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SectionⅣWritingThereaboundsinagoldmineineveryordinarylife.Ifyou'rewillingtodig,youwilldigouttreasurethatsurprisesyourself.每个平淡的生命中都蕴含着一座丰富的金矿，只要肯挖掘，就会发现令自己都惊讶不已的宝藏。题目要求：请以“OneThingI'mProudof”为题，用英语写一篇100词左右的短文，记述一件你自己认为得意的事情。要求如下：1．记述事情经过；2．简要说明你感到得意的原因或从中得到的启示。注意：文章的标题已给出(不计入总词数)。OneThingI'mProudof[背诵范文]OneThingI'mProudofIstillrememberhowIbecameagoodtabletennisplayer.ThefirstdayIwenttohighschool,Isawsomeofmyclassmatesplayingtabletennis.Amazedathowskillfultheywere,Iwasdeterminedtobejustasgood.Lateron,Ioftenwatchedthemcarefullytolearntheirtechniques.ThenIkeptpractisinguntilIbecameconfidentenoughtochallengethegoodplayers.AttheendofthetermIbecameoneofthebestplayersinmyclass.Iamreallyproudofthisexperience,becauseithelpsmerealisethatweallcanfulfillourpotentialandachieveourgoalsthroughhardwork,anditalsohelpsmebetterunderstandtheproverb“Practicemakesperfect.”[高分亮点]1．本文中使用了较多的高级词汇，如：amazedat；bedeterminedto；asgood；techniques；keeppractising；becomeconfident；challenge；fulfillourpotential；achieveourgoals等。2．高级句式的运用增加了文章的亮点，如how引导的宾语从句；thefirstday引导时间状语从句；过去分词短语作状语；until引导的时间状语从句；because引导的原因状语从句中又含有and连接的两个并列句。3．形容词和副词的恰当运用让文章丰满起来。如：agoodtabletennisplayer；howskillful；watchedthemcarefully；becameconfidentenough；thebestplayers；bereallyproudof；betterunderstand等。[通技法——学写作规范]本单元的写作任务是写一篇叙事类记叙文。该类作文以叙述事件为主，要通过完整的故事情节和生动形象的语言，使读者在享受故事情节的同时有所感悟。写作时要注意把记叙文的六要素：时间、地点、人物、事件、原因和结果等交代清楚。一、基本结构1．开头——交代清楚事件的背景。2．主体——主要叙述事件的发生、经过及结果。3．结尾——呼应标题，发表感想、愿望等。积“黄金”词句，写高分文章二、注意事项1．标题：如有标题，标题一定要明确，能点明事件或主题。2．人称：通常用第一人称和第三人称。3．时态：在叙事过程中，一般用过去时态。在描写背景或某景象时，常用过去进行时，这样显得更加生动形象。[开头常用佳句]1．Wesetout/setoff/startedat7：20bybus/bybike/onfoot/byplane/bytrain.我们7：20乘车/骑自行车/步行/乘飞机/坐火车出发。2．Yesterday,Iwassurprisedtohearthat...昨天，我很吃惊地听到……3．Itwassurprisingformetolearnthat...得知……让我感到很吃惊。[中间部分常用佳句]1．由于大雨所有的航班都被取消了，乘客们不得不改乘火车。①Alltheflightshadbeencancelledbecauseoftheheavyrain,soallthepassengershadtotakethetrain.②Alltheflightshadbeencancelledbecauseoftheheavyrain;asaresult,allthepassengershadtotakethetrain.③Alltheflightshavingbeencancelledbecauseoftheheavyrain,allthepassengershadtotakethetrain.2．我们在桂林逗留的时间没有像我希望的那样长。①Wedidn'tspendsomuchtimeinGuilinasIhadhoped.②ThetimewespentinGuilinwasnotsomuchasIhadhoped.3．一听见有人呼救，他就毫不犹豫地跳入河中。①Onhearingsomeonecallingforhelp,hedidnothesitatetojumpintotheriver.②Hardlyhadheheardsomeonecallingforhelpwhenhejumpedintotheriverwithouthesitation.③Nosoonerhadheheardsomeonecallingforhelpthanhejumpedintotheriverwithouthesitation.4．据报道，那两个抢劫犯拦了一辆出租车，朝着火车站开去了。①Itisreportedthatthetworobbersstoppedataxiandmadetheirwaytotherailwaystation.②Thetworobbersarereportedtohavestoppedataxiandheadedfortherailwaystation.5．救护车赶到时，围观的人已经很多了。①Whentheambulancearrived,acrowdofonlookershadgathered.②Bythetimetheambulancearrived,therewereacrowdofonlookersgathering.6．对于这起交通事故的原因，我认为卡车司机应该负主要责任。①Asforthecauseoftheaccident,Ithinkthedriverofthelorryshouldbetoblame.②Asfarasthecauseoftheaccidentisconcerned,Ithinkthedriverofthelorryshouldbetoblame.③Asfarasthecauseoftheaccidentisconcerned,Ithinkitisthedriverofthelorrywhoshouldbetoblame.[结尾常用佳句]1．Atlast,theysawusoffandwesaidgoodbyetoeachother.最后，他们给我们送行，并相互告别。2．ThiswasreallythemostunpleasanttripIhaveeverhad!这是我曾经经历过的最不愉快的旅行！3．IfithadnotbeenforLiHua,Iwouldhavegotwetthrough.要不是李华，我就浑身湿透了。4．Aftervisitingit,I'vemadeupmymindtostudyharderthanever.参观之后，我下决心要更努力地学习。[即时练——靓句带你飞]完成句子1．Although,Ineverforgottheeveningparty.尽管这场晚会发生在三年前，但我永远不会忘记。2．LastweekIhad.上周，我有一次有趣的经历。3．IwhenImetafriendofmine.我正在大街上走着，就在那时遇见了我的一位朋友。4．,theygaveusawarmwelcome.当我们到达时，他们热烈欢迎我们。5．Ifromit.我从中学到了很多。ithappenedthreeyearsagoanamusingexperiencewaswalkinginthestreetWhenwearrivedhavelearntalot