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Unit4HelpingpeoplearoundtheworldSectionⅦWriting——如何写建议信写作技法指导[文体指导]建议信是针对某事向收信人提出建议和忠告的一种文体。建议信有可能是写给个人——就遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法，也可能是写给某个组织或机构——就改进其服务提出建议或忠告。建议信要写明写信的原因、建议的内容、提出建议的理由，提出的理由要合情合理，语气一定要和缓。基本结构1．首段：表明写作意图。陈述事由，简单介绍自己，注意语气。2．主体段落：提出具体建议。同时用事实来证明建议的正确性和必要性。3．尾段：对提出的建议进行总结，表达希望建议得以采纳，问题得以解决的愿望。[亮点句式]1．开头：I'msorrytoknowthatyouhavesometrouble/difficulty/problemsin...afterreadingyourletter.Youaskedmeformyadviceon...andit'smygreatpleasuretogiveyousomesuggestions/advice/tips.Thanksfortrustingme.I'dliketogiveyousomeadvice.Iamwritingtoexpressmyviewsconcerning...Iamwritingtosharesomeadviceon...withyou.However，thesituationiseasytochangeifyoutakemyadvice.Hereareafewsuggestions/tipswhichIthinkmaybehelpfultoyou.2．给出建议：Ifeelthatitwouldbemorebeneficial/helpfulifyoucould...Iwouldliketosuggestthat...Inmyopinion，youshould...Itisbetterto...Istronglyrecommendthatyou...Itdoeshelpifyou...Itisagoodideaforyouto...IfIwereyou，Iwould...You'dbetter...3．建议的理由：Thereasonwhy...isthat...Itnotonlycan...butalsocan...Itisbecause...Thereasonforitisthat...4．结尾：Thesearepersonalsuggestions，butIdohopethattheywillbeofsomehelp.Ihopeyouwillmakegreatprogressin...astimegoesby.Iwillbemorethanhappytoseeimprovementsyoucanmakein...Iamlookingforwardtoyourgoodnews.Ihopeyouwillfindthesesuggestions/thisadviceofsomeuse/help.Iwillbereadytodiscussthismatterinmoredetail.Ifyouhavemoreproblems，pleasedon'thesitatetocontactme.5．常用衔接词：(1)firstly/first，secondly/second，lastbutnotleast，tostartwith，finally，intheend；(2)ontheonehand，ontheother(hand)；notonly...butalso；(3)what'smore，inaddition(to)，besides满分佳作构建[写作任务]假如你是李华，请根据下表内容给中国野生动物保护协会CWCA(ChinaWildlifeConservationAssociation)的会长写一封建议信。问题1990年藏羚羊(antelope)的数量大约为100万只，现在只剩不到10万只，数量急剧减少原因为了获取藏羚羊的皮毛，牟取暴利，非法捕杀藏羚羊的现象仍然时有发生建议利用贵协会的影响力加大对藏羚羊保护的宣传力度；增加用于藏羚羊保护的资金；建议贵协会派出一些志愿者来协助保护藏羚羊注意：词数100左右。[审题谋篇]体裁建议信时态一般现在时主题建议保护藏羚羊人称第一、三人称结构第一步：表明写作意图，陈述事由。第二步：提出具体建议。同时用事实来证明建议的正确性和必要性。第三步：对提出的建议进行总结。[遣词造句]Ⅰ.对接单元词汇1．n．(羊等的)绒，毛2．凭借3．获得4．adj.非法的5．结果6．产生大的影响woolbymeansofobtainillegalasaresultmakeagreatdifferenceⅡ.巧用单元句式、语法(一)完成句子1．据报道，为了羊毛，大量的藏羚羊正被非法猎杀。_________________toomanyTibetanantelopesarebeinghuntedandkilledillegallyfortheirwool.2．显而易见，那些非法捕猎者可以获得大量利润。Clearly，theillegalhunters_____________________．canobtaingreatprofitsItisreportedthat3．我建议一些志愿者被派往那里帮助保护藏羚羊。IsuggestthatsomevolunteersprotecttheTibetanantelopes.4．但愿我的建议对藏羚羊更好的未来会有重大影响。IfonlytothebetterfutureoftheTibetanantelopes.mysuggestionscouldmakeabigdifferenceshouldbesenttheretohelp(二)句式升级5．用Itisclearthat...结构改写句26．用that引导表语从句改写句37．用Ihopethat...改写句4Itisclearthattheillegalhunterscanobtaingreatprofits.Mysuggestionsisthatsomevolunteers(should)besenttheretohelpprotecttheTibetanantelopes.IhopemysuggestionscouldmakeabigdifferencetothebetterfutureoftheTibetanantelopes.[妙笔成篇][参考范文]DearPresident，I'mwritingtogivesomesuggestionstofurtherprotecttheTibetanantelopes.ItisreportedthattoomanyTibetanantelopesarebeinghuntedandkilledillegallyfortheirwool.Itisclearthattheillegalhunterscanobtaingreatprofitsbymeansofsellingthewool.Asaresult，thenumberoftheTibetanantelopesisdecreasingrapidlyfromabout1，000，000in1990tolessthan100，000atpresent.Immediatemeasuresmustbetakentosolvethepresentproblem.First，theimportanceofprotectingtheTibetanantelopesshouldbepublicizedthroughyourassociation.Second，wouldyouprovidemoremoneyfortheconservationoftheTibetanantelopes？Lastbutnotleast，mysuggestionisthatsomevolunteers(should)besenttheretohelpprotecttheTibetanantelopes.ThesearemysuggestionsandIhopetheycouldmakeabigdifferencetothebetterfutureoftheTibetanantelopes.Lookingforwardtoyourreply.Yourssincerely，LiHua