2019-2020学年高中英语 Unit 7 The Sea 7-6 Writing课件 北师大版必

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Unit7TheSeaWriting如何写景点观光(报告)[感悟范文]假定你是李华,你的美国朋友Sarah打算暑期来北京旅游,来信询问改建后前门大街的情况。请你写封回信,简单介绍以下内容:(1)简况:长800余米、600多年历史、300余家商铺;(2)位置:天安门广场南面;(3)交通:公共汽车17、69、59等路,地铁2号线;(4)特色:步行街、当当车、茶馆、剧院等。参考词汇:步行街pedestrianstreet当当车trolleycar地铁subway注意:(1)词数100左右,开头语已为你写好;(2)可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。DearSarah,ThankyouforyourletteraskingabouttherebuiltQianmenStreet.Hereissomethingaboutit.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Yours,LiHua[范文]Dear_Sarah,Thank_you_for_your_letter_asking_about_the_rebuilt_Qianmen_Street._Here_is_something_about_it.QianmenStreetisafamousstreetofover600years.①Alongthis800meterstreet,therearemorethan300shops.②AsthestreetisinthecenterofBeijing,justtothesouthofTian'anmenSquare,it'sveryconvenienttogettherebybus.YoumaytakeBusesNo.17,69or59.SubwayLine2hasastoptheretoo.③QianmenStreetisapedestrianstreet,buttherearetrolleycarstotakeyounotonlytotheshops,butalsototheatresandteahouseswhereyoucanexperienceatrulyChinesewayoflife.I'msureyou'lllikeit.Yours,Li_Hua[技法讨论]景点观光报告的写作可按以下步骤进行:1.依照报告的题头格式,写出报告的收件人和发件人,报告日期和写作主题。2.正文一般由以下四部分组成:①总体介绍该景点的基本情况,如:所处位置以及面积大小等;②介绍该景点好的方面;③指出该景点所存在的问题;④最后得出结论,总结说明该景点哪些地方值得游览,哪些地方不值得游览,并提出注意事项。[黄金表达]1.总体方面①...issituated/locatedin/on/at...②...belongstothefirstclasspreservedarea.2.优点方面①Ithasconvenienttransportationandbeautifulviews.②...awonderfulandsplendidlandscapewithaculturalheritage.③...afeastforyoureyesandtakesyourbreathaway.3.存在问题方面①...heavytrafficandcrowdedpeopleinpeakseasonwithlongqueuesandlittleparkinglot...②...restaurantorcaféoffersexpensiveandterriblefood.4.总结概括①Itisagreatplacetogoandyouaresuretoendupenjoyingyourself.②Pleasegoto...,especiallytosee...;howeverdon'tgoto...[亮点分析]亮点一:本文作者行文流畅,表达地道,词汇丰富,句式多变,衔接自然,语气亲切可信,语言准确而有依据。亮点二:本文使用了①therebe句型;③定语从句,简单句与复合句交替使用,使文章显得错落有致,这点不仅使文章在形式上增加了美感,而且使文章读起来朗朗上口。亮点三:本文恰当使用了②inthecenterof,tothesouthof,beconvenient,③notonly...butalso,atrulyChinesewayoflife等短语,提升了文章档次。[类文演练]假设你是一名导游,陪同某外国旅游团参观八达岭长城。车到达长城脚下,下车前你对大家作必要的介绍和交代。主要包括:1.简单介绍八达岭长城(长城已被评选为世界新七大奇迹之一,八达岭长城是万里长城最著名的一段,已接待中外游人逾千万);2.在长城逗留两个半小时,17∶50离开;3.车在长城脚下等候,记住车号,准时返回;4.贵重物品随身携带,下车前关上车窗;5.祝大家玩得愉快。注意:1.必须包括以上所有的内容要点,但不要逐句翻译;2.词数:100个左右。HereistheGreatWall.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________[联想词汇]1.众所周知______________________________2.世界新七大奇迹之一______________________________3.到目前为止______________________________________4.数以百万的______________________________________5.两个半小时______________________________________6.也就是说________________________________________7.下车____________________________________________8.玩得愉快________________________________________答案1.itisknowntousthat/asisknowntousall2.oneoftheNewSevenWondersoftheWorld3.sofar/uptonow4.millionsof5.twohoursandahalf/twoandahalfhours6.thatistosay/inotherwords7.getoff8.haveagoodtime[连词成句]1.众所周知,八达岭是长城最著名的一段,长城已成为世界新七大奇迹之一。________,BadalingisthemostfamouspartoftheGreatWall,whichhasbecomeoneoftheNewSevenWondersoftheWorld.________BadalingisthemostfamouspartoftheGreatWall,whichhasbecomeoneoftheNewSevenWondersoftheWorld.________BadalingisthemostfamouspartoftheGreatWall,whichhasbecomeoneoftheNewSevenWondersoftheWorld.2.到目前为止,已经有数百万的游客游览了长城。________,millionsofvisitorshavevisitedtheGreatWall.________,tensofthousandsofvisitorshavevisitedtheGreatWall.3.也就是说,我们要在17∶50离开。________,we'llleaveat17∶50.________,we'llleaveat17∶50.4.请随身携带贵重物品,在下车前关闭所有的窗户。Pleasetakeyourvaluableswithyouand________.Pleasetakeyourvaluableswithyouand________.答案1.Asisknowntousall;Itisknowntousallthat;Whatisknowntousallisthat2.Sofar;Uptonow3.Thatistosay;Inotherwords4.closeallthewindowsbeforegettingoff;makesureallthewindowsareclosedbeforeyougetoff[连句成章]________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________答案Here_is_the_Great_Wall.Asisknowntousall,Badalingisthemostfamouspartofit,whichhasbecomeoneoftheNewSevenWondersoftheWorld.Sofar,millionsofvisitorshavevisitedit.We'llstayherefortwohoursandahalf.Thatistosay,we'llleaveat17∶50.ThebuswillbewaitingforusatthefootoftheGreatWall.Pleaserememberourbusnumberandbebackontime.Pleasetakeyourvaluableswithyouandcloseallthewindowsbeforegettingoff.Haveagoodtime!

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