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Module6AnimalsinDanSectionⅤGuidedWriting如何描写动物写作技法指导[文体指导]本模块写作任务为描写动物，属于说明文的范畴。1．此类文章以“说明”为主要表达方式，用来介绍动物的类属、生活习性、生存状态、外貌特征等。可对描述的对象作总体概括介绍，给人以直观的总体认识，然后进行具体说明，目的在于让人了解此种动物。2．此类文章多用一般现在时。文章应合理安排结构，注意行文的条理清晰。在动笔之前要想好描述顺序，句与句之间怎样衔接，段与段之间怎样联系。[亮点句式]1．Manytreesarebeingcutdownandmoreandmoreforestsarelost，makinganimalslosetheirhomestolivein.2．Thegiantpandaisananimalthat/whichlivesinthemountains.3．Thegiantpandafeeds/livesonbambooshoots.4．Asforestsarebeingcutdown，itshabitatisbecomingsmallerandsmaller.5．Toprotectpandas，measuresshouldbetakentosetupsomenaturereserves.6．Ifwedon'tprotectthem，they'llprobablydieoutsoon.7．Finally，weshouldletpeopleknowtheimportanceofprotectingendangeredanimals.8．Manyfieldsarebeingturnedintodesert，whichmakestheanimalslivingtherehavenoplacetofindfoodtoeat.9．Manyanimalsarebeingkilledsothatsomeofthemareindangerofdyingout.10．Inaword，wemusttakesomemeasurestopreventrareanimalsfromextinction.满分佳作构建[写作任务]请根据下面的表格，写一篇介绍华南虎的100个词左右的文章。动物华南虎(SouthChinaTiger)特征非常凶猛，雄性体重190千克左右，雌性体重110千克左右，尾部有黑斑栖息地中国的华南、华北和华中，但野外很稀少食物主要捕食野猪(wildboar)、水鹿(sambar)等濒危的原因栖息地的减少，人类的捕杀现有的数目还有不到70只圈养华南虎[审题谋篇]体裁说明文时态一般现在时主题描述动物人称第三人称结构第一段：引出有关华南虎的话题。第二段：简单描述华南虎。第三段：华南虎的处境及应对措施。[遣词造句]Ⅰ.对接模块词汇1．濒危的2．栖息地3．斑点4．(动物)以……为食5．保护区；保护圈endangeredhabitatspotfeedonreserve6．保护7．对……采取强硬措施8．盗猎者；偷猎者protectgettoughwithpoacherⅡ.巧用模块句式、语法(一)完成句子1．华南虎是一种濒危动物。SouthChinaTigeris.2．华南虎的栖息地在中国。SouthChinaTiger'sinChina.3．他们主要靠捕食野猪、水鹿为生。Theywildboarsandsambars.anendangeredanimalhabitatisfeedmainlyon4．栖息地的减少和人类的捕杀使之处于危险之中。Thereductionoftheirhabitatsandpeople'shuntinghaveleftthem___________.5．因此，我们应该教育人们保护它们并对偷猎者采取强硬措施。Asaresult，weshould____________________________________________thosepoachers.6．只有用这种方式它们的数量才会增长。Theirpopulationcanincrease.onlyinthiswayindangereducatepeopletoprotectthemandgettoughwith(二)句式升级7．用定语从句合并句1和句2SouthChinaTigerisanendangeredanimal，___________________________.8．用部分倒装改写句6whosehabitatisinOnlyinthiswaycantheirpopulationincrease.China[妙笔成篇][参考范文]SouthChinaTigerisanendangeredanimal，whosehabitatisinChina，exactlyspeaking，inSouthernChina，CentralChinaandEasternChina.SouthChinaTigerislargeandfierce.Themaletigercanweighabout190kilogramsandthefemaletigerabout110kilograms.Oneofitsmainfeaturesisthatitstailhasblackspots.Theyfeedmainlyonwildboarsandsambars.Now，therearelessthan70SouthChinaTigersinthereserveandfewliveinthewild.Thereductionoftheirhabitatsandpeople'shuntinghaveleftthemindanger.Asaresult，weshouldeducatepeopletoprotectthemandgettoughwiththosepoachers.Besides，manmustn'tdestroytheirhabitats.Onlyinthiswaycantheirpopulationincrease.Thankyouforwatching!