2019-2020学年新教材高中英语 Unit 5 Into the wild Period 5 W

技法指导读后续写的文章要注意以下几点：第一点：读懂前文，把握文章的关键信息和语言特点。第二点：按照原文中事件发生的逻辑性，构思好情节发展，这个发展须符合情节内在的逻辑。第三点：要注意保持卷面整洁，字体工整清晰；严格控制字数。典例演练阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。Bradyisarecentlyretiredsearchandrescuedog.HeisnothappyandmisseshisownerAlbecauseAlhasgoneoutonarescuemissionwithouthim.Al'snephewStevedecidestotakeBradyalongwhenheandhisfriendZachgoonanovernighthike.ButsuddenlySteveandZachsmelledsomethingburningandtheyrealizedthatlightninghassetthewoodsonfire.Wind­blownflamehadleapedfromthetopofonetreetoanother.Thelongdrysummerhadturnedtheforestintoatinderbox(危机四伏的地区),andthethunderstormwasn'thelpingmuch.Ithadmorewindandlightningthanrain.ZachpulledSteve'sarm.“Let'sgo!Wecanmakeitbacktotheriverwecrossedtoday.”Bradybarked_a_sharp_warning.Aheadofthemlayadensecurtainofsmokeacrossthetrail.They'dnevermakeitthroughthat—they'dhavetofindanotherescape_route.Thedogwastugging(拖，拉)athisleash(皮带)tryingtodrawthemawayfromthesmoke.ThiswaswhatBradywastrainedtodo,andyetStevewasuneasy.Itseemedtohimtheyweremovingawayfromtheriver.Bradyliftedhisheadandsnuffed(出声地嗅)thesmoke­ladenwind.Nextmoment,thedogboundedawayanddisappeared.Theboysyelledandshoutedforhim,buthedidn'tcomeback.Theyhadnochoicebuttoleavehimbehind.Heartsick,StevehelpedZachuptheslope.Hecouldn'tblameBradyforpanickingandbolting.Hehimselfwantedtoruneventhoughhedidn'thaveacluewhichway.Theyhadn'tgonefarwhentherewasafamiliarbark,andBradycameboundingtowardthem.注意：1．所续写短文的词数应在150左右；2．至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1：“Where'veyoubeen？”Stevecried.Paragraph2：Bradyledthembackdowntheinclineandintothetrees.[精彩范文]Paragraph1：“Where'veyoubeen？”Stevecried.HebentdownandheldtightlytoBrady,_“Neverwillyouleavemeagain！”HethencheckedtheleashtoensurethatBradywouldn'tescapeagain.Thefiercefirekeptburning,straighttowardstheirslopeunderthecontrolofwind.DespairsurroundedSteveandZach.Whatcouldtheydonow?Surprisingly,StevefoundBradywasstrugglingtopullhimdowntheslope.“Where'reyouheading？”“Steve，”Zachsaid,“youhavetoldmethatBradywasarescuedog,right?Whynotgivehimachance？”Stevegaveitasecondthoughtandagreed.答案Paragraph2：Bradyledthembackdowntheinclineandintothetrees.Theairwasfullofsmoke,_andtotheirhugeastonishment,Bradywasleadingthemtoanalternativeescape_route,_exactlyoppositetotheriver.Aftersomeinitialhesitation,StevechosetotrustBrady.Smokegettingthicker,sightgrowingweaker,theyranafterBradyblindly.Itseemedacenturyhadpassed,alakewithaboatonitssurface,cameintosight.“Wow!Thankyou,Brady!Yousavedusall！”Sofar,ittaughtusthatanimalsareworthourtrust!答案总评本篇范文在原文的基础上能够合理进行续写，通过提示句巧妙衔接所续写的下文，Paragraph1描写了火势的严重性以及关键时刻选择相信Brady的决定，Paragraph2描述了Brady如何帮人们脱险，全文一气呵成，续写自然。[亮点呈现](1)“Neverwillyouleavemeagain！”是“never”开头的否定倒装。(2)“smokegettingthicker,sightgrowingweaker”，这种独立主格并列，很有气场，渲染了当时的恶劣环境。(3)“Itseemedacenturyhadpassed”，这个用“seem”描写心理活动的写法很实用。跟踪演练阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。JackandhiswifeTonyaweresailingaroundAfricawiththeirfriendsMaxandSasha.Onedaytheysawabigfishingboat.Itwasmovingfast.“Hello！”theyshouted.Themenontheboatlookedatthemangrily.Maxlookedcarefullyattheboat.“Something'swrongwiththeirfishingnet，”hesaid.Theygotnearertothenet.“What'sthat？”saidTonya.“Thereissomethinginthenet.It'salive.”Veryslowlytheymovednearer.“Icanseeitnow，”saidTonya.“It'sakiller_whale—it'shurt.There'sbloodinthewater.Howcanwehelpit？”“Icanseeittoo.It'sababybutwemustbecareful，”saidMax.Jackjumpedintothewater,“Icangetthenetoffitsfin(鳍)，”hesaid.Jackgotthenetoffthebabykillerwhale.Therewasabigcutonitsfin.Itswamaway.Suddenlytherewereotherkillerwhalesneartheboat.“Jack！”Tonyashouted.“Getinquickly.”Jackswamtotheboatasfastasafish.“Thatbabykillerwhale...IamgoingtocallitLucky，”hesaid.Astheymovedaway,itbegantorainharderandharder.Jacksaid,“Wemustgetawayfromthewind.Icanseeatownoverthere.Let'sgo.”Thetowngotnearerbutthe_wavesgotbigger.Suddenlyaverybigwavehittheboat.“IseveryoneOK？”shoutedJack.“Tonya?...She'snotintheboat，”saidSasha.“She'sin_the_water.”Theylookedintothecold,darkwaterforhours.“Tonya!Saysomething,Tonya.Whereareyou？”shoutedMax.The_windgotstrongerandtheboatwasfullofwater.Anotherbigwavehittheboat.“Jack,doyouwantusalltodie？”saidMax.“Wecan'tdoanymore.Tonyaiswearingalife_jacket(救生衣)andshecanswimverywell.Let'ssailtothetown.”Momentslatertheboathitabeach.Theywentout.MaxandSashasleptonthe_beach.Jacksatnearthewater,lookingattheseaandthinkingaboutTonya.注意：1．所续写短文的词数应为150词左右；2．至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1：Atthattime,Tonyawasfivehundredmetresawayoutinthesea.Paragraph2：Jackwaswalkingalongthebeachandsuddenlyhe...写前导读：本文是一篇记叙文。Jack和妻子Tonya在与朋友一起乘船环游非洲时冒险救下了一头虎鲸，这时突然下起雨来，风越来越大，他们的小船被海浪击中，Tonya掉进水中不见了。[精彩范文]Paragraph1：Atthattime,Tonyawasfivehundredmetresawayoutinthesea.Abigwavecameandcrashedontoher,swallowingher.Shestruggledtocomeupfromunderthewater,onlytofindherlifejacketgone.“Help!Anyonehelp！”Sheshoutedatthetopofhervoicebutheardnothinginresponseexcepttheroaringwaves.Allofasudden,shecaughtsightofagiantdarkfish－likecreaturemovingswiftlytowardsher.“Ashark！”Tonyafroze.“Iwillbekilled！”Thenextmoment,anothergi