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1本单元的写作项目属于新课标中应用体类别中的询问类电子邮件。询问类电子邮件属于正式电子邮件，询问类电子邮件要清楚地说明要询问的内容，语言要简洁，态度要诚恳，格式要正确。正式电子邮件包括收件人地址、寄件人地址、邮件的主题、开头、正文、结束语和签名。SectionⅥWriting——询问类电子邮件2Ⅰ.Pre-writing(Ⅰ)Learntowriteafterthemodel.From：liu.ze@***mail.comTo：enquiries@***filmclub.comSubject：questionsabouttheYouthShortFilmFestivalDearSir/Madam，Iamwritingtoaskforinformationaboutenteringafilminyourfestival!IamsixteenyearsoldandIamastudentatNo.1SeniorSecondarySchool.Istartedmakingmusicvideosthreeyearsago.Lastyear,Imademyfirstshortfilm.3Iwouldliketoaskaboutthefilmsforyourfestival.Doyouacceptsportdocumentaries?Iamcurrentlyworkingonasportdocumentarywithaschoolfriend.Forthepastfewmonths,wehavebeeninterviewingandfilmingyoungplayersabouttheirinterestinbasketball.Couldyoutellmeifthiskindoffilmwouldbeacceptable?Iwonderifyoucouldalsogivememoreinformationabouthowtoapplyforthisfestival.Cangroupsaswellasindividualsenter?Canweenterourfilmtoanotherfilmfestivalatthesametime?Inaddition,woulditbepossibletotellmeabouttheprizes?Arethereprizesfordifferentagegroupsandfordifferenttypesoffilms？Iappreciateyourhelpandlookforwardtohearingfromyou.Yoursfaithfully，LiuZe4Greeting：DearSir/Madam篇章结构Sender’saddress：...Recipient’saddress：...Subject：Thetopicofthee-mailThefirstpart：Explainwhyyouarewritingthee-mail.Thesecondpart：detailedintroductionofyourinquirycontentsThethirdpart：endingandwishesSignature：LiuZe56(Ⅱ)Preparationforwriting—Wordsandphrases①________________对……感兴趣②________________专注于……③________________参加；从事④________________理解；弄清楚⑤________________提出⑥________________n.日程安排；时刻表⑦________________玩得开心⑧________________互致问候⑨________________追溯到；远在……年代beinterestedinbeabsorbedingoinforfigureoutputforwardschedulehavefunexchangegreetingsdatebackto7⑩________________期望，期待⑪________________以这种方式⑫____________________取得突破⑬________________n.专题研讨会⑭________________n.家庭教师；导师⑮________________这学期lookforwardtobythismeansmakeabreakthroughseminartutorthisterm8Ⅱ.While-writing假定你是李华，计划暑假期间去英国学习英语，为期六周。下面的广告引起了你的注意，请给该校写封电子邮件，询问有关情况(箭头所指内容)。注意：1.词数100左右；2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3.参考词汇：住宿—accommodation。9Step1Listtheoutlineofthepassage1．地址①____________②____________③____________2．正文①称呼语：____________________________②首段：______________________________________________③中段：____________________________④尾段：____________________________⑤签名：____________________________寄件人地址收件人地址信件主题DearSir/Madam说明写邮件的原因(想询问暑假英语课程的情况)询问的内容结束并提出希望LiHua10Step2Listthewords,phrasesandsentences.1．Wordsandphrases①______________________参加暑期学校②________________________六周的英语课程③________________在假期期间④________________n.广告⑤________________n.住宿⑥________________为……付钱⑦________________寄宿家庭⑧________________n.学生宿舍⑨________________想要；愿意⑩________________渴望；盼望；期待attendasummerschoolsix-weekEnglishcourseduringthevacationadvertisementaccommodationpayforhostfamilydormitorywouldlikelookforwardto112．Sentences①我是一名中国学生，我计划在假期去英国上一所暑期学校。(and连接并列句)___________________________________________________________________________________________②我还想知道我要付多少学费，是否包括住宿。(宾语从句)__________________________________________________________________________________________IamastudentinChinaandIplantogotoBritaintoattendasummerschoolduringthevacation.I’dalsoliketoknowhowmuchIhavetopayforthecourseandwhetheraccommodationisincluded.12Step3Draftthearticlebyusingthefollowingwords.and，first，besides，also，orFrom：li.hua@***mail.comTo：enquiries@***six-weekenglishcourse.comSubject：questionsabouttheYouthShortFilmFestivalDearSir/Madam，IamastudentinChinaandIplantogotoBritaintoattendasummerschoolduringthevacation.I’veseenyouradvertisement,andI’dliketoknowsomethingmoreaboutyoursix-weekEnglishcourse.13First,whenwillthecoursestartandhowmanyclasshoursarethereperweek?Besides,Iwishtherewouldnotbetoomanystudentsinaclass.I’dalsoliketoknowhowmuchIhavetopayforthecourseandwhetheraccommodationisincluded.Wouldtherebehostfamilyoruniversitydormitory?Iamlookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yoursfaithfully，LiHua14Ⅲ.Post-writing—polishingthepassageExchangeyourpassagewithyourpartnerandpayattentiontothefollowingpoints：□1.Istheformatoftheemailright?□2.Arethereanyspellingmistakes?□3.Arethereanygrammarmistakes?□4.Doesthee-mailincludeallthemaincontents?□5.Areadvancedandcomplexsentencesusedcorrectly?□6.Isthewritingwrittenproperlyandclearly？15亮点表达►精彩开头语1．I’mhappy/glad/pleasedtoreceiveyoure-maildatedbyMay1st.很高兴收到你五一发来的电子邮件。2．I’mwritingtothankyouforyourhelpduringmystayinEngland.我写这封信是为了感谢我在英国时你对我的帮助。3．I’msorrynottoanswer/replytoyoure－mailintimebecauseIhavebeenbusythesedays.很抱歉没有及时回复你的电子邮件，因为这些日子我一直很忙。164．I’msorrytolearnthatyoudidnotdowellintheentranceexamination.得知你在入学考试中发挥不好，我很难过。5．I’mgladtoreceiveyoure－mailsayingthatyouhavebeenofferedagoodjobinabigcompany.Congratulationstoyou.我很高兴收到你的邮件，邮件中说你被一家大公司聘用了，祝贺你。6．Ihavebeenmissingyoualotsincewemetlasttime.自从我们上次见面以来，我一直很想你。177．HowareyougettingonwithyourEnglishstudy?你英语学得怎么样了？8．Iamsorryfornotwritingtoyousooner.很抱歉没有早点给你写信。►精彩结尾语1．Intheend,Iwillbeverygladifyoufindmysuggestionsuseful.最后，如果你发现我的建议有用我会非常高兴。2．I’mlookingforwardtohearingfromyousoon.盼望很快收到你的来信。183．Pleasegivemyregardstoyourfamily.请代我向你的家人问好。