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Unit17LaughterSectionⅦWriting——趣闻轶事记叙文写作技法指导[文体指导]个人轶事属于记叙文范畴，要遵循下面五个步骤：1．简述故事的梗概——Introduction给出简要的信息，说明在某时、某地你做了什么，遇到了什么人，在此之前发生了什么事情。ThatwastheworstdayIhaveeverhadwhenIwasdoing...2．故事的开始——Beginningofthenarrative描述这个带有幽默性质的故事是怎样开始的。AsIwaswaitingforabus，ataxipassedbyandsplashedrainwateroverme...3．故事的发展——Developmentofthenarrative描写接下来发生的事情，即在哪些方面出了问题。Whenwehurriedtothestation，therewasalongqueueandwehadtowaitforalongtime.Wegotdisgusted...4．故事进一步走向高潮——Furtherdevelopmentofthenarrative又有了新的插曲，使得故事更具有幽默性。Iwashavingaphototakenwhenmyclassmatefellintothewater.Luckily，atthemoment...5．进行总结——Conclusion故事的结尾写你和你的同学是怎样圆满地把事情解决的。Intheend，thekeepertookustotheofficeandwedriedoutJack'sclothes.Whenwefinallygothome，myparentssawusfunnyandweallburstoutlaughing.[亮点句式]1．Ihadnoideahowto...2．TherewasabsolutelynothingIcoulddoaboutit.3．Iwenttotallyoutofcontrol.4．Istartedtogetthefeelingthat...5．Itwasarealshamethat...6．Theyallburstoutlaughing.7．Thefunniestthingaboutitwasthat...8．Everythingworkedoutallrightintheend.满分佳作构建[写作任务]根据提示，通过买鞋的经历，以第一人称编写一个小故事。一天，我在一家鞋店买了一双皮鞋，店员告诉我这鞋实行“三包”。四天后这鞋坏了，我很生气，回到鞋店想要回我的钱。但店员不想赔钱，他说，“三包”就是保留三天。[审题谋篇]体裁记叙文时态一般过去时为主主题买鞋人称第一人称为主结构第一段：介绍买鞋的情况；第二段：叙述回鞋店维权的经历。[遣词造句]Ⅰ.对接单元词汇1．穿坏的；用旧的2．取回；要回3．使某人感到震惊4．遵守诺言bewornoutgetbackmakesbastonishedkeepone'spromiseⅡ.巧用单元句式、语法(一)完成句子1．那里的售货员告诉我这鞋实行三包。Andthesellertheretoldme_____________________________________________．2．我问他为什么不信守承诺。Iaskedhim．hewouldhave“threeguarantees”whyhedidn'tkeephispromisefortheshoes(二)句式升级3．Butonlyfourdayslatertheshoeswerewornout.Iwasangryandreturnedtotheshop.Ihopedtogetbackmymoney.(用so和非谓语动词改写句子)Butonlyfourdayslatertheshoeswerewornout，soIwasangryandreturnedtotheshophopingtogetbackmymoney.4．HeknewIhadkepttheshoesforfourdays.Hedidn'twanttocompensateme.Itmademeastonished.(用时间状语从句和定语从句改写句子)WhenheknewIhadkepttheshoesforfourdays，hedidn'twanttocompensateme，whichmademeastonished.[妙笔成篇]【参考范文】ThreeGuaranteesOnedayIboughtapairofleathershoesinashoeshop.Andthesellertheretoldmehewouldhave“threeguarantees”fortheshoes.Ilefttheshophappily.Butonlyfourdayslatertheshoeswerewornout，soIwasangryandreturnedtotheshophopingtogetbackmymoney.Itoldhimwhathadhappenedtomyshoes.WhenheknewIhadkepttheshoesforfourdays，hedidn'twanttocompensateme,whichmademeastonished.Iaskedhimwhyhedidn'tkeephispromise.Butthesellersaid，“Doyouunderstandthemeaningofthe‘threeguarantees’？Itmeanstheshoescanonlybekeptforthreedays！”Whatafoolishexplanationtothe“threeguarantees”！