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[写作任务]假定你是李华，你的英国笔友Jack发来邮件想了解伦敦和北京这两座城市的异同。请你根据所给提示，用英语给他回一封电子邮件。城市不同点相同点伦敦1.面积约1500平方公里；2．人口约820万；3．四季温差小。北京1.面积约16400平方公里；2．人口约2100万；3．四季温差大。1.都是首都；2．历史悠久；3．重要的经济文化中心(economicandculturalcentre)；4．著名的旅游城市。注意：1．词数100左右(开头和结尾已给出，但不计入总词数)；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。DearJack，I'mverypleasedtoreceiveyouemail.I'mwritingtocompareLondonandBeijing.________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours，LiHua[写作指导]一、审题定调本写作要求写一封电子邮件，其正文部分是比较两座城市的异同，属于说明文。二、谋篇布局因为本写作任务开头和结尾已给出，根据提示内容我们可以将正文分为以下三部分：第一部分：介绍两座城市的相同点；第二部分：介绍两座城市的不同点；第三部分：简要总结。三、组织语言第一部分：介绍伦敦和北京的相同点普通表达高级表达◆Thetwocitiesaresimilarinmanyways.◆Bothofthemarecapitalcitiesandhavealonghistory.◆Bothareimportanteconomicandculturalcentres.◆Theyarefamoustouristcities,andmanytouristscometovisitthemeveryyear.◆Thetwocitiessharesomethingincommon.◆...,bothofwhicharecapitalcitieswithalonghistory,areknownasimportanteconomicandculturalcentres.◆Beingfamoustouristcities,bothofthemattractmillionsoftouristseveryyear.第二部分：介绍伦敦和北京的不同点普通表达高级表达◆Therearealsosomedifferencesbetweenthetwocities.◆Theareaof...isabout...◆Thepopulationof...isabout...◆...hasamildclimateallyearroundbutthetemperaturedifferencesin...areverybigthroughouttheyear.◆Theydifferfromeachotherinsomeaspects.◆...coversanareaofabout...whichisabout...timesthatof...◆...hasapopulationofabout...while...hasabout...people.◆...enjoysamildclimateallyearroundwhile...experiencesbigtemperaturedifferencesthroughouttheyear.第三部分：简要总结普通表达高级表达Inshort,eachofthemisaveryspecialandattractiveplace.Allinall,eachofthemhassomedistinctive(与众不同的)featuresandisworthvisiting.常用表达1．过渡词：inthesameway,similarly,likewise,onthecontrary,bycontrast,however,equalto,ontheotherhand,while,whereas,though,although等。2．常用结构和句型：so/such...that...；as...as...；比较级＋than...；Wecandrawaconclusionthat...【范文展示】普通范文DearJack，I'mverypleasedtoreceiveyouremail.I'mwritingtocompareLondonandBeijing.Thetwocitiesaresimilarinmanyways.Bothofthemarecapitalcitiesandhavealonghistory.Besides,bothareimportanteconomicandculturalcentres.Moreover,theyarefamoustouristcities,andmanytouristscometovisitthemeveryyear.However,therearealsosomedifferencesbetweenthetwocities.TheareaofLondonisabout1,500km2.AndtheareaofBeijingisabout16,400km2.ThepopulationofLondonisabout8.2millionandthepopulationofBeijingisabout21million.What'smore,LondonhasamildclimateallyearroundbutthetemperaturedifferencesinBeijingareverybigthroughouttheyear.Inshort,eachofthemisaveryspecialandattractiveplace.Yours，LiHua高级范文DearJack，I'mverypleasedtoreceiveyouremail.I'mwritingtocompareLondonandBeijing.Thetwocitiessharesomethingincommon.LondonandBeijing,bothofwhicharecapitalcitieswithalonghistory,areknownasimportanteconomicandculturalcentres.Beingfamoustouristcities,bothofthemattractmillionsoftouristseveryyear.However,theydifferfromeachotherinsomeaspects.Beijingcoversanareaofabout16,400km2,whichisabouteleventimesthatofLondon.Londonhasapopulationofabout8.2millionwhileBeijinghasabout21millionpeople.Besides,LondonenjoysamildclimateallyearroundwhileBeijingexperiencesbigtemperaturedifferencesthroughouttheyear.Allinall,eachofthemhassomedistinctivefeaturesandisworthvisiting.Yours，LiHua实战演练假定你是李华，你的澳大利亚笔友Tom发来邮件询问南京和悉尼的异同。请你根据所给提示，用英语给他回一封电子邮件。城市不同点相同悉尼1.人口约503万；2．有200余年的历史。南京1.人口约833万；2．有约2600年的历史。1.首府或省会；2．气候湿润；3．著名的旅游城市。注意：词数100左右。Onepossibleversion：DearTom，I'mverypleasedtoreceiveyouremail.I'mwritingtocompareNanjingandSydney.Thetwocitiessharesomethingincommon.BothNanjingandSydneyarecapitalcitiesandenjoyamildclimateallyearround.Besides,bothbeingfamousfortheirpopulartouristattractions,theyattractmillionsoftouristseveryyear.However,theydifferfromeachotherinsomeaspects.Nanjinghasapopulationofabout8.33millionwhileSydneyonlyhasabout5.03millionpeople.Furthermore,Nanjinghasahistoryofabout2,600years,whichisabout13timesthatofSydney.Allinall,eachofthemhassomedistinctivefeaturesandisworthvisiting.Yours，LiHua.