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技法指导电子邮件是互联网时代人们进行书面交流的主要文体。它与一般信件一样，也包括信头、正文和结尾部分；电子邮件写作要简单明了，便于阅读；电子邮件的人称及时态则需根据所写的具体内容来确定。[增分佳句]①Itwouldbeagoodideaifyoutravelalotinyoursparetime.如果在你的业余时间能进行多次的旅游实在是太好了。②Howiseverythinggoingwithyou？/Howareyougettingonwitheverything?你最近一切都好吗？③I'dliketobeyourguideandsincerelyinviteyoutocometomyhouse.我很乐意做你的向导，并诚心地邀请你来我家里做客。④Asanativehere,I'dliketogiveyousomerecommendationsofthescenicspotshere.作为当地人，我很乐意就这儿的景点向你提一些建议。⑤I'dliketosharemytravelexperiencewithyou.我很乐意与你分享我的旅游经历。[电子邮件模板]Dear××，HowhappyIamto________________(表明收到来信).I'mmuchpleasedtoinformyou________________(简述个人的近况)．Lastweek,we________________(描述具体事情).Thelandscapewas________________(描写具体的景物)．Ifelt________________(描写感受)．Bytheway,I'mgoingto________________(表明意愿与期望)．Bestwishes.Yourssincerely，×××精品展示[2019·襄阳高一检测]假设你是王涛，暑假期间你和父母一起外出旅游玩得很开心，你想将你的旅游经历用邮件形式与你的英国笔友Tom分享。注意：词数100个左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。[审题谋篇]第一步：明确要求该写作属于应用文旅游话题的电子邮件，主要是分享旅游经历，故应该以第一人称为主；介绍旅游经历时用一般过去时；期望和祝福时应该用一般现在时。第二步：确定段落第一段：引入话题(暑假旅游)第二段：旅游的过程及收获第三段：希望与祝福第三步：提炼要点1．________原本；起初2．________欣赏3．________历史的4．________________旅游经历5．____________收集6．________________文化财富7．________________自然景观8．____________________过得愉快9．____________旅行originallyappreciatehistoricaltravelexperienceacollectionofculturaltreasuresnaturalsceneryhaveawonderfultimegoonatrip第四步：句式升级1．我爸妈和我去了西藏首府拉萨旅行。拉萨也是这个地区政治、经济和文化中心。(一般表达)MyparentsandIwentonatriptothecapitalcityofTibet,Lhasa.Lhasaisalsothepolitical,economicandculturalcenteroftheregion.(高级表达)MyparentsandIwentonatriptothecapitalcityofTibet,Lhasa,______________________________________________________________.(定语从句)whichisalsothepolitical,economicandculturalcenteroftheregion2．我们都对那儿的自然景观感到震惊，那儿的自然景观让我们感到平静祥和。(一般表达)Wewereallsurprisedbythenaturalscenerythere.Thenaturalscenerytheremadeusfeelpeacefulandquiet.(高级表达)Wewereallsurprisedbythenaturalscenerythere,____________________________________.(定语从句)whichmadeusfeelpeacefulandquiet3．我们首先参观了布达拉宫，它始建于七世纪。(一般表达)WefirstvisitedthePotalaPalacewhichwasoriginallybuiltinthe7thcentury.(高级表达)WefirstvisitedthePotalaPalaceoriginally____________________.(分词作定语)builtinthe7thcentury参考范文：DearTom，I'dliketosharemytravelexperiencewithyou.Duringthissummerholiday,myparentsandIwentonatriptothecapitalcityofTibet,Lhasa,whichisalsothepolitical,economicandculturalcenteroftheregion.WefirstvisitedthePotalaPalaceoriginallybuiltinthe7thcentury.Andthen,weappreciatedarichcollectionofculturaltreasuresinTibetMuseumwherewelearnedsomeusefulhistoricalknowledgeaboutTibet.Duringthosedays,wewereallsurprisedbythenaturalscenerythere,whichmadeusfeelpeacefulandquiet.IstronglysuggestthatyoutraveltoTibetwithmenexttimeandI'msureyouwillhaveawonderfultime.I'mlookingforwardtoyourreply.Yours，WangTao