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[写作任务]频繁出现的雾霾天气(hazyweather)不仅干扰了人们的正常生活，也严重危害着人们的身体健康。某英文网站的环保论坛最近正在就“如何减少雾霾天气”进行讨论。请根据提示用英语写一篇短文发布在该论坛上。要点包括：1．说明雾霾天气的成因及危害；2．提出解决措施。注意：词数100左右。[写作指导]一、审题定调本篇习作要求学生用英文发帖，就如何减少雾霾天气提出解决方案，属于说明文。二、谋篇布局本写作任务可分为三部分：第一部分：提出问题(雾霾天气增多)；第二部分：分析问题(雾霾天气的危害)；第三部分：解决问题(提出合理可行的解决办法)。三、组织语言第一部分：提出问题。普通表达高级表达·Withtoday'srapideconomicdevelopment,toomuchpollutionhasbeenaddedtotheair.·Particulatematterisfarabovesafetylimits,whichleadstothehazyappearanceoftheweather.·Withtoday'srapideconomicdevelopment,thereisasevereworseningoftheairqualityinmanyofourcities.·Particulatematterintheairisfarabovesafetylimits,whichcontributestothehazyappearanceoftheweather.第二部分：分析问题。普通表达高级表达·Thehazyweatherdoesgreatharmtoourlives.·Itcausesmoreaccidents,slowertransportationandthousandsofflightstobecancelled.·People'shealthisbeingdamagedbytakingindustwhentheybreathe.·Thispollutionbringsgreatdangertoourlives.·Poordrivingconditionscausedbythepollutionleadtomanytrafficproblems.·Thepollutedairthatwearebreathingisaserioushealththreat.第三部分：解决问题。普通表达高级表达·Thegovernmentmusttakeactionnowtosolvethisproblem.·Eachofusshoulddrivelessanduseenvironmentallyfriendlyenergy.·It'shightimethatthegovernmenttookactiontoimprovetheairquality.·Weordinarycitizensshouldusepublictransportasmuchaspossibleandifwemust,useenvironmentallyfriendlyenergy.常用表达①Oneofthemajorenvironmentalproblemsis...②Thereisaseriousproblemwith...③Thepollutioniscausedby...anditisbecomingmoreandmoresevere.④Many...aredamaged/harmed/destroyedby...⑤Inorderto...thegovernmentshould...andwecitizensmust...⑥Inmyopinion,wecan...⑦Inanutshell...【范文展示】普通范文Withtoday'srapideconomicdevelopment,toomuchpollutionhasbeenaddedtotheair.Particulatematterisfarabovesafetylimits,whichleadstothehazyappearanceoftheweather.Thehazyweatherdoesgreatharmtoourlives.Itcausesmoreaccidents,slowertransportationandthousandsofflightstobecancelled.Inaddition,people'shealthisbeingdamagedbytakingindustwhentheybreathe.Inmyview,thegovernmentmusttakeactionnowtoslovethisproblem.Besides,eachofusshoulddrivelessanduseenvironmentallyfriendlyenergy.高级范文Withtoday'srapideconomicdevelopment,thereisasevereworseningoftheairqualityinmanyofourcities.Particulatematterintheairisfarabovesafetylimits,whichcontributestothehazyappearanceoftheweather.Thispollutionbringsgreatdangertoourlives.Poordrivingconditionscausedbythepollutionleadtomanytrafficproblems.Besides,thepollutedairthatwearebreathingisaserioushealththreat.AsfarasIamconcerned,it'shightimethatthegovernmenttookactiontoimprovetheairquality.Inaddition,weordinarycitizensshouldusepublictransportasmuchaspossibleandifwemust,useenvironmentallyfriendlyenergy.实战演练某英文报正在向中学生征文，主题是“如何减少沙尘天气”。请根据提示用英语写一篇短文并投稿。要点包括：1．沙尘天气增多的原因；2．应采取何种措施。注意：词数100左右。Onepossibleversion：Sandstormshavebecomemorefrequentinourlifeoverthepastyears.Thewindsaresostrongandthedustdoesharmtopeople'shealth.Whatcausessomanysandstorms?Asweknow,sandstormsbeginindesertareas.Becausetreesarecutdownandgrassisdugup,moreandmorelandisbecomingdesert,whichiscalled“desertification”.Moresandstormsarealsohappeningbecauseofclimatechange.Inmyview,it'shightimethatthegovernmenttookmoremeasurestoimprovethesituation.Whatwecandoisstartplantingmoretreesinsteadofcuttingthemdown.