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【话题解读】旅游交通包含两个方面的话题：旅游和交通。旅游话题通常涉及景点介绍、旅游计划、行程安排、游记等；交通话题通常涉及个人出行方式、各种交通方式的比较、交通安全、交通与环保的关系等。有的中考作文会同时涉及这两个话题。【实例讲解】在英语课上，老师组织了“Atriptothecountrysideortothecity”的话题讨论。请根据小组讨论结果，写一篇英语短文，介绍两者的不同特点，并写出你的选择与理由。CountrysideCityrelaxing,freshair...noteasytotakepublictransportation...exciting...crowded,expensive...注意：1)短文必须包含记录表中的信息，并适当发挥；2)文中不能出现真实的校名、姓名等信息；3)词数80~100，所给的文章开头供选择，不计入词数。IntheEnglishclass,wehadadiscussiononthetopicofhavingatriptothecountrysideortothecity.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【分析】通过审题可知该写作任务要求对比“atriptothecountryside”和“atriptothecity”，介绍两者的不同特点。介绍时要分别从优、缺点两个方面来写。表格中已经列出了比较的方面，包括心情感受、空气质量、交通状况、购物消费等，写作时应围绕这几个方面重点阐述并有一定程度的发挥。最后记得要给出自己的选择并陈述理由。【标准范文】IntheEnglishclass,wehadadiscussiononthetopicofhavingatriptothecountrysideortothecity.Havingatriptothecountrysidecanberelaxing.Youcangofishingorhikingthere.Andtheairisfresh.Butit'snoteasytotakepublictransportationinthecountryside.Havingatriptothecitycanbeanexcitingexperience.Youcangotodifferentplacesandtrydifferentkindsoffood.Butitcanbecrowdedinthecityandthingsthereareusuallyexpensive.I'dliketohaveatriptothecity.Why?BecauseIlikeshoppingandIwanttobuyalotofthings.【高分突破】IntheEnglishclass,wehadadiscussiononthetopicofhavingatriptothecountrysideortothecity.Havingatriptothecountrysidecanbearelaxingexperience.Andthefreshairisgoodforyourhealth.However,youmightnothavemanychoicesintransportation.Atriptothecityalsohasitsadvantagesanddisadvantages.Ifyoulikeshopping,it'sveryexcitingtowanderinlargemalls.However,youmighthavetospendalotbecausethingsareexpensiveinthecity.Andthetrafficjammightletyoudown.Asforme,atriptothecountrysideissurelymytopchoice.IlikeplaceswhereIcangetclosetonatureandbreathefreshair.【高分揭秘】1.该习作要点齐全，段落层次清晰，语言地道优美；2.作者在第三段用了一句Atriptothecityalsohasitsadvantagesanddisadvantages,起到了承上启下的作用；同时also,however,and等词的使用也使习作读起来连贯、流畅；3.作者在结尾部分表达自己的选择和理由时，话语简明扼要，mytopchoice更是用得准确而贴切。【素材积累】1.词汇旅游：goonatrip,takeatrip,placeofinterest,relaxing,beimpressedwith,exciting交通：crowded,redlight,trafficrules,trafficjam,publictransportation2.句子Travelingmakesusgetclosetonature.Trafficincitiesisgettingheavierandheavier.OurschedulefortodayistovisittheGreatWall.Ican'twaittosharethefantasticexperiencewithmyfriends.Travelingisagreatwaytolearnaboutyourselfandtheworld.