2019-2020学年新教材高中英语 Unit 3 Family matters Period 5

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应用文写作——道歉信技法指导道歉信是指因过失或疏忽给别人带来麻烦或损失后,写信给对方赔礼道歉的信件。道歉是一种礼貌,道歉信要写得坦率、诚恳。道歉信通常包括三部分内容:(1)向对方表示歉意。(2)说明道歉的原因,对失误或错误进行解释(一般要求自由发挥)。(3)提出补救措施,请求原谅。注意:语言要诚恳,理由要真实。好的道歉信不仅会取得对方的谅解,还会增进彼此的感情。经典句式1.常用开头句式:Iamwritingtomakeanapologytoyoufor...我写信是因为……向你道歉。IregrettoinformyouthatIcan'tattendthemeetingonFriday.很遗憾地告知你我不能参加周五的会议了。IsincerelyapologizeforwhatIsaidthatday.Ididn'tmeantohurtyou.我诚挚地为那天我说的话向你道歉。我不是有意伤害你的。Iwillbeverygratefulifyoucanlistentomyexplanation.如果您能听我解释,我将不胜感激。Muchtomyregret,Iamunableto...AndIwishthatmyapologywouldhelptosomeextent.非常遗憾我不能够……希望我的道歉在某种程度上能起到作用。IamsorrytotellyouthatIcan'tgotothebookshopwithyouonFridayafternoonasweplannedlastweek.Iamwritingtoapologizeforbreakingmypromise.我很遗憾地告诉你我不能按照我们上周的计划周五下午和你一起去书店了。我为自己不能遵守承诺向你道歉。Isincerelyapologizeformycarelessmistakeaswellasanyinconveniencethuscausedtoyou.我真诚地为我的粗心错误以及由此给您带来的任何不便道歉。2.常用主体段句式:Tomakeupmyfault,Iwill...为了弥补我的过失,我将……Weassureyouthatsuchamatterwillneverhappenagain.我们向您保证,此类事件绝不会再发生。I'msorryIcan'tgivethebookbacktoyouontimeasIpromisedbefore.ButIwillbuyanewoneforyoulater.我很抱歉不能遵守之前的承诺按时把书还给你。但是之后我会为你买一本新的。Withthefinalexamaroundthecorner,IwassooccupiedpreparingfortheexamthatIforgottheappointment...couldwefindasuitabletimetohaveaget-togethersothatIcanmakeupformycarelessmistake?期末考试将近,我忙于准备考试竟然忘记了我们之间的约会……能否再找个合适的时间小聚一下以弥补由于我的疏忽而造成的错误?Iamterriblysorryfornothavingattendedyourclassontime.IhavegotaheadacheforseveraldaysanditismyfirsttimetoliveinChongqingsoIcannotadapttotheweatherherequickly.我为不能按时上您的课感到非常抱歉。我这些天一直在头痛,而且,这是我第一次来重庆生活,还不能很快适应这里的天气。3.常用结尾句式:Isincerelyhopeyoucanacceptmyapology.我真诚地希望你能接受我的道歉。Pleaseallowmetosaysorryagain.请允许我再次向您说声抱歉。Hopeyoucanunderstandmysituationandacceptmyapology.希望您能理解我的处境,接受我的道歉。Pleaseletmeknowwhichsolutionyoupreferatyourearliestconvenience.Ireallyhopeyouwillacceptmysincereapology.请让我尽快知道您更喜欢哪种解决方法。我希望您能接受我真诚的道歉。典例演练假如你是李华,你的爸爸因为你撒谎感到很生气。请根据下面提供的信息给你的爸爸写一封道歉信,表达你的歉意和改正的决心。1.写信的原因以及表示歉意;2.说明道歉的缘由;3.再次致歉,表示自己要改正的决心。注意:1.词数100左右(开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数);2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。September14,2019DearDad,Withregards,Yourlovingson,LiHua[精彩范文]September14,2019DearDad,ThereasonwhyI'mwritingthisletteristhatIdon'thavethecouragetofaceyou.Iwanttoapologizefordisappointingyou.Ihaveliedandhurtyousobadly.IknowIcannevertakebackwhatIsaid.HowIwishIcouldturnbacktheclockandmaketherightdecision.答案MydearDad,pleaseforgiveme.Youknow,youaremybothstrengthandweakness.Ifyoudon'tsupportme,Ican'tevenmovejustasinglestep.PleaseDad,pleaseacceptmyheartfeltapology.IpromiseyouthatIwillbeyourgoodchild.Iwillimprovemybehaviorandmakeyouproud.Withregards,Yourlovingson,LiHua答案总评本范文覆盖所有要点,篇章结构合理清晰,语言连贯平实,句式丰富多样。感情真挚,充分显示了写信人的歉意和想要补救的决心,达到了预期的写作目的。[亮点呈现](1)ThereasonwhyI'mwritingthisletteristhatIdon'thavethecouragetofaceyou.使用了“Thereasonwhy...isthat...”句型。(2)IknowIcannevertakebackwhatIsaid.HowIwishIcouldturnbacktheclockandmaketherightdecision.使用了what引导的宾语从句以及“HowIwish...”句型,提升了文章档次。(3)最后一段多次用到“please...”,言辞恳切,流露出作者真诚的道歉态度。跟踪演练假如你是李华,想要为自己之前和父母吵架而道歉。请根据下面提供的信息给你的父母写一封道歉信。1.写信的原因以及表示歉意;2.表达自己对父母的爱,并说明道歉的缘由;3.再次致歉请求原谅,表示自己以后不会再让他们失望。注意:1.词数100左右(开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数);2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。参考词汇:与某人吵架quarrelwithsb.August15,2019DearMomandDad,Sincerely,LiHua[精彩范文]August15,2019DearMomandDad,IknowthatIhurtyouverybadlyyesterday.IamextremelysorryformybehaviorandIhavenocouragetofaceyou.答案DearMom,Iloveyoumorethanmylife.WhenIwasakid,youweretheonewhoalwaysstoodbyme,whocaredaboutme,wholovedmemorethananything.WhenIwassick,youtookcareofmethewholenight.AndDad,youaremyrealsuperhero.WhenIdidanythingwrong,youalwayspointeditoutatonceandshowedmetherightway.I'vethoughtaboutmyactionsandI'verealizedthatIwaswrongforthewayIacted.Iwanttoapologize.IhavemadeupmymindthatIwillneverrepeatitinfutureanymore.IassureyouthatIwillneverletyoudown.Pleaseacceptmyheartfeltapology.Sincerely,LiHua答案课外拓展阅读——中国优秀传统文化专题练阅读下面材料,在空白处填入适当的内容(1个单词)或括号内单词的正确形式。ManytraditionalChinesefoodsareintendedtohonoureitherthegods__1__extraordinarypersonsinhistory.Zongziisnoexception.Itisdesigned__2__(honour)QuYuan,thepioneerpoetofancientChina.QuYuanwasafamouspoetwhowasalsoconcernedaboutthefortuneofhisgovernment.Unfortunatelyhewasdistrustedbytheking,__3__forcedhimtogotoaremotearea.Thepoetfelt__4__(hope)aboutthegovernmentanditspolicies.Whenthestate'scapital__5__(seize)byitsenemies,hedrownedhimselfintheMiluoRiver(onMay5thaccordingtotheChineselunarcalendar).As__6__respectedpoet,hisdeathwasabiglosstothecountry.Localpeoplesearched__7__himintheriver.Meanwhile,theydroppeddumplingsofstickyricewrappedinbamboo__8__(leaf)intotheriverinordertokeepthefishesfromattackingQuYuan'sbody.Sincethattime,it__9__(be)acustomtoenjoyZongziasamemorialtoQuYuan.Inaddition,thereisalsoafestival__10__(call)theDuanwuFestivalortheDragonBoatFestival,whenthereisanationwidepracticeofenjoyingZongzi.1.________2.________3.________4.________5.________6.________7.________8.________9.________10.________答案:1.or2.tohonour3.who4.hopeless5.wasseized6.a7.for8.leaves9.hasbeen10.called答案QuYuan'spoetry,calledChuCi,isfullofromantichyperboleandimagination,revealingthecurrentillsofthesociety,showingdeeplov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