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【话题解读】关于学校教育方面的话题有很多，如学校的规章制度、家庭作业、读书的意义、学习方法、德育教育等。此类写作任务通常要求针对这些话题阐述观点。在表达观点时切记分析要具体、透彻，论证要充分、有力，忌空洞无物。同时还应考虑具体的写作要求，不能遗漏要点。【实例讲解】关于“说英语”问题，李华和他的英语老师MissWang持不同的观点。请你仔细阅读下图中的对话内容，从中选择一个角色，按照所给要求写一篇短文。要求：(1)用“LiHua”或“MissWang”补全短文首句；(2)写出所选角色的观点，并续写理由；(3)短文中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名；(4)词数80个左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。参考词汇：shy;makeamistake;believeinIam____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【分析】该任务要求针对话题“说英语”发表看法。根据题目内容可知在写作之前先要确定角色，再从该角色的立场发表看法。读懂图中所给出的文字信息是完成该写作任务的重要前提。图中的两句话就是两个中心论点，在确定角色后，围绕相应的论点展开论述即可。论述过程中可以讲述语言学习经历或谈论语言学习策略。【标准范文】AIamMissWang.YourEnglishispoorbecauseyoudon'tspeakEnglish!ManystudentsfinditdifficulttospeakEnglishandtheyoftenkeepquietinEnglishclasses.Actually,theyareafraidofmakingmistakesinfrontofothers.Everyonemakesmistakes.Ifyoudon'tmakeanymistakes,youwon'tbeabletomakeprogress.Itisthesamewithanyothersubject.Rememberthatyourteacherandclassmatesarealwaysreadytohelpyou.IfyouspendmoretimespeakingEnglish,I'msureyourEnglishwillbecomebetterandbetter.BIamLiHua.Idon'tspeakEnglishbecausemyEnglishispoor.IfindithardtospeakEnglish.Iamalittleshyandafraidofmakingmistakes.IalwaysfeelnervouswhenIstanduptospeakEnglishinclass.I'mafraidthatmyclassmatesmaylaughatmewhenIspeakEnglish.Totellyouthetruth,Idon'tbelieveinmyself.ThelessIspeak,theworsemyEnglishis.WhenmyEnglishimproves,Iwillenjoyspeakingit.【高分突破】(因篇幅受限，这里仅以MissWang的观点为例进行内容展示。)IamMissWang.YourEnglishispoorbecauseyoudon'tspeakEnglish!English,likeanyotherlanguage,isatoolofcommunication—themoreyouspeakit,thebetteryourEnglishwillbecome.Soyoushouldtrytospeakitasmuchaspossible.Anddon'tbeshyorafraidofmakingmistakes.Youneedtoknowthateveryonemakesmistakesandmakingmistakesisanaturalpartoflearning.AsfarasIamconcerned,themostimportantthingisthatyoumustbelieveinyourselfandnevergiveup!Alwaysremember:practicemakesperfect!【高分揭秘】1.整篇习作紧紧围绕观点YourEnglishispoorbecauseyoudon'tspeakEnglish展开，从英语的交际特点、犯错的意义以及个人应持有的态度三个方面进行了阐述。结构清楚，层次清晰，逻辑性强。2.在阐述观点时，atoolofcommunication,anaturalpartoflearning,asfarasIamconcerned等表达的使用，显示出作者平时的语言积累非常到位，令人印象深刻。3.习作结尾处的谚语practicemakesperfect是习作的点睛之笔，与作者要表达的观点非常契合。【素材积累】1.词汇表达观点：inmyopinion,frommypointofview,asfarasIamconcerned2.句子Themajorreasonsareasfollows.It'syourdutytofollowtheschoolrules.Onlyinthisway,cantheybecomeinterestedinstudy.Istronglybelievethatjoiningtheinterestgroupcanhelponewithhissubject.Manypeoplearguethatit'simportantforkidstoreviewwhattheylearnduringtheschoolday.