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第一部分专项增分练板块三写作板块——书面表达三、应用文高分写作攻略——让作文得满分(一)普通书信/电子邮件[题型技法]英文电子邮件和普通书信的写法和格式大体相同，其开头、结尾常常都会给出，正文可根据题目要求分段把内容表达清楚即可。具体写作结构为：[增分佳句]1．吸引阅卷人开头句(1)ThanksforyourinvitationtotheChristmasparty.谢谢你邀请我参加圣诞晚会。(2)Howareyougettingalongwithyourstudy?你近来学习进展怎样？(3)Iamverygladtohavereceivedtheletteryousentmetwoweeksago.我非常高兴收到你两周前寄给我的信。2．吸引阅卷人篇中句(1)I'mverygladtotellyousomethingabout...我很高兴告诉你一些关于……的事情。(2)AsfarasIknow/amconcerned/cansee...据我所知……3．吸引阅卷人结尾句(1)Pleasewritetomesoonandtellmeaboutyour...请马上写信给我，告诉我关于你的……(2)I'mlookingforwardtoyourreply.我盼望着你的回复。[试写满分作文](2019·沈阳检测)假定你是高三学生李华，你的英国笔友Peter在邮件中询问你打算如何度过高三毕业后的暑假。请你给Peter回复邮件，内容包括：1．对暑假的期盼；2．你的假期计划及理由。注意：1.词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。满分作文第一步：“五定”审题，“三段”谋篇定体裁定人称为主定时态为主三段谋篇(定要点、定结构)开头：主体：结尾：电子邮件第一人称一般现在时引入话题，写邮件的背景(期盼暑假)假期计划及理由(去北京旅游、兼职等)表达心情，并期待对方尽早回复满分作文第二步：斟酌词句，设计亮点1．Asisexpected,IhavebeenlookingforwardtotheupcomingsummerholidayaftertheCollegeEntranceExamination,.(定语从句)正如所料，我一直期待着高考后即将到来的暑假，在此期间我可以做很多了不起的事情。2．Tostart/beginwith,IplantotakeatriptoBeijing,.(名词短语作同位语)首先，我计划到政治和文化中心——北京旅行。duringwhichtimeIcandoalotofamazingthingsthecenterofpoliticsandculture3．butalsohelpmelearnmoreabouttheChineseculture.(倒装句)它不仅能开阔我的眼界，还能帮助我更多地了解中国文化。4．Iholdthefirmbelief.(同位语从句)我坚信这份工作能帮助我为大学生活做好充分的准备。NotonlycanitbroadenmyhorizonsthatthejobcanhelpmemakefullpreparationsforthecollegelifeDearPeter，I'mmorethandelightedtohearfromyou.Asisexpected,IhavebeenlookingforwardtotheupcomingsummerholidayaftertheCollegeEntranceExamination,duringwhichIcandoalotofamazingthings.满分作文第三步：巧妙过渡，完美成篇Tostart/beginwith,IplantotakeatriptoBeijing,thecenterofpoliticsandculture.NotonlycanitbroadenmyhorizonsbutalsohelpmelearnmoreabouttheChineseculture.What'smore,Ihaveappliedforaparttimejobinthecitylibrary.Summerholidayisagoodopportunityformetopromotemyself.Iholdthefirmbeliefthatthejobcanhelpmemakefullpreparationsforthecollegelife.Lastly,I'dliketoreadbooksasmanyaspossible.IdohopeIwillhaveafullandcolourfulsummerholiday.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yourssincerely，LiHua[写改两用]这是学生根据本题目完成的一篇习作，文中共有10处错误，请改正。DearPeter，Youcan'timaginewhatgladIwaswhenIreceivedyourletteraskingmeabouttheplansinsummerholiday.Actually,Ihavebeenlongingforarelaxedandmeaningfulsummerholiday.Thefirstthingcomingtomymindistogetadrivinglicense,whatIthinkisamustformostcollegestudentinChina.Apartfromacompletelyrelaxation,IalsoplantotakeanEnglishcoursetoimprovemyspeakingEnglish.Inadditionto,Iwanttotakeactivepartindifferentsocialactivitiestobettermyself.IbelievetheholidaymustbefascinatingbeforeIfinishtheCollegeEntranceExamination.Ican'twaittoenjoythem!Yours，LiHua答案：DearPeter，Youcan'timaginewhathowgladIwaswhenIreceivedyourletteraskingmeabouttheplansinsummerholiday.Actually,Ihavebeenlongingforarelaxedrelaxingandmeaningfulsummerholiday.Thefirstthingcomingtomymindistogetadrivinglicense，whatwhichIthinkisamustformostcollegestudentstudentsinChina.Apartfromacompletelycompleterelaxation,IalsoplantotakeanEnglishcoursetoimprovemyspeakingspokenEnglish.Inadditionto﹨,Iwanttotake∧anactivepartindifferentsocialactivitiestobettermyself.IbelievetheholidaymustbefascinatingbeforeafterIfinishtheCollegeEntranceExamination.Ican'twaittoenjoythemit！Yours，LiHua(二)建议信[题型技法]建议信是生活中常见的一种文体，是写信人向收信人对某事提出的建议或忠告。建议信要写得简明扼要、目的明确，具有合理性和说服力。具体写作结构为：[增分佳句]1．吸引阅卷人开头句(1)Youhaveaskedformyadviceabout...andIwilltrytomakesomeusefulsuggestionshere.关于……你向我征求意见，在此，我尽量提出一些有用的建议。(2)I'msorrytoknowthatyouarehavingtroublewith/indoing...atthemoment.得知此刻你遇到……麻烦我深感遗憾。2．吸引阅卷人篇中句(1)Ithinkthemostsuitable...foryouis...我认为对你来说最适合的……是……(2)Iwouldliketosuggestthat...我想建议……(3)You'dbetter.../It'sbetterto...你最好……/最好是……3．吸引阅卷人结尾句(1)Ibelieveyouwilltakemyadviceintoaccount/considerationseriously.我相信你会认真考虑我的建议的。(2)Ihopeyouwillfindthesesuggestionsuseful/helpful.我希望这些建议/意见对你来说有用/帮助。[试写满分作文]假定你是李华，最近你校根据学生的爱好和兴趣，开展了许多课外活动。请你用英语给校报写一封建议信，内容包括：1．列举你们学校开展的三项课外活动；2．介绍你感兴趣的活动，说明原因及这些活动带给你的益处；3．请你就如何选择课外活动提出两条建议。注意：1.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；2．词数100左右，信的格式已给出，不计入总词数；3．文中不得出现真实姓名和学校名称。满分作文第一步：“五定”审题，“三段”谋篇定体裁定人称为主定时态为主三段谋篇(定要点、定结构)开头：列举学校开展的课外活动：、、主体：结尾：给别的同学的建议：(1)(2)。建议信第一、二人称一般现在时英语角阳光电台快乐阅读俱乐部等感兴趣的活动及带来的益处选择你最感兴趣的活动充分利用你的兴趣满分作文第二步：斟酌词句，设计亮点1．I'minterestedintheEnglishCorner,.(原因状语从句；notonly...butalso...)我对英语角感兴趣，因为它不仅可以帮助我结交一些新朋友，而且可以提高我的英语口语。becauseitcannotonlyhelpmemakesomenewfriendsbutalsoimprovemyspokenEnglish2．I'mfondoftheSunshineRadioStation,.(定语从句)我喜欢阳光电台，在那里我有令人难忘的经历并结交了许多好朋友。whereIcanhaveanunforgettableexperienceandmakemanygoodfriendsDeareditor，Nowadays,afterclassactivitiesarebecomingincreasinglypopularinseniorhighschool.Wealsohavemanykindsofafterclassactivitiesinourschool,suchastheEnglishCorner,SunshineRadioStation,HappyReadingClubandsoon.满分作文第三步：巧妙过渡，完美成篇I'minterestedintheEnglishCorner,becauseitcannotonlyhelpmemakesomenewfriendsbutalsoimprovemyspokenEnglish.Inaddition,I'mfondoftheSunshineRadioStation,whereIcanhaveanunforgettableexperienceandmakemanygoodfriends.Ihopemydreamofbeingahostmaycometrueoneday.Theseafterclassactivitiesmakemefeelmoreconfident.Ifyouwanttotakepartinafterclassactivities,Ihavesomesuggestions.First,youhadbetterchoosethea