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Ⅰ重点词汇1．enginen.引擎；发动机→engineern.工程师2．identityn.身份；特征→identifyv.确认；鉴定；说明身份3．convenientadj.方便的→conveniencen.方便4．benefitn.益处；优势v.受益→benefitfrom...从……中受益5．distancen.距离→distantadj.远处的→inthedistance在远处6．inspirev.鼓舞；激励→inspiresb.todosth.鼓励某人做某事→beinspiredby...受到……的鼓舞7．accessn.通道vt.进入→accessto通向……的通道8．functionn.作用；功能vi.起作用→functionassth./sb.起……作用9．pressvt.按；压→pressuren.压力；要求→underpressure被迫；承受着压力10．rudeadj.粗鲁的；粗野的→rudelyadv.粗鲁地；突然地11．particularadj.特指的；特别的→specific(同义词)→inparticular尤其；特别12．makefunof取笑→playatrickonsb.捉弄某人13．familiaradj.熟悉；通晓→befamiliarwith对……熟悉14．keep(...)inmind牢记→memorizevt.记忆；记住15．casen.箱；盒；情况，案件→incase万一，如果Ⅱ教材原句1．SoIuseanonsensename.(P27)所以我就用了一个毫无意义的名字作为我的网络身份。2．Therearecountlessarticlestellingus.(P28)有无数的文章告诉我们互联网如何使得我们的生活更便捷。3．SherealisedthatoneofthegreatestbenefitsoftheInternetwas.(P28)她意识到互联网的最大好处之一就是能够消除人与人之间通常存在的距离感。formynetidentityhowtheInternethasmadeourlivesmoreconvenientitsabilitytoremovethedistancethatusuallyexistsbetweenpeople4．Identitytheftis.(P32)身份盗窃是一个常见并且严重的问题。5．forbeingrude.(P32)上网不是粗鲁的借口。6．Newkindsofcrimesarehappeningontheinternet,too,so.(P34)形形色色的犯罪也在网上发生着，所以网络安全必须不断更新。acommonandseriousproblemBeingonlineisnoexcusecybersecurityhastobeconstantlyupdatedⅢ书面表达[网络安全话题类读后续写]1．品读原文，确定文章线索通过精读全文，找到网络安全话题类文章写作线索。原文有的是以时间为线索，有的是以空间为线索，还有的是以事件某一个细节为线索。按照事件发生的逻辑性，构思好情节，并且使情节合情合理地发展延续，这个发展须符合情节内在的逻辑，与原文有着必然的联系。搞清楚写作线索有利于续写出符合逻辑的语段。2．仔细审题，明确续写要求这个环节的主要任务是展开想象，合理的想象。短文后面的“注意”是对续写的具体要求，如词数限制、十个标有下划线的关键词语、续写部分所给的两段落的首句。这十个关键词语和两个首句指明了故事发展的方向，把想象和思路规范在逻辑范围内，无论时间的顺序还是情节的先后发展。3．拟写草稿，修改错词病句思路和内容确定之后，结合提示语和划线提示语拟写草稿。注意句子结构的多样性，语言的丰富性，并通过连接词使上下文连贯。4．标出关键，优化措辞逻辑根据原文中划线关键词，标出续写部分关键词。这样可以根据标出的关键词检查续写内容中关键词的使用情况，并可根据实际调整关键词所在语境，以便使关键词自然贴切地融入续写语段中。1．开头常用句式①Cybersecurityisbecomingaseriousproblemwiththetechnologydeveloping.随着科技的发展，网络安全日益成为一大问题。②Haveyouwrittenblogposts?你写过博文吗？③Streamingmoviesandmusicisenjoyableandrelaxing,butdobecarefulnottoletoutyourprivacy.在线看电影和听音乐是件很享受也很放松的事情，但是千万别泄露了私人信息。④Onlinecommunity,suchaschattingonWeChat,issomethingpleasantbutkindofcomplex.网上社区，比如微信聊天，是令人愉快但又有点复杂的事情。2．主体段落常用句式①Youcanlistentomusic,streamvideos,orlookupinformationonline.你可以在网上听音乐，在线看视频或者查阅信息。②Remembertokeepthingssecretwhenyougoonline.记得上网时有些信息要保密。③Ratherthangoingouttostoresweekly,peopleorderthingsonlineandhavethemdelivereddirectlytotheirhomes.人们不再每周去商店，他们从网上订购东西，然后直接把它们快递回家。④Onlineshoppingisbothcheapandconvenient.网上购物既便宜又方便。3．结尾常用句式①LifehasbeengreatlychangedbytheInternet.网络已大大改变了生活。②Postyourcommentsbelowifyouwanttosharesomething.如果您有什么要分享的，可以在下面写评论。③Doyoustillhavesomeothergoodadviceaboutstayingsafetyonline?关于安全上网你还有什么别的好建议吗？④TheytakeanypossiblemeasurestoprotectthesecurityoftheInternet.他们采取任何可能的措施来保护互联网安全。阅读下面短文，根据所给情节进行续写，使之构成一个完整的故事。Jack,aclerkatthelocalbank,waswanderingaloneonthestreet.Itwasacold,silentwinternight.HismindwasonhiswifeLinda,whohadbeeninacaraccidenttwomonthsagoandwasnowlyinginahospitalbed,waitingformoremoneyforheroperation.Jackhadsoldeverythinghehad,andhehadtriedhisbesttoborrowmoneyfromallthepeopleandbankshecould.Buttherealworldiscruel.Alargeamountofmoneywasstillneeded.ToJack,itwouldmeanagreatdealofsufferingtoseehiswifediewithoutanyhelp.“Ihaveonlyoneoptionleft，”Jacksaidtohimself.Thenhewentthebank,hisworkplace,again.Forseveraldays,heobservedthebankandplannedatheft.Thenextday,hewenttoworkasusual.Everythingseemednormal:hejokedwithhisworkmatesandhelpedhisclientsashealwaysdid.Butnoonenoticedthathehadbroughtabiggersuitcasetowork,insteadofthesmallonehealwayscarried.At5：00pm,thebankclosed,andtheclerksandtheguardshadallgonehome.However,atthatmoment,Jackwasinthebathroom.Hefirstcutthelinesofthealarmsandmonitorswithtoolsfromhisnewsuitcase.Hewasalltoofamiliarwiththeequipmentsincehehadbeenworkingtherefor8yearsandhadbeenstudyingthesecuritysystemforthepast30days.Usingaspecialkeyandsomeothertools,hetheneasilyopenedthedoorsofthesafes,Thebank'ssecuritysystemwasn'tverygood,whichallowedJacktotakealotofmoney.Severalminuteslater,Jackleftthebankwithaheavybagfilledwithmoney.注意：1．所续写短文的词数应为150左右；2．至少使用5个短文中标有下划线的关键词语；3．续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好；4．续写完成后，请用下划线标出你所使用的关键词语。Paragraph1：AfterJackhadbeengonefromthebankforawhile,thealarmsbegantoring.Paragraph2：Butthemostunluckymanwasthemangerofthebank,anoldman.[精彩范文]Paragraph1：AfterJackhadbeengonefromthebankforawhile,thealarmsbegantoring.Thepolicearrivedatthebankveryquickly,onlytofindnoonethere.Thenextdaywasareallyspecialdayforthetown,whichwasfilledwithnewspaperandTVreporterscoveringthestrangetheft.Theclerksatthebankwerebusydiscussingthecase,ofcourse,includingJack.Thepolicecouldonlypromisetocatchthethievesassoonaspossible,eventhoughnoclueshadbeenfoundyet.答案Paragraph2：Butthemostunluckymanwasthemanagerofthebank,anoldman.Heseemedtobetheonlypersontoblameandwasremovedfromhisposition.Atlast,withenoughmoneyforheroperation,Jack'swifewassaved.However,Jackfeltguiltyaboutthemanagerofthebank.Hecouldnotforgetwhathehaddonetotheoldman.Hisguiltdeepenedastimewentby.Finally,heturnedhimselfintothepoliceandacceptedhispunishment.答案【总评】作者对案件后续情节进行了合理的描述，用语流畅，想象丰富，符合故事发展内在关系，主人公去自首的结局也体现了作者正向的价值观。【亮点呈现】(1)作者运用非限