主要的发现结论(发表自己的观点)9Step2Listthewords,phrasesandsentences.1.Wordsandphrases①________________n.零食;快餐②________________v.更喜欢;宁愿③________________vt.浪费④________________adj.宝贵的⑤________________adj.来之不易的⑥________________在……上花钱⑦________________另一方面⑧________________体重增加⑨________________对……有害⑩________________导致snackspreferwasteprecioushard-earnedspendmoneyonontheotherhandputonweightdoharmtoresultin102.Sentences①吃太多零食不仅使我们发胖而且危害健康。(notonly...butalso...结构)________________________________________________________________________②如果我们无限制地打游戏,我们就会失去许多珍贵的时间,这会导致成绩下降。(条件状语从句;which引导的非限制性定语从句)________________________________________________________________________Eatingtoomanysnackswillnotonlymakeusputonweightbutalsodoharmtoourhealth.Ifweplaygameswithoutlimit,we’lllosemuchprecioustime,whichresultsinlowgrades.11Step3Draftthearticlebyusingthefollowingwords.Recentlyasurveyhasbeendonetofindouthowmiddleschoolstudentsspendtheirpocketmoney.Theresultsareasfollows:Asthediagramshows,bothjuniorstudentsandseniorstudentsspendmostoftheirmoneyonbooks,snacksandplayinggames,andstillsomemoneygoestoclothes,banks,sports,andsoon.Thesurveyshowsthatabout46%ofseniorspreferbookstosnacks(37%)andplayinggames(31%).Ontheotherhand,only32%ofjuniorswillspendtheirpocketmoneybuyingbooks,whileoverahalfbuysnacksand46%spendonplayinggames.Bothseniorsandjuniorswouldnotwastetoomuchmoneyinclothesorputitinbanks.still,ontheotherhand,while,inmyopinion,inaddition,furthermore12Inmyopinion,eatingtoomanysnackswillnotonlymakeusputonweightbutalsodoharmtoourhealth.Inaddition,ifweplaygameswithoutlimit,we’lllosemuchprecioustime,whichresultsinlowgrades.Furthermore,themoneyishard-earned.Ihopewestudentsvalueourmoneyaswellasourtime.13Ⅲ.Post-writing—polishingthepassageExchangeyourpassagewithyourpartner,andpayattentiontothefollowingpoints.□1.Istheformatofthesurveyreportappropriate?□2.Arethereanyspellingmistakes?□3.Arethereanygrammaticalmistakeslikethetenses(时态)?□4.Doesthesurveyreportincludeallthemaincontents?□5.IswrittenEnglishcorrectlyused?14篇章结构15亮点表达►精彩开头语1.Lastweek,wedidasurveyamong2,600studentson“whoisyouridol”.上周,我们以谁是你的偶像为题,在2600名学生中进行了一次调查。2.Ihaverecentlymadeasurveyamong30boysand30girlsinmyclassabouttheirpurposeofgettingontheInternet.最近我对我班的60名同学进行了调查,看他们上网做什么。3.Lastweek,wedid/conducted/carriedoutasurveyamongallthestudentsinourschoolonthetimetheyspentinsleepingeveryday.上周,我们就每天的睡眠时间对全校学生进行了调查。164.Recently,asurveyhasbeendonetofindouthowmiddleschoolstudentsspendtheirpocketmoney.日前,针对中学生零用钱的消费方向,对某中学学生进行了问卷调查。5.Lastweekwedidasurveyamong1,000middleschoolstudentson“WhatDoYouDoonWeekends?”.上周我们对1000名中学生做了一项关于周末做什么的调查。6.Lastweek,asurveywascarriedoutamongthestudentsinourschoolon“YourSafety”.上周,在我们学校的学生中进行了一项关于你的安全的调查。17►精华结尾语1.Asformyself,ThomasEdisonismyidol,becausehisinventionshavegreatlychangedourlife.至于我自己,托马斯·爱迪生是我的偶像,因为他的发明大大地改变了我们的生活。2.As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