2019-2020学年高中英语 Unit 5 First aid 5 Section Ⅴ Writi

SectionⅤWritingUnit5Firstaid急救说明文体感知1．文体特点(1)急救说明：把某一意外事故的急救方法介绍给读者，使读者了解这一方法的具体操作步骤。(2)明确文章结构：首先明确具体的事故，其次以事实为依据给出正确、科学的具有可操作性的急救措施。2．亮点句式①Weshouldcheckwhetherthepersoncanbreatheornot.②Usethemouth­to­mouthmethodwithinfiveminutes.③Laythepatientdownonacoatorsleepingbagifpossible.④Coverthewoundwithabandageorapieceofdrycleancloth.⑤Don’ttrytomovethepersonunlessheisindanger.⑥Don’tgivethepersonanythingtoeatordrink.3．写作模板Inourdailylife,wesometimes________orsomeothersevereillness.Thefollowingaresometips/suggestionswecanfollowtohelpthesepeopleonurgentoccasions.Firstly,youmust________.Don’t________.Secondly,payattentionto________.Ifnecessary,________.Thirdly,________.Finally,staywiththeinjuredpersonandcomforthimuntilthearrivalofthepoliceandambulance.写作要求假设你是李华，你们学校的英语网站正面向全校学生征集有关急救常识的英文稿件。请你给该网站投稿，介绍交通事故方面的急救常识。内容包括：1．首先保持镇静；2．检查伤者呼吸情况，呼吸困难要实施人工呼吸；3．如伤者有出血情况要用布按压止血，然后等候救护车及警察的帮助。注意：1．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；2．词数100左右。审题谋篇体裁说明文话题急救知识时态一般现在时人称第二人称结构首段：对需要说明的对象作总的概括介绍：主体部分，具体说明respondassistancewoundcheckoutpayattentionto词汇推敲1．反应vi.________________2．帮助n.________________3．伤口n.________________4．核实________________5．注意________________KnowinghowtorespondmakeabigdifferencePayattentiontohavingtrouble遣词造句1．完成句子①知道如何正确地应对起着重要的作用。_______________________properlycan___________________．②注意此人的呼吸情况，尤其要关注他呼吸是否困难。__________________theperson’sbreathing,especiallyifheis__________________gettinghisbreath.Ifnecessarycomforthimuntilthearrivalof③如果有必要的话，要实施人工呼吸进行紧急救助。______________,usethemouth­to­mouthtechniquetogiveimmediateassistance.④最后，一直陪着伤者，安慰他直到救护车及警察的到来。Finally,staywiththeinjuredpersonand________________________________thepoliceandambulance.Herearesomerulesthatyoucanfollow.Itisknowinghowtorespondproperlythat2．句式升级⑤Herearesomerules.Youcanfollowtheserules.(用定语从句合并句子)___________________________________⑥Knowinghowtorespondproperlycanmakeabigdifference.(把该句转换成强调句)_____________________________________________canmakeabigdifference.妙笔成篇____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Onepossibleversion：FirstAidforAccidentsIfyouhappentowitnessanaccident,whatshouldyoudotosaveotherpeople’slives?Knowinghowtorespondproperlycanmakeabigdifference.Herearesomerulesthatyoucanfollow.Firstly,youmuststaycalmandcallthepoliceandanambulance.Speaktothepersontofindoutasmuchasyoucanabouthisinjuries.Next,payattentiontotheperson’sbreathing,especiallyifheishavingtroublegettinghisbreath.Ifnecessary,usethemouth­to­mouthtechniquetogiveimmediateassistance.Besides,iftheinjuredpersonisbleeding,pressacleantowelorclothontohiswound.Finally,staywiththeinjuredpersonandcomforthimuntilthearrivalofthepoliceandambulance.你校英语网站将开辟“急救知识介绍”专栏。请你根据所给提示，用英语写一篇短文，介绍被狗咬伤后如何实施急救，然后发表在该网站上。1．若伤口流血，不要止血；2．五分钟后，若流血不止，拨打求救电话。若不再流血，用肥皂水冲洗伤口约五分钟；3．给伤口消毒(disinfect)；4．如有必要，注射狂犬疫苗(rabiesvaccine)。注意：1．词数100左右；2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________Onepossibleversion：Dogbitesarecommoninourdailylife.Theywillcausepain,swellingorbleeding.What’sworse,thevictimsmaygetinfected.However,knowingsomefirstaidknowledgecanmakeabigdifference.Thestepsareasfollows.Firstofall,don’tbeafraidtoletthewoundbleedunlessyou’velostalotofblood.Theflowofbloodoutofthewoundwillhelptocleanit.Afterfiveminutes,seeifyoucanstopthebleedingthroughdirectpressure.Ifitdoesn’tstop,callforemergencyhelp.Ifitdoesstop,cleanthewoundunderrunningwaterwithmildsoapforfiveminutes.Thendisinfectthewoundthoroughly.Finally,ifnecessary,getarabiesvaccine.本部分内容讲解结束按ESC键退出全屏播放