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Unit11TheMediaSectionⅦWriting——如何写调查报告写作技法指导[文体指导]本单元的写作要求是就某一社会问题写信给媒体陈述自己的观点，它应符合一般书信的格式。英文书信的构成可分为五个部分：1．问候：通常以Dear开头；2．介绍写信的意图：通常是开门见山地说清写信的目的，不需要过多的客套话；3．正文：说清楚要表达的意见或事实，注意要条理清晰，言简意赅；4．结束语：是正式的结束语，通常表达对收到对方回信的期盼；5．落款：正式信件的落款要用较客气的词汇，下方的姓名要写全称，字迹要清楚。[亮点句式]1．Ilikeitverymuchmainlyforthefollowingtworeasons.我非常喜欢它主要是因为下面的两个原因。2．Asastudent,Isuggestthat...作为一名学生，我建议……3．Iwouldliketosuggestthat...我想建议……4．Iamwritingtoexpressmyviewsconcerning...我写信来是要表达有关我对……的看法。5．Youhaveaskedformyadvicewithregardto...andIwilltrytomakesomesuggestions.你问我有关……的事情，我会尝试着提出一些建议。6．Itseemstomethatyoucould...我认为你可以……7．Ithinkitwouldbemorebeneficialifyoucould...我想如果你能……，可能会更好。8．Ibelieveyouwilltakemyadviceintoaccount.我相信你会认真考虑我的建议的。9．Ihopeyouwillfindtheseproposals/suggestions/recommendationspractical/useful/helpful.我希望这些建议/意见/看法对你来说实用/有用/有帮助。满分佳作构建[写作任务]假设你是Sam，上周买了一本英汉词典，发现有质量以及服务问题，要求更换，但遇到麻烦，因此你想用英文给《二十一世纪英文报》报社编辑写信反映情况。词数100个左右。信中要点：1．书页缺少，印刷错误影响阅读理解；2．要求更换，但书店工作人员态度差，拒绝更换，否认质量问题；3．希望报社呼吁服务行业提高服务质量。[审题谋篇]体裁书信话题提高服务质量时态一般过去时一般现在时人称第一人称为主结构第一部分：向报社反映你去书店买词典的遭遇，表明你的意图。第二部分：介绍你在书店购物的经过和发现的问题。第三部分：表达你的观点和看法，并提出合理的建议。[遣词造句]Ⅰ.对接单元词汇1．______编辑2．______要求，请求3．_______有害的4．________态度5．_________________________把……考虑在内6．__________真诚地editordemandharmfulattitudetake···intoconsiderationfaithfullyⅡ.巧用单元句式、语法(一)完成句子1．_____________________________________________________________________________________________到家后仔细读这本书，我发现缺少了好几页。Ireachedhomeandreaditcarefully.Ifoundseveralpagesweremissing.2．_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________无论店员怎么说，但词典的质量差而且服务不好是很明显的。这对我产生了影响，而且也将对其他消费者产生危害。(nomatterwhat引导让步状语从句)Nomatterwhatthestaffsays，itisclearthatthedictionaryisoflowqualityandtheserviceisworse.Ithashadaneffectonmeandwillbeharmfultotheotherconsumers.3．______________________________________________________________________________________________但是一些服务不能达到标准，而且店员的态度需要改变。(needdoing)Someservicesfailtoachievethestandard.Theattitudeofthestaffneedschanging.4．______________________________________________众所周知，今天的市场要求更好的服务。(as引导非限制性定语从句)5．_______________________________________________________________________________________________我们应当尽一切可能来维护消费者的权力和利益。(用定语从句及aswellas)Asweallknow，today'smarketdemandsbetterservice.Weshoulddoeverythingwecantoprotecttheconsumers'rightsaswellasinterests.(二)句式升级6．用不定式作结果状语改写句1_________________________________________________________________________________________________Ireachedhomeandreaditcarefully，onlytofindseveralpagesweremissing.7．用which引导的非限制性定语从句合并句2___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Nomatterwhatthestaffsays，itisclearthatthedictionaryisoflowqualityandtheserviceisworse，whichhashadaneffectonmeandwillbeharmfultotheotherconsumers.8．用and将3合为并列句__________________________________________________________________________________________________Someservicesfailtoachievethestandardandtheattitudeofthestaffneedschanging.[妙笔成篇]____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】Deareditor，Iamwritingtocomplainaboutabookstoreanditsservice.LastweekIboughtanEnglishChinesedictionaryinabookstorenearmyhome.Ireachedhomeandreaditcarefully，onlytofindseveralpagesweremissing.SoIwenttothebookstoretorequireforareplacement.However，thestaffofthebookstoreturneddownmyrequestrudely.Nomatterwhatthestaffsays，itisclearthatthedictionaryisoflowqualityandtheserviceisworse，whichhashadaneffectonmeandwillbeharmfultootherconsumers.Asweallknow，today'smarketdemandsbetterservice.Butsomeservicesfailtoachievethestandardandtheattitudeofthestaffneedschanging.Weshoulddoeverythingwecantoprotecttheconsumers'rightsaswellasinterests.Ibelieveyouwilltakemyadviceintoconsideration.Ilookforwardtoreadingmorearticlesaboutimprovementofserviceinyournewspaper.Yoursfaithfully，Sam