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技法指导概要写作要求用自己的语言概括原文要点，所以在概要写作中要做到：要点间有衔接。可以采用以下方法去概括：第一点：筛选出能够概括全文的主题句和关键词语。第二点：提取要点进行转述。第三点：注意要点之间的逻辑关系，切忌盲目堆砌要点。经典句式1．开头常用句式：Wewillhaveafieldtripnextweek.我们下周要去野外旅行。Haveyoueverhadafieldtripwithsomestrangers?你曾经和陌生人一起野外旅行过吗？Itisexcitingtoexploreatotallystrangeplace.去一个完全陌生的地方探索是很令人兴奋的。Ihavebeentoanislandwhichisalmostempty.我曾经去过一个几乎没人的小岛。2．主体段落常用句式：Travelinghasapositiveeffectonyourcreativity.Atthesametime,italsobenefitsyoumentallyandphysically.旅行对你的创造力有积极作用，同时，也有益于身体和心理的健康。Beingresponsibleisaboutmakingapositiveimpactonyourdestination,bringingbenefitstolocalpeopleratherthandestroyingnaturalresources.负责任意味着给你旅行的目的地带来正面的影响，给当地人带来益处而不是破坏自然资源。3．结尾常用句式：There'snothingliketravelingtobroadenthemind.没有什么比旅行更能使人胸襟开阔。IfIhaveachancetogothereagain,Iwillbehappierthanlasttime.如果我有机会再去那里，我会比上一次玩得更开心！Remember,neverleavegarbageinsuchawonderfulplace.记住，不要把垃圾留在这么美好的地方。典例演练阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。Anewstudywarnsthataboutthirtypercentoftheworld'speoplemaynothaveenoughwaterby2025.AprivateAmericanorganisationcalledPopulationActionInternational(PAI)didthenewstudy.Itsaysmorethanthreehundredandthirtyfivemillionpeoplelackenoughwaternow.Thepeopleliveintwentyeightcountries.MostofthecountriesareinAfricaortheMiddleEast.PAIresearcherRobertEngelmansaysbytheyear2025,aboutthreethousandmillionpeopleareshortofwater.Eighteenmorecountriesareexpectedtohaveseriouswaterproblems.Thedemandforwaterkeepsincreasing.Yettheamountofwaterontheearthstaysthesame.MrEngelmansaysthepopulationincountriesthatlackwaterisgrowingfasterthaninotherpartsoftheworld.Hesayspopulationgrowthinthesecountrieswillcontinuetoincrease.Thereportsayslackofwaterinthefuturemayresultinseveralproblems.Itmayincreasehealthproblems.Lackofwateroftenmeansdrinkingwaterisnotsafe.MrEngelmansaysthereareproblemsallovertheworldbecauseofdiseaseslikecholerathatarecarriedinwater.Lackofwatermayalsoleadtomoreinternationalconflicts.Countriesmayhavetofightforwaterinthefuture.Somecountriesnowgetsixtypercentoftheirfreshwaterfromothercountries.ThisistrueofEgypt,theNetherlands,Cambodia,Syria,SudanandIraq.Andthereportsayslackofwaterwouldaffecttheabilitytoimprovetheireconomies.Thisisbecausenewindustriesoftenneedlargeamountsofwaterwhentheyarebeginning.ThePopulationActionInternationalstudygivesseveralsolutionstothewaterproblem.Oneway,itsays,istofindwaystousewaterformorethanonepurpose.Anotherwayistoteachpeopletobecarefulnottowastewater.Thethirdwayistouselesswaterofagriculture.Thereportalsosayslongtermsolutionstothewaterproblemmustincludecontrolsonpopulationgrowth.Itsayscountriescannotprovidecleanwaterunlesstheyslowpopulationgrowthbylimitingthenumberofchildrenpeoplehave.[精彩范文]Researchshowsthataboutthirtypercentoftheworld'speoplemaysufferfromtheshortageofwaterinthefollowingnineyears.Nowover335millionpeoplein28countrieslackenoughwater.(要点1)Itisexpectedthat18morecountrieswilllackwaterintheyearstocome,whiletheamountofwaterremainsthesameandthepopulationisgrowingfaster.(要点2)Theshortageofwaterwillcausehealthproblemsandinternationalconflicts.(要点3)Butfortunately,waysarefoundtosettletheproblem.(要点4)答案总评本篇范文全方位概括了原文的要点，做到了概括精准、要点全面；四个要点之间层次分明、语言流畅、过渡自然，不失为一篇佳作。[亮点呈现](1)Researchshowsthat...这一宾语从句的运用，丰富文章结构的同时，体现出表达的客观性。(2)Itisexpectedthat...中，it为形式主语，that从句为真正的主语，展现出作者运用语言的高超能力。(3)连词while用来对比事物，表达更显地道。跟踪演练阅读下面短文，根据其内容写一篇60词左右的内容概要。HaveyoueverheardoftheAngelFalls?Itisthehighestwaterfallintheworld,deepinthejungleofVenezuela.FewpeoplehaveeverseentheAngelFalls.Itisveryhardtogetthere.Ifyouwentbyland,youwouldhavetotravelforweeksthroughthickjungles.IfyouwentbyplanefromCaracas,thecapitalcityonthenortherncoast,itwouldtakeaboutfourhours.WhatwoulditbeliketotakeatripbyplanefromCaracastotheAngelFalls?Forhundredsofmilesyouwouldflysoutheastovergreenplains.Thenthelandwouldbecomehigher,andyouwouldseemountainswithforests.Soonthelandwouldlevelouttohighplateaus.Finally,youwouldflytowardsadeepcanyonwithsteep,rockysides.Suddenlyyouwouldseeasilverthreadinthedistance.Thenasyourplaneflewcloser,you,wouldseethewaterfallmoreclearly.Youwouldseewaterfallingoverahalfmilestraightdownthesteeprock.Itisasightyouwouldneverforget.Nooneknewaboutthishighwaterfalluntil1930.InthatyearJamesAngel,anAmericanpilot,flewoverthearea.Ashewasflyingoverthemountainsandcanyons,hesuddenlysawawaterfall.Itwasanimpressivesight:thewaterseemedtobedroppingstraightoutoftheclouds.In1941anAmericanmeasuredthefalls.Fromthetoptothebottom,thewaterfallsmorethan3,200feet.Thisfallsisover100feethigherthanthesecondhighestfallsintheworld.写前导读：本文是一篇说明文。文章介绍了世界上最高的瀑布。[精彩范文]Thepassagedescribesthehighestwaterfallintheworld.LocateddeepinthejungleofVenezuela,theAngelFallsisdifficulttoreach.(要点1)Next,itgivesadetailedexplanationofhowpeopleshouldgoandseethefallsbyplane.(要点2)ThentheauthorrevealshowtheAngelFallswasdiscoveredbyanAmericanpilot.(要点3)AtlastthereadersaretoldabouttheheightoftheAngleFalls—atotalofmorethan3,200feet.(要点4)答案课外拓展阅读——中国优秀传统文化专题练阅读下面材料，在空白处填入适当的内容(1个单词)或括号内单词的正确形式。TheMidAutumnFestival,also__1__(know)astheMoonFestival,isatraditionalfestivalforboththeHanpeople__2__minoritynationalities