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SectionⅤWriting—建议信[写作技法指导]本单元的写作任务是建议信，它属于应用文。一般包括称呼、正文、结尾和署名四个部分。其基本框架为：1．开头——提出写建议信的缘由。2．主体——写出建议的具体内容，并指出你所提建议可能会带来的好处。3．结尾——提出希望自己的建议被采纳的想法。积“黄金”词句，写高分文章一、常用的开头语1．I'mgladtoreceiveyourletteraskingformysuggestionsabouthowtoappreciateartwell.很高兴收到你的来信，询问我如何很好地欣赏艺术。2．Iamgladtoknowthatyouaregoingtoentercollegeanditismygreatpleasuretogiveyousomesuggestionsofchoosingyourmajor.我很高兴得知你将进入大学并且很荣幸能就专业选择方面给你提一些建议。3．Itisindeedawonderfulideaandeveryonehopesforitssuccess.这真的是一个好主意而且每个人都希望它能成功。4．IhavelearnedthatyouhavesometroubleinlearningartandIwouldliketoofferyouthefollowingsuggestions.我知道你在艺术学习方面有困难，因此我想给你提如下一些建议。5．Concerningyourrequest,Iwouldliketooffermyadviceonhowtokeepfit.对于你的请求，我想就如何保持健康提出我的建议。二、主体部分常用表达1．Youshouldeatfoodwithlessfat.你应该吃脂肪含量少的食物。2．Inthefirstplace,Iwouldalsorecommendabalanceddiet.首先，我会推荐均衡饮食。3．Ifinditnecessarytotakedownnoteswhilelistening.我发现有必要边听边记笔记。4．Whynotdrinkalittle,exercise,stopsmokingandeatmorefruitandvegetables?为何不少喝点酒，参加锻炼，不抽烟，多吃水果和蔬菜呢？5．Ifeelthatitwouldbebeneficialtoexpressmyviewsconcerningyourfatness.我觉得就你的肥胖问题表达我的观点可能会很有用。6．HeadvisedthatI(should)eatlessatnight.他建议我晚饭时少吃。7．仔细研究两个城市的信息后，我建议你选择A市居住。①Afteracarefulstudyoftheinformationaboutthetwocities,IsuggestyouchoosetoliveinCityA.②AfterIhavecarefullystudiedtheinformationaboutthetwocities,IsuggestyouchoosetoliveinCityA.③Afteracarefulstudyoftheinformationaboutthetwocities,IadviseyoutochoosetoliveinCityA.8．闲暇之余，你可以有很多地方休闲娱乐。①Inyoursparetime，youcanenjoyyourselfinmanyplaces.②Therearemanyplacesforentertainmentwhereyoucanenjoyyourselfinyoursparetime.③Manyplacesforentertainmentwillofferyouachancetoenjoyyourselfinyoursparetime.三、常用的结束语1．Inmyopinion,itwouldbewiseofyoutoaccepthisadvice.依我之见，采纳他的建议是您的明智之举。2．Idohopeyouwillconsidermysuggestion.真心希望你能考虑我的建议。3．Ihopeyouwillfindtheseproposalsuseful,andIwouldbereadytodiscussthismatterwithyoutofurtherdetails.我希望这些建议对你有所帮助，并且乐于和你就此事进行进一步的交流。4．Ihopeyouwillfindtheseproposals/suggestions/recommendationspractical/useful/helpful.我希望这些建议/意见/看法对你来说实用/有用/有帮助。[三步写作规范][题目要求]假如你是李华，请根据下表内容给中国野生动物保护协会CWCA(ChinaWildlifeConservationAssociation)的会长写一封建议信。问题1990年藏羚羊的数量大约为100万只，现在只剩不到10万只，数量急剧减少原因为了获取藏羚羊的皮毛，牟取暴利(makegreatprofits)，非法捕杀藏羚羊仍然时有发生建议利用贵协会的影响力加大对藏羚羊保护的宣传(publicize)力度；增加用于藏羚羊保护的资金；建议贵协会派出一些志愿者来协助保护藏羚羊第一步：对接单元词汇1．保护____________________2．皮毛____________________3．非法捕杀____________________4．……的数量____________________5．从……减少到……____________________6．采取措施____________________7．向……提供……____________________protectfurhuntandkillillegallythenumber/amountof...decreasefrom...to...takemeasuresprovide...for...第二步：巧用单元语法和句型1．完成句子①据报道，为了获取藏羚羊的皮毛，很多的藏羚羊正在遭到非法捕杀。ItisoftenreportedthattoomanyTibetanantelopes________________________illegallyfortheirfur.②通过贩卖它们的皮毛，非法捕猎者能获取高额利润。________________,theillegalhunterscanmakegreatprofits.arebeinghuntedandkilledBysellingthefur③1990年藏羚羊的数量大约为100万只，现在只剩不到10万只，数量急剧减少。ThenumberoftheTibetanantelopesrapidlyabout1,000,000in1990lessthan100,000atpresent.④我们应该加大对保护藏羚羊重要性的宣传。WeprotectingtheTibetanantelopes.isdecreasingfromshouldpublicizetheimportanceofto2．句式升级⑤把句①中Itisoftenreportedthat...改成as引导的非限制性定语从句Asisoftenreported,toomanyTibetanantelopesarebeinghuntedandkilledillegallyfortheirfur.⑥用过渡词asaresult连接②、③句⑦把句④改成被动语态Bysellingthefur,theillegalhunterscanmakegreatprofits;asaresult,thenumberoftheTibetanantelopesisdecreasingrapidlyfromabout1,000,000in1990tolessthan100,000atpresent.TheimportanceofprotectingtheTibetanantelopesshouldbepublicized.第三步：连接过渡成篇DearPresident，I'mwritingtogivesomesuggestionstofurtherprotecttheTibetanantelopes.Asisoftenreported,toomanyTibetanantelopesarebeinghuntedandkilledillegallyfortheirfur.Bysellingthefur,theillegalhunterscanmakegreatprofits;asaresult,thenumberoftheTibetanantelopesisdecreasingrapidlyfromabout1,000,000in1990tolessthan100,000atpresent.Immediatemeasuresmustbetakentosolvethepresentsituation.First,theimportanceofprotectingtheTibetanantelopesshouldbepublicizedthroughyourassociation.Second,wouldyouprovidemoremoneyfortheconservationoftheTibetanantelopes？Lastbutnotleast,IsuggestthatsomevolunteersbesenttheretohelpprotecttheTibetanantelopes.ThesearemysuggestionsandIhopetheycouldmeansomethingforabetterfutureoftheTibetanantelopes.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yourssincerely，LiHua谢谢观看