2019-2020学年高中英语 Unit 5 Rhythm Section Ⅶ Writing ——

SectionⅦWriting——音乐会评论[写作技法指导]每当我们读完一本书、看完一场电影或听完一场音乐会，我们或多或少都会有一些感想，如果我们把这些感想写出来那就成了评论。下面我们就以听一场音乐会为例，来学习一下写音乐评论的方法。第一步：我们要陈述一下这次音乐会的信息，例如，音乐会的类型(是摇滚还是爵士乐)、歌手、乐队、时间、地点；表演者的演技；音乐、声音及灯光效果；听众的反应等。第二步：把列举的内容用适当的句型连缀成句，然后再用适当的连接词连句成篇即可。积“黄金”词句，写高分文章1．Ontheeveningof...，sb.watchedtheconcertgivenby...2．Duringthe3hourconcert,...sangalotofsongs/playedthepiano/guitar...3．...showthathe/shehasagreattalentformusic.4．Theaudienceenjoyedhis/herperformanceverymuch.5．Everyonefeltexcitedattheperformance.6．Theatmosphereduringtheconcertwasextremelyexciting.[三步写作规范][题目要求]昨天晚上你去莲花体育馆(LotusStadium)观看了香港歌星张学友(JackyCheung)的演唱会，请你根据要点提示写一篇短文。要点提示：1．场内座无虚席，音响系统极佳，张学友的演唱很精彩；2．虽然天气很热，观众还是很开心，全场欢呼，跟着唱；3．演唱会上他边唱边跳，虽然已50多岁了，还是充满激情；4．张学友是20世纪80年代走红的香港歌手，他的歌深受大家的欢迎，尤其是“70后”；5．希望有机会再次参加他的演唱会。注意：1.可适当增减细节，使行文连贯；2．词数：100左右。第一步：搜索词汇1．参加音乐会_______________2．流行；受欢迎_________________3．音响系统_____________4．观众__________5．欢呼_______6．激情________attendaconcertbepopularamongsoundsystemaudiencecheerpassion第二步：由词造句1．昨天晚上我去莲花体育馆观看了香港歌星张学友的演唱会。①IattendedtheconcertatLotusStadiumlastnight.TheconcertwasgivenbyJackyCheungatLotusStadiumlastnight.JackyCheungisapopsingerfromHongKong.②Iattendedtheconcert______fromHongKong,atLotusStadiumlastnight.givenbyJackyCheung,apopsinger2．张学友20世纪80年代出名，他的歌曲深受大家的喜爱，尤其是“70后”。①JackyCheungbecamewell­knowninthe1980s.Hissongsareverypopularamongpeople.Peopleborninthe1970slovehissongsspecially.②JackyCheungbecamewell­knowninthe1980s,_______areverypopularespeciallyamongthosewhowereborninthe1970s.whosesongs3．虽然天气很热，观众还是很开心。①Itwasveryhotinthesummertime.Alltheaudiencehadaverygoodtime.②Itwasveryhotinthesummertime,alltheaudiencehadaverygoodtime.but第三步：连句成篇IattendedtheconcertgivenbyJackyCheung,apopsingerfromHongKong,atLotusStadiumlastnight.JackyCheungbecamewell­knowninthe1980s,whosesongsareverypopularespeciallyamongthosewhowereborninthe1970s.Therewasnotasingleemptyseatattheconcert.Toourdelight,thesoundsystemwasexcellent.Hissingingwaswonderful.What'smore,JackyCheungalwaysdancedwhilesinging.Itwasveryhotinthesummertime,butalltheaudiencehadaverygoodtime.Wewerecheeringandsangalongtonearlyeverysongthroughouttheconcert.Althoughhehasbeenmorethan50yearsold,heisfullofpassion.IwishIcouldhaveanotherchancetoattendhisconcert.