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第一部分专项增分练板块三写作板块——书面表达二、提升作文档次的技巧——让作文靓起来(一)要点呈现多样化，适当扩充要点1．追加成分在要点基础上适当增加合乎逻辑的附加成分，如定语(从句)、状语(从句)、非谓语动词、独立主格结构等。不仅增加了词数，而且使表达更清晰、准确，主题更突出。住在中国十六年，一直学英语。(2019·高考全国卷Ⅰ)Firstofall,havinglivedinChinaforsixteenyearsandhavinglearntEnglishsinceIwasachild,IhaveagoodcommandofEnglishandChinese,whichisbeneficialtointroducingChinesepaintings.(演讲注意事项)要面带微笑；要讲慢，讲清楚。Besuretowearasmileonyourfacewhenyouspeak,whichwillmakeyourelaxed.Besides,remembertospeakslowlyandclearlysothatyoucanleaveagoodimpressionontheaudienceandjudges.2．补加语句根据行文走向，适当增加一些与主题相关的语句，或由要点衍生的句子，既能起到前引后联的作用，又能补充一些相关信息，帮助读者理解所写内容。每一支参赛队伍都非常出色，为比赛做好了准备。(2019·高考全国卷Ⅱ)Everyparticipatingteamisgreatandreadyforthegame.Itcanbepredictedthatthisisaclosematch.(谈论善款用途)募捐得来的钱将被送给急需的人。Themoneycollectedinthecharitysalewillbesenttothoseingreatneed.Thiswillnotonlyhelpthemthroughdifficulties,butalsogivethemwarmthandhappiness.3．添加过渡根据行文或段落需要，在句与句或段与段之间适当增加过渡词语，甚至过渡句，可以使文章浑然一体，同时能充实文章。话题：对西方绘画艺术感兴趣的原因(2019·高考天津卷)Personally，I'dwanttolearnaboutwesternpainting.Severalreasonsmayaccountformypreference.Foronething，I'minterestedtolearnhowwesternpaintinghasdevelopedintowhatitistodaythroughhistory，andthemostinfluentialartistsineachperiodofitsdevelopment.Additionally，I'mcrazytolearnhowtoappreciatewesternpaintings，anditcan'tbebetterifyoucantellussometricksabouthowtopaint.话题：学生体育运动情况(2018·高考全国卷Ⅲ)Iamexceedinglydelightedtohearfromyou.Youaskedmeinyourlastletteraboutthephysicalexerciseinourschoolandthefollowinginformationmaygiveyouaroughsketch.Tobeginwith,afabulousnewstadiumhasbeenbuilt,whichhasbecomethenewlandmarkinourschool.Asforme,I'mintoxicatedwithbasketballsinceithasbeengivingmestrengthtoconfrontthechallengesinmylife.Allinall,Isincerelyinviteyoutocometoourschoolandseeforyourself.书信中“适当的结尾”也是必需的，它不仅符合书信习惯，而且还可增加词数。缺失就会影响文章结构，从而影响得分。书信常用的结束语如下：I'mlookingforwardto.../Lookingforwardto.../Lookforwardto...I'mwaitingforyourearlyreply.Bestwishestoyou.Iwouldbegratefulifyou.../I'dappreciateitifyou...4．不忘收尾【跟踪训练】(词数扩充升格练习)A(2019·唐山五校联考)假定你是李华，当前在伦敦的孔子学院(ConfuciusInstitute)做志愿者。你的英国朋友Henry对孔子特别感兴趣，请你写封邮件邀请他参观孔子学院，要点如下：1．简述孔子及中国文化在世界上的影响；2．告知参观时间：11月6日(本周六)上午8点；3．介绍参加活动：汉语班，剪纸，书法。注意：1.词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。参考词汇：剪纸papercutting书法calligraphyDearHenry，Yourstruly，LiHua[考生作文]DearHenry，IamgladtoknowthatyouarekeenonConfuciusandChineseculture.Confuciusisconsideredthegreatestancienteducator.AnincreasingnumberofforeignerswanttolearnChineseculture.I'dliketoinviteyoutovisittheConfuciusInstituteat8：00a．m.onSaturday，November6.WecanattendsomeChineseclasses.Isincerelyhopethatyouwillacceptthisinvitation.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.(67words)Yourstruly，LiHua[我来提升]请扩充为100词左右并升级词汇和句式[参考范文]DearHenry，IamgladtoknowthatyouarekeenonConfuciusandChineseculture.Confucius，whoseideashaveagreatimpactonChineseculture，isconsideredthegreatestancienteducator.AsanincreasingnumberofforeignerswanttolearnChineseculture，theConfuciusInstitutesaresetupinmanyforeigncountries.SinceIamavolunteerworkingintheConfuciusInstituteinLondon，I'dliketoinviteyoutovisititat8：00a．m.onSaturday，November6.Duringourvisit，wecanattendsomeChineseclasses，whichwillbefollowedbysomeactivitiessuchaspapercuttingandChinesecalligraphy.Isincerelyhopethatyouwillacceptthisinvitation.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yourstruly，LiHuaB假定你是新华中学的高三学生李华，打算做志愿者，参加假期中外学生交流活动。请给市国际交流中心写一封申请信，内容包括：1．性格特点；2．英语水平；3．乐于传播中国文化。注意：1.词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；3．开头语和结束语已给出，不计入总词数。DearSir/Madam，I'mLiHua,astudentofSeniorThreefromXinhuaHighSchool.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yourssincerely，LiHua[考生作文]DearSir/Madam，I'mLiHua,astudentofSeniorThreefromXinhuaHighSchool.I'mwritingtoapplyforthepositionasavolunteerandjoininthestudents'exchangeprograminthecomingvacation.Iamkind,friendlyandeasygoing.Thisisverysuitableforthejob.MyEnglishlevelishigh,soIcancommunicatewithforeignstudentseasily.IaminterestedintellingforeignersaboutChineseculture.IhopeIcangettheposition.(62words)Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yourssincerely，LiHua[我来提升]请升级词汇和句式扩充到100词左右[参考范文]DearSir/Madam，I'mLiHua,astudentofSeniorThreefromXinhuaHighSchool.I'mwritingtoapplyforthepositionasavolunteerinthestudents'exchangeprogramduringthecomingvacation.Inmyopinion,Iamqualifiedforthejob.Tobeginwith,Iamkind,friendlyandeasygoing,whichenablesmetogetalongwellwithmyclassmates.Inaddition,IhaveagoodcommandofEnglishsothatit'seasyformetocommunicatewithforeignstudents.WhatisthemostimportantisthatIamcrazyaboutChineseculture.NotonlycanIteachforeignstudentscalligraphybutalsohowtocelebratetraditionalChinesefestivals.I'msuretheywillbenefitalot.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.Yourssincerely，LiHua(二)词句表达靓一靓何为高级词汇？众所周知，词汇本来并没有“高低贵贱”之分，但某个词一旦得到使用，放在了具体语境中，使用得极为得当，体现了该词的美妙价值，为句子增色，让文章添彩，它就是高级词汇；相反，使用时体现的价值平平，没有创意，它就是低级词汇。巧用4招，以实现由低级向高级的转化。1．“语”众不同，避免人云亦云写作时恰当得体地使用别人可能想不到的词汇来表达，会给阅卷老师耳目一新的感觉。IlearnEnglishandChinesewell,whichisgoodforintroducingChinesepaintings.→IhaveagoodcommandofEnglishandChinese,whichisbeneficialtointroducingChinesepaintings.(2019·高考全国卷Ⅰ)Hopefully,thesesuggestionswouldbehelpfultoyou.Ihavetheconfidencethatyouwillhaveagreattime.→Hopefully,thesesuggestionswouldb