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PartⅤWriting——道歉信道歉信是因为自己的过失或者疏忽，给别人带来了麻烦或损失，发觉后为了给对方赔礼道歉而写的信件。道歉信应该反映出自己具体的过失或疏忽，道歉的语言应该简练诚恳，并且希望收信人能够原谅自己。通常包括以下三部分内容：1.开门见山，表明写信目的，表示歉意；2.说明出现差错的原因，提出弥补措施；3.再次致歉，请求原谅，希望得到理解(语言要诚挚，解释的理由要真实)。【增分佳句】1.表示歉意(1)I’mverysorryfornotbeingabletovisitBeijingwithyounextweekend.I’mwritingtoapologizetoyouforit.(2)ThereasonswhyIcan’tgowithyouareasfollows.2.解释原因，提出补救办法(1)JustnowIreceivedacallfrommycousin,whowenttoAustraliaforfurtherstudylastyear.(2)HetoldmethathewouldbebacktoChinaat8amonSaturday,andhehopedIcouldpickhimupattheairportwithhisfamily.(3)Wehaven’tseeneachotherforayear,soIthinkIamsupposedtomeethim.(4)Imakeanapologytoyouforanyinconveniencecaused,andIhopeyoucanunderstandmysituation.(5)Let’smakeitanothertime.HowaboutMayDay?3.再次致歉，希望得到理解Iwouldappreciateitifyoucouldacceptmyapology.Lookingforwardtoyourearlyreply.假定你是李华，你把Frank借给你的书弄丢了。这本书你一直在看，本打算下周交还的。昨天晚上回房间找不到了。你将尽力去找，找不到的话，买本新的交还。请你对此表示歉意，毕竟新书代替不了旧书，因为它就像是老朋友，有好多珍贵的回忆。这对自己的粗心也是一次教训。词数100左右。DearFrank,Yourstruly，LiHua第一步：布局谋篇很关键►审题1.确定体裁：本文是一封道歉信，属于_____________；2.确定时态：主要使用________________和一般过去时；3.确定人称：本文主要人称为__________________。►构思1.表明写信目的，因为丢书表示歉意；2.解释丢书的原因，并提出____________________；3._________________并反省自己的过失，恳求对方原谅。应用文一般现在时第一、三人称解决方案再次道歉第二步：核心词汇想周全1.____________________________宝贵的；珍贵的2.___________________重新获得3.________________conj.一旦4._______________________________代替；取代5.______________________回忆；记忆6.______________________打算做7.________________没能够做成……8._________________________与……有关联valuable/precious/ofgreatvaluerecover/makeupforoncereplace/displace/taketheplaceofmemory/recall/rememberintendtodo/meantodofailtodobeconnectedwith/relateto第三步：由词扩句雏形现1.非常抱歉地告诉你，我把上周你借给我的宝贵的书弄丢了。(宾语从句；定语从句)Iamterriblysorrytotellyouthat__________________________________________.2.一旦丢失，它们就无法取代。________________________，theycannever_______________.3.我应该对这一不能挽回的损失负责。(betoblame)Andforthisirrecoverableloss,______________________.4.如果我更加谨慎，它就不会丢失。(if虚拟条件句)If______________________,it_________________________.IhavelostthevaluablebookyoulentmelastweekOncetheyarelostbereplacedIamtoblameIhadbeenmorecarefulwouldnothavebeenlost第四步：句式升级造亮点1.用状语从句的省略改写句2_________________,theycanneverbereplaced.2.用倒装句改写句4____________________________________________________________________OncelostHadIbeenmorecareful,itwouldnothavebeenlost.第五步：过渡衔接连成篇DearFrank，IamterriblysorrytotellyouthatIhavelostthevaluablebookyouweresokindtolendmelastweek.Ireaditeverydayandintendedtofinishitnextweek.LastnightwhenIcametomyroom,itwasnowheretobefound.Iwilltrytorecoveritassoonaspossible.IfIfailtofindit,Iwillgetanewbookforyou.ButIamafraiditcannevertaketheplaceoftheoldone.Oldbooksarelikeoldfriends.Oncelost,theycanneverbereplaced.Theyareconnectedwithpreciousmemorieswhichthenewonescanneverhave.Andforthisirrecoverableloss,Iamtoblame—ifIhadbeenmorecareful,itwouldnothavebeenlost.Iwassocarelesswiththings.Thisisawarningtometobemorecarefulinthefuture.Yourstruly，LiHua