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Unit2TravellingaroundSectionⅤWriting——给朋友写一封关于旅行计划的信[文体指导]本单元的写作项目属于说明文体类别中的“说明旅行计划类”的书信，这种题目要求我们针对旅行的地点，时间和出行方式等进行准确的描述，学生应该注意描述的重点和顺序。在写作过程中力争做到：紧扣主题；句子结构完整；信息内容准确；篇章结构连贯。一、基本框架(一)Para.Ⅰ开头(beginning)——突出重点，开门见山，直接描述旅行的主要目的。(二)Para.Ⅱ——介绍旅行中的其他计划和安排。(三)Para.Ⅲ——交代出行方式及原因。(四)Para.Ⅳ——总结此次旅行的心得体会。二、注意事项(一)明确写作对象地点介绍类说明文是以介绍地点的基本特征、以说明文为主要表达方式的文章。说明的对象就是说明文介绍的具体事物。一般来说，说明对象可以从题目中确定。说明对象的确定，是写作说明文的第一步。(二)确定介绍说明的内容和重点写作地点介绍类说明文既要抓住所介绍地点的基本特征，即命题要求中所列的基本要求，又要选择该地点突出的特征重点介绍，这样才能使文章既要点清晰又重点突出。(三)合理安排说明顺序地点介绍类说明文介绍顺序的安排可依据说明对象的特征来决定。一般来说，可采用由外向内、从上到下、由远及近等空间顺序进行说明。只有写作时遵循一定的说明顺序，才能使文章条理清楚，中心突出。(四)语言运用准确无误遣词造句不可过分渲染，要简洁明了，尤其要注意方位词的准确运用。在写作过程中，要灵活运用语言，不能机械地翻译命题要求。另外，应尽量选择地道的、高级的表达方式。同时，要尽量避免低级错误的出现。[亮点句式]常见精彩开头1．I'mwritingtosharemytravelplanto...withyou.2．Overtheholiday，myparentsandIareplanningtogo...3．I'mwritingtotellyoumytravelplanto...4．Youhaveaskedforsomeinformationabout/concerningmytravelto...5．Weareplanningtomakeatripto...描述旅行及景点常用句型1．Wearelookingforwardto...2．Weareanxioustodo...3．ItisanamazingsightthatIhaveeverseen.4．Wecan'thelpgoing...5．Ihaveheardthat...6．Thereisnodoubtthat...7．We'llgotothedestinationbytrain/air/bus...结尾段常用的句型1．Ithinkthat'sallfornow.2．Sp.isreallyworthyourvisiting.Lookingforwardtoyourcoming.3．I'llneverforgettheplace...4．I'lltravelhereagainifIhavetimeinthefuture.5．Ihopeyouwillhaveatripwithme...6．Inaword，thetravelmakesme...[写作任务]假设你是小李，你打算给你的好友Richard写一封电子邮件告诉他你打算今年暑假去伦敦旅行。请用英语给他写一封100词左右的信件。内容如下：旅行的主要目的去格林尼治看古老的战船和确定世界时间的大钟，看子午线，它把地球分成东西两半，且对航海有用。旅行的其他计划去威斯敏斯特教堂，里面有许多已故诗人和作家的雕像，也去看看伦敦塔和其他著名景点。交通方式乘飞机最后想法总结，伦敦很值得一游，希望有机会再去。提示词：Greenwich格林尼治thelongitudeline子午线navigation航海WestminsterAbbey威斯敏斯特教堂[审题谋篇]体裁说明文时态一般现在时和现在进行时(表将来)为主主题旅行计划人称第一人称为主结构第一段：旅行的主要目的第二段：旅行的其他计划第三段：交通方式第四段：总结[遣词造句]Ⅰ.精选单词短语1．_______神奇的2．______雕像3．_____景象4．_____________对……有用5．_____________为了纪念amazingstatuesightbeusefulforinmemoryofⅡ.巧用句式语法(一)完成句子1．I'veheardtherearemany______________andI___________________them.我听说伦敦有许多令人惊奇的景象，我迫不急待地想去看看。2．_____________________isthelongitudeline.最让我感到惊奇的就是子午线。amazingsightscan'twaittoseeWhatamazesmemost3．_____________________dividingtheeasternandwesternoftheworldandisusefulfornavigation.这是一条把地球分成两半的神奇的线，它对航海有用。4．Itcontainsstatues__________ofthedeadpoetsandwriters.它里面有一些用来纪念已故诗人和作家的雕像。Itisanamazinglineinmemory(二)句式升级5．Ihaveheardthatthereare__manyamazingsights____Ican'twaittoseethem.我听说伦敦有很多景象以致我迫不急待想去看看。(用so...that结构)6．Itisveryusefulfornavigation.→Itis____________fornavigation.它对航行很有用处。(be＋of＋n.)sothatofgreatuse7．ImustkeepmyeyesopentomakemytriptoLondonenjoyableandworthwhile.→_____________________________________________________________________________________我一定留心观察让我的伦敦之旅不虚此行又有意义。(用if条件句改写)ImustkeepmyeyesopenifIamgoingtomakemytriptoLondonenjoyableandworthwhile.[妙笔成篇]______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________[参考范文]DearRichard，Withthesummerholidaycoming，myparentsandIareplanningtohavetotravelinLondon，I'veheardtherearesomanyamazingsightstherethatIcan'twaittoseethem.WearegoingtovisitGreenwich，wherewecanseeitsoldshipsandfamousclockthatsetstheworldtime，becausebothmyfatherandIareinterestedingeography.Whatamazesmemostisthelongitudeline.Itisanamazinglinedividingtheeasternandwesternhalvesoftheworld.WearealsoplanningtovisitWestminsterAbbey.Itcontainsstatuesinmemoryofthedeadpoetsandwriters，becausemymotherlovesoneofthepoetsandhispoems.WearealsogoingtoseeLondonTowerandafewotherfamoussights.WearegoingtoLondonbyplane.LeavingontheJuly10th，we'rearrivingatLondonnextday.IthinkImustkeepmyeyesopenifI'mgoingtomakemytriptoLondonenjoyableandworthwhile.英美欣赏文化【导读】《格列佛游记》是英国作家乔纳森·斯威夫特的一部长篇游记体讽刺小说。它以格列佛的口气描述了在小人国、大人国、飞岛国和慧国的奇迹，反映了18世纪前半期英国统治阶级的腐败和罪恶。【节选】Gulliver'sTravelsIwasborninNottinghamshireandwasthethirdoffivesons.Myfatherwasnotarichman，buthewasabletosendmetoCambridgeUniversity，whereIstudiedforthreeyears.WhenIleftcollege，Icontinuedmystudiesandbecameadoctor.ButIalwayswantedtotravel，andsoImadeseveralvoyagesasaship'sdoctor.WhenImarriedmywifeMary，however，Iplannedtostayathomeforawhile.ButafterafewyearsIdiscoveredIwasnotearningenoughmoneyfrommypatients.Idecidedtogotoseaagain，andthistimeIjoinedashipsailingtotheislandsintheSouthPacificOcean.WestartedourjourneyfromBristolonMay4th,1699.Atfirstourvoyagewentwell.WesailedacrosstheAtlantic，roundthecoastofAfricaandintotheIndianOcean.ButbeforewecouldreachthePacific，aviolentstormhitusanddroveustothenorthwestofTasmania.Thewinddroveourshipontoarock，whichbroketheshipinhalf.SomeofthesailorsandImanagedtogetaboatintothewater，andwerowedawaytolookforland.Butwhenweweretootiredtorowanymore，agreatwavehitoursmallboat，andweallfellintothesea.Idonotknowwhathappenedtomycompanions，butIsupposetheywerealldrowned[1]．ThewindandwavespushedmealongasIstruggledtokeepmyheadabovewater[2]．IbecameverytiredandsoonfeltIcouldnotswimanymore.Luckily，justthenmyfeettouchedtheground.Iwalkedoutoftheseaandont